A Nascent Soul Cultivator Reborn in 1999

Mom and dad go into the mine together? Even though the strong laborers are working in the mines, my sister still can't afford to eat. What's the point of doing this? The dangers and excitement of working in the mines? Can't afford to go to school due to a mining accident? Nascent Soul God Lord was so disheartened when he found out that he failed to transcend the tribulation and failed to cultivate, did he take drugs? Or is it a divine king who only needs a beautiful apprentice to maintain the stability of the Three Realms?

At first it was said to be a place of extraordinary spirits, and then I was able to draw talismans. I gave them an invisibility talisman, a thunder talisman and the like, but they were not captured and sliced ​​into pieces by the Guo family?

The writing style is not very good, and it forcibly creates an atmosphere of despair. The Nascent Soul stage boss feels as fragile as a mortal who has never cultivated immortality just because he was reborn in the land of the dead.

The author is extremely experienced. Either a master who plays the trumpet, or a veteran who doesn't stand up. The probability of wild newbies is low. The writing layout is different. Listen to the thunder in the silence. The attention to detail is particularly good.

After reading Chapter 13, the protagonist fainted three or four times, vomited blood, fell down, and then my grandma and sister kept worrying... This Nascent Soul is a bit disgusting.

The writing style is okay, but it has an old-school writing style, and the plot design is really bloody, and full of loopholes. A great Nascent Soul, unless he cultivates immortality through kneading elixirs, his perseverance and earthly feelings will impress him. Unless he completely forgets his memory and is reincarnated, like the protagonist, the author will either directly point it out, and his cultivation will be destroyed and his state of mind will be completely destroyed. But that's enough. . . . In summary, if it was popular ten years ago, it will be popular twenty years ago. Now,. . . . Just make do with it.

😡😡😡Don't worry about what happens next, it's disgusting at the beginning. Summary of various factors: In China in 1999, a remote area was surrounded by mountains and small villages. It was not isolated from the world → there were volunteer teachers → they knew where the county seat was. My parents worked in the mines together (earning hard money). The house at home was leaking. My 8-year-old sister did not have enough to eat when she was 5 or 6 years old. The staple food at home was corn mush or moldy old grain. . . Author, how do you combine these contradictory points? A single factor can provide a reasonable explanation. All kinds of things go against the grain together You might as well say that your parents are farmers all their lives. They are so poor that they have to be isolated from the world. They have dug mines and can't have enough to eat. The house leaks 😥 The thatched house doesn't leak. They also eat moldy old grains and make corn mush. How did they survive until the day when the protagonist travels through time? 😅😅😅

Personal language and emotional descriptions are slightly artificial. The old man has the intellectual disability of the old man, the verbosity of the old man, and some experiences brought by time. The writing is a bit one-sided. I can change the character creation if I have the mood. The idea is quite good, although it will be difficult to write in the later stage. I hope the author can work harder.

I really can't stand it when I come to the old Taoist apprenticeship. This is the way to write pretending to be 13 20 years ago.

No wonder I can't survive the catastrophe and my Taoist heart is not firm.