The Rebirth of the Nascent Soul Monk 1999

Lord Nascent Soul was reborn into a boy from a mountain village. His parents had just died in a mining accident, leaving only his elderly grandmother, young sister, and a bare home. This book is not the traditional little white text about rebirth and immortality. The protagonist uses the perspective of cultivation to understand the earth's culture and technology, and to seek the truth on earth.

Read it, don't like it, the original person is a child, the protagonist is not, but the Nascent Soul who has lived for more than 1,000 years. Where are his calmness, indifference, and means of handling problems? It makes my head hurt to look at it. The protagonist is Xuandu Zhenjun Yuanying, not his original self. The money stained with the blood of his father and mother is written in the beginning, and the villain relies on more than 1,000 years of experience. It is even more fragmented when it is written specifically. The protagonist's identity and performance are too fragmented.

Very well written, thank you, I have to work harder

Generally speaking, it can be seen that the structure is more academic and scientific. The advantage is that the writing method of the cloak of cultivation, technology and black technology is logically consistent, and it is very ingenious in exploring a new logic of technological cultivation. The shortcoming that is not a shortcoming is that the author may not have a clear understanding of geopolitics, economy, strategic deployment, prices, and technological levels at home and abroad around the millennium due to his age. The wrong rhythm and the use of this question body make it a bit difficult for people born in the 80s and 90s to get involved. Overall: The writing and drama are weak, but the combination of logic and creativity is good. It is recommended that after writing this book, the author can write this framework again in the 15-25 time period. The foundation and geopolitics of the 1990s are difficult for the author to write about. But the author should be able to grasp the sense of confidence of the current era. The content section does not need to be too depressing. This theme can amuse the top students. After all, the old monsters were reincarnated, so there wasn't much fuss.

Mom and dad go into the mine together? Even though the strong laborers are working in the mines, my sister still can't afford to eat. What's the point of doing this? The dangers and excitement of working in the mines? Can't afford to go to school due to a mining accident? Nascent Soul God Lord was so disheartened when he found out that he failed to transcend the tribulation and failed to cultivate, did he take drugs? Or is it a divine king who only needs a beautiful apprentice to maintain the stability of the Three Realms?

At first it was said to be a place of extraordinary spirits, and then I was able to draw talismans. I gave them an invisibility talisman, a thunder talisman and the like, but they were not captured and sliced ​​into pieces by the Guo family?

The writing style is not very good, and it forcibly creates an atmosphere of despair. The Nascent Soul stage boss feels as fragile as a mortal who has never cultivated immortality just because he was reborn in the land of the dead.

The author is extremely experienced. Either a master who plays the trumpet, or a veteran who doesn't stand up. The probability of wild newbies is low. The writing layout is different. Listen to the thunder in the silence. The attention to detail is particularly good.

After reading Chapter 13, the protagonist fainted three or four times, vomited blood, fell down, and then my grandma and sister kept worrying... This Nascent Soul is a bit disgusting.

The writing style is okay, but it has an old-school writing style, and the plot design is really bloody, and full of loopholes. A great Nascent Soul, unless he cultivates immortality through kneading elixirs, his perseverance and earthly feelings will impress him. Unless he completely forgets his memory and is reincarnated, like the protagonist, the author will either directly point it out, and his cultivation will be destroyed and his state of mind will be completely destroyed. But that's enough. . . . In summary, if it was popular ten years ago, it will be popular twenty years ago. Now,. . . . Just make do with it.

Personal language and emotional descriptions are slightly artificial. The old man has the intellectual disability of the old man, the verbosity of the old man, and some experiences brought by time. The writing is a bit one-sided. I can change the character creation if I have the mood. The idea is quite good, although it will be difficult to write in the later stage. I hope the author can work harder.

😡😡😡Don't worry about what happens next, it's disgusting at the beginning. Summary of various factors: In China in 1999, a remote area was surrounded by mountains and small villages. It was not isolated from the world → there were volunteer teachers → they knew where the county seat was. My parents worked in the mines together (earning hard money). The house at home was leaking. My 8-year-old sister did not have enough to eat when she was 5 or 6 years old. The staple food at home was corn mush or moldy old grain. . . Author, how do you combine these contradictory points? A single factor can provide a reasonable explanation. All kinds of things go against the grain together You might as well say that your parents are farmers all their lives. They are so poor that they have to be isolated from the world. They have dug mines and can't have enough to eat. The house leaks 😥 The thatched house doesn't leak. They also eat moldy old grains and make corn mush. How did they survive until the day when the protagonist travels through time? 😅😅😅

I really can't stand it when I come to the old Taoist apprenticeship. This is the way to write pretending to be 13 20 years ago.

No wonder I can't survive the catastrophe and my Taoist heart is not firm.

It would be better to set it to Qi training and foundation building. The character of the Yuanying old monster is not written out.

I think it is reasonable for the protagonist to fail in overcoming the tribulation. I even think that the protagonist is the second-generation disciple of the sect who relied on the treasures of heaven and earth to push him all the way up in the novel. It has been more than ten chapters, and the protagonist does not look like a Nascent Soul monk at all, he looks like a fool.

It might as well be written as some memory fragments of the Earth boy receiving the Nascent Soul cultivator.

The first few chapters of Xueba Wen, which is cloaked in the guise of cultivating immortals, are a bit lame. The soul of the thousand-year-old Nascent Soul monster is a bit neurotic. Thousands of years of accumulation can't be done without surprising.

After reading ten chapters, the protagonist's mind was shaken. The protagonist was a Nascent Soul monk in his previous life. He was always shaken when he traveled back in time. He had no spiritual energy and was shaken once. He was shaken by the hydrogen bomb. The Earth is Round was shaken. The Tao Te Ching was shaken. The antenna was shaken again. He showed off to an old man and pretended to be cool. The old man bowed down and bowed. Let me put it another way. The billionaire traveled through the kindergarten and was shocked to death by the slide and swing. He turned around and accepted the guard as his younger brother.

A thousand-year-old monster is actually like a giant baby. He gets angry, vomits blood, and pretends to be stupid at every turn. Is this too much? Is he so mentally retarded?

At first glance, he is a heretic Yuanying, and his state of mind is basically empty 🙂. If it is the Yuanying Taoist who came from the poor place of Xianshu, rebirth in the land of Jue Ling is simply out of the question.

A thousand-year-old divine king, when he arrives in a new place, he has no magic power. How can he stay in bed, silently absorb knowledge, become invincible, and then come out again?

This is not a Yuanying monk crossing the earth, this is a primitive man crossing the earth! I have never seen any fantasy scenes in the world of immortality. After traveling through time, I was shocked and shocked when I learned about the reality of the earth? The second fool among primitive people? This Yuanying is also a parallel import from Xibei, right?

First of all, I would like to express my affirmation. I just read the beginning. The writing is really good and the story concept is also good. It is worth reading. However, there are indeed some small problems at the beginning. As someone who grew up in Shanxi, I still know something about coal mines. 1. The country prohibits women from going into mines. No matter whether it is a large state-owned coal mine or a small private coal mine, I have never seen a woman go into a mine to dig coal. Generally, women do auxiliary work on the ground, such as clerical work or canteens. It is almost impossible to die in a mining accident. It is unheard of for a husband and wife to die in a mining accident together. 2. The income of a coal miner is not low. Unless his parents encountered a mining disaster when they first went to the coal mine, the family could not be so poor. 3. Regarding the issue of compensation, I don't think it's a big problem. One thousand yuan is definitely too little. Even in 1999, one person could still lose ten thousand to twenty thousand yuan. However, it is possible that the coal mine owner or the person who sent the money deliberately bullied them and misappropriated their money. This can be regarded as foreshadowing. One more thing, the actual status of private coal bosses is not high, and they are very afraid of the chief and deputy departments. They are willing to spend money to settle the matter (privately). Once the family members get into trouble, the coal bosses have to spend more than tens of thousands of dollars to deal with the bosses of each department.

I don't understand. Shouldn't the first thought of the Yuanying boss in the world of cultivation be how to obtain power to suppress all enemies? Just like Brother Hei will try to run away when the yellow car gets too big, Brother Three will use his hands to defecate, and Grasshopper will make false accusations when she explodes gold coins. It's instinctive. The coming and going of a Nascent Soul is still the behavior of a primary school student. It is better to write about a primary school student obtaining the inheritance of the Nascent Soul.

What I wrote in the front is fine, but the gains in cross-border cultivation later outweigh the losses.

The more you read, the more exciting it becomes. The most exciting thing about the previous part is that you can quickly understand modern knowledge. If you feel that the previous part is not exciting, you can try it again when you are 30. It will not be so surprising anymore.

The comparison of the previous concepts is very interesting. Why did I write back to the world of cultivating immortals later 😳

What I wrote before was very good, but why did I go back to it later?

Where has the author gone? 😭