
Adoptive Father Iron Man, I Am the Great Inventor
养父钢铁侠,我才是大发明家
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 70k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Chapter 11 is silent for me. In Invincible and Suppressing Combat Power, the protagonist chooses Suppressing Combat Power. This is not a scientific article at all, but a chaotic article.
Authors should not try to write characters whose IQ exceeds their own. Will reveal one's intelligence
I wonder if the author's IQ is also improving? 😜😜😜
From the fifth chapter, I started to go crazy and write random self-titled articles. The plot is non-existent, and the invention is only limited by the number of words.
Just for fun, it feels like it polluted my eyes 😐
Oh😲, skip the basics and take off directly 🥵
It's written in a mess, I can't even read it, it's just a self-help post.
What are you writing?
The protagonist's technology and abilities developed rapidly in the early stage. I originally thought it was an invincible novel, but the author crazily suppressed the protagonist and felt that the plot was about to jump.
The protagonist was ready to stop being a human being from the beginning. I thought it was about technological farming, but I didn't expect it was about self-pleasure.
We all have gems of wisdom. We must learn to invent on our own and have our own unique technology. Don't always rely on the system.
How about we cure the disease first and then write the book?
It hurts me to look at it and I'm mentally disturbed
Inexplicable self-pleasure, if you can't write a book, don't write it
After reading the comments, read the first sentence of the introduction? Improve from 0? ? ?
So weird, this article has scratched my cerebral cortex
There are no later novels
You have to mix too many things from the world system into it, or you have to build the basic framework and power system, and now the wisdom gem is only a few tenths of a percent and the multidimensional universe and animated characters appear, and you still write like this to 100%? This is bound to collapse later in the writing. Readers' senses are very poor. Readers may not understand all the content you know. What do you want to do by filling it all in? If the basic introduction and background description are not detailed, who can understand it?
The whole article is about self-pleasure
How boring is it? I sacrificed my hands in order to dig a basement. How insane do you have to be to do this?
There is no invention, only madness. I have only read Chapter 12 and I can't stand it any longer.
Previously, I only saw that Iron Man was the brother or uncle of the protagonist, but now someone actually writes that Iron Man is the father? It's outrageous. The author asked Iron Man to be his father. Don't you dislike the stench of this foreigner? If you don't understand the author, you can ask knowledgeable book friends. They should know how bad these foreigners are.
... I was deceived by the title of the book... It's a mess~ It's like a dozen ants of different types building a nest together... In short, it's hard to read even if you can't understand it.
Brother, why did you sew the emperor in?
This is a work in a niche niche, so I really can't please everyone, sorry...
The author's ability is limited. He just wants to share what he finds interesting. He doesn't dare to advertise under other books, he doesn't dare to discuss the plot with the editor, and he doesn't dare to ask for recommendations from senior authors. He just wants to write a story seriously and to the best of his ability. I can promise not to delete any comments! Whether it is good or bad, although there are indeed many bad ones, I am willing to accept it with an open mind and respond seriously. What I wrote made many people feel uncomfortable. I was really sad about this. I couldn't sleep at night and couldn't find a solution. There is no way, what cannot be done is really impossible, and it will be useless no matter how much the young author wants to change. I can only promise that this book will not be a eunuch, and will give it a happy ending, whether dead or alive... Anyway, I'm sorry again, I really tried my best.
Your 360-degree spin will make you collapse, okay? 😰
This author lets himself go too much
Brain: What the hell is this? Oh, it's shit! 💩💩💩 Me: I just want to taste the saltiness Brain: No🙅, run quickly! Me: I don't know why, but I'm getting more and more excited.