
Simultaneous Time Travel: People Are in Dragon Ball and Have Just Become Super Saiyans
同时穿越:人在龙珠,刚成超赛
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 116k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1d ago
- Source
- Qidian
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You mean Tang Hao has hundreds of combat power? The Great Demon King had hundreds of combat powers and could explode the moon with two fingers. Do you mean that Tang Hao, who can't even smash mountains, has such strength?
There is a saying, you fool me, I fool you, the plot has not been advanced, what about waiting for it to be released? Guess whether I can watch it or not
The sea, you damn thing is all water
It's really too watery and doesn't advance the plot at all.
Understand them
The updates are slow and the pace is slow No wonder so many people criticize you😒
We already have Douluo, so let's add another one🤣
Write three memories for one memory, two memories in a row, wait three days to update, all memories
Hundreds of combat powers destroy the moon. Even if the God King is not black, he only has tens of thousands of combat powers.
The qi in the Dragon Ball world has no effect at all on improving the body's essence. It only has destructive power. It's almost as funny as a mortal's spiritual practice. It's almost as funny that a mortal can't even block a laser without qi. It's just as funny as a mortal who has no magic power and will fall to death.
Water king
The sea is full of water. Just one Douluo has been filled with water for many chapters.
It's too watery. The first few pictures show watery stool being poured into my mouth. Even the low-level martial arts worlds and the female pornographic world in the first few chapters, I will recognize them if you write them.
It's too watery and full of nonsense! I wasn't happy either, I thought I was going to feel better, but ended up adding a bunch of nonsense and losing all my emotions! ! ! ! ! ! I thought a cool article would be to say something about whether it was unexpected or surprising, and then just crush it to death! It's best to let passers-by dig out the truth!
Brother, are you too boring? It gives me a headache, you know? And after all, the quantified combat power system this book gives him is very bad, and the comment section is now in a quarrel.
The first nine pictures have almost no plot, they are all settings and supplements.
The contrast between the fast-paced dungeon world story outline and the interspersed nonsense literature is too conspicuous... This is only the first ten chapters
When the Water King is alive, it is real water. After writing so many chapters, the protagonist only appears in a few chapters, all of which are filled with memories and shocks.
Author, stop disgusting readers. When will you kill them?
If the moisture content of the book normally found in the introduction is one, then the book has at least thirty
Are you from a female channel? So annoying
Did the author overestimate the Douluo? It is known that the Kame Immortal with more than a hundred combat power can push the moon (I remember he directly blew it up, but some people said he pushed it away, so let's push it away). Then in Douluo, when Tang Hao came to the rescue at the end of the game, he used the Explosive Ring and the Great Sumeru Hammer, which means that he exploded. Although the explosive blow was blocked frontally, the aftermath of his attack only destroyed a hall, not even a Wuhun City... And his attack was still the type of frontal bombardment (the Haotian Hammer has the same configuration), which means that the attack that destroyed the hall was similar to Due to the qi energy that spread after the fist hit, the qi energy aftershock only destroyed one hall... Then, author, think about the size and mass of the moon, and compare the size with the gymnasium in your image (it can play games and people watch, how can there be a stadium the size of a basketball court)... Let me talk about it, how do you think the title Douluo in Douluo Continent has a combat power of over 100?
A lot of nonsense
Seeing Douluo, I thought it would be a blast, and I was ready to watch the protagonist kill people randomly, but I still had to talk nonsense. After you have laid the groundwork for so long, what is coming is still the grounding. How can you make people watch it? It's so painful to see the tower🐴
In the original work, there is a conversation between Yu Xiaogang and Bibi Dong. Bibi Dong disgusts me to death. After Yu Xiaogang left, he desperately licked the things Yu Xiaogang used.
It's Douluo, I, you, are awesome. It's better to write about Douluo and Wudong. You, the author, are awesome.
World collection
If you have any ideas about the world you want to see, you can post them here. 🤓🤓🤓
I read Chapter 12 and I don't know what I read. It's all nonsense 😥
The comment section is really messed up by those who criticize Dragon Ball. No one in Dragon Ball except the God of Destruction can be a star. There are a lot of works edited by others, such as the Expressive Collection of Moon and Star, and there are a lot of them. They just want to force the clouds and then talk hard to make people laugh. Below are screenshots of the performance of Bakumotsu and Bakustar. Only the Bakumoon and Bakustar in the early Dragon Ball stage are taken. The mid- and late-stage Bakustar and Bakugalaxies are not. However, I mentioned that everyone who has seen the characters should know them, Frieza, the old version of Broly, and Kid Buu. Needless to say, Dragon Ball Super In the early stage of Dragon Ball, Goku Sennin's explosive moon performance in the Martial Arts Festival In the early stage of Dragon Ball Z, Little Gohan Ju Piccolo transformed into a monkey and exploded into the moon Vegeta's explosive performance in the early stages of Dragon Ball Z before he was cleared
What can be written in 1 chapter, you can write 10 chapters
In fact, Yu Xiaogang never deceived Bibi Dong. Even Bibi Dong was just a white-eyed wolf, and Yu Xiaogang was also totally shameless.
The Dragon Ball's aura has destructive power, but it cannot improve the essence of life at all. When longevity comes, you will die as usual
The writing is too messy, there are too many cuts from different perspectives, and there is no foreshadowing.