A Nascent Soul Cultivator Reborn in 1999

Parents going down into the mine together? All the able-bodied men go down the mine and the younger sister still can't eat. What's the point? Is it for the danger and excitement of the mine? Or because of a mine accident that would prevent her from going to school?

At first, they said it was a place devoid of spirits, then they were able to draw talismans, and they gave people invisibility talismans, thunder talismans, and the like, and they were not captured and dismembered by the Guo family.

The writing is poor, and the atmosphere of despair is forced. A Nascent Soul stage expert, simply because he was reborn in the Land of Desolation, seems as fragile as a mortal who has never cultivated immortality.

The author is exceptionally experienced. They're either a seasoned pro using a secondary account or a veteran from another platform. A completely newbie is unlikely. The writing style and structure are different. A thunderclap in the silence. The attention to detail is exceptional.

After reading thirteen chapters, the protagonist fainted three or four times, vomited blood, and fell down repeatedly, while his grandmother and sister constantly worried... This Nascent Soul cultivator is a bit disgusting.

The writing is passable, but it has an old-fashioned style, and the plot is incredibly melodramatic and full of holes. A Nascent Soul cultivator, unless they ascended to immortality through elixirs and the transfer of power, requires immense willpower. To move them with worldly emotions, they would need to completely forget their memories and be reincarnated.

😡😡😡Never mind what happens later, the beginning is disgusting. A summary of various factors: In 1999, in a remote village surrounded by mountains in China, it wasn't isolated from the world → there were volunteer teachers → they knew where the county town was, the parents worked in the mines (earning their lives), the house leaked, the younger sister was eight years old but looked five or six…

The descriptions of personal speech and emotions were a bit contrived. The elderly have their own limited perspectives, their own tendency to be verbose, and the experience that comes with age. The writing is somewhat one-sided. The character development could be revised if the author feels like it. The premise is good, although the later stages will be difficult to write. I hope the author will keep up the good work.

I just couldn't resist the idea of ​​becoming an apprentice to the old Taoist priest. This is the kind of pretentious writing style from 20 years ago.

No wonder he couldn't survive the Heavenly Tribulation; his Dao heart wasn't firm.