Sacrifice to the Dragon

The writing is smooth, the logic is clear, and the contradictory methods used are old-fashioned but effective. Liangcao++ started

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In arid areas, rain bombs are used to prevent rain. The only modern method is to use high-power microwave radiation to drive water vapor from the atmosphere with abundant water vapor to arid areas. However, control is a difficult problem, and there is no practical example so far.

After the author wrote that the main character lusted after the goddess of Mount Lu, I always felt weird and had no motivation to continue reading.

Writing at the beginning is not good. I have to write all of it in a prayer. There is no reason other than to make up the number of words. The description of plot advancement is also very poor. There are long descriptions that have nothing to do with the plot. It is still certified by a great author. Any book on the new book list can be better than this.

It's 30 chapters, 1/3 of it is about the real world, and it's not a mortal stream. The combat power system should still be low martial arts. Compared with "I Have a World of Immortal Cultivation" and "The Naming Technique of Night", the theme feels more like "Celebrating More Than Years". The fun will depend on the subsequent interaction between the two worlds.

Speechless, the great author is only at this level, what the hell can he write? Authors in the online literary circle are really too watery. They are all great gods, some have real power, and some are just parallel imports.

The biggest highlight of this book was ruined by the author! In the setting of dual worlds, what readers like to see more is that the protagonist uses modern technology to develop and show off in the world of immortality, but does not eat beef in the real world. As a result, the most interesting point was thrown away by the author. Are your grades good?

I feel that the author's thinking seemed to be distorted after it was published, and he gradually started to describe some strange things. In fact, what I want to see more is the interaction between the author and the people, the increase in his sanity, the increase in mana, etc. You have made some plot routines and so on. I feel that the writing is very dry and unattractive.

I'm going to start a new book. "Lord of Secret Treasures" is a pity.

The author still can't change his bad habit of showing off and getting slapped in the face. It looks so embarrassing.

Don't veteran authors read novels of the same type before writing a book? If you don't read novels, you still want to write good novels and dream about it.

I wrote six or seven chapters of "It's Raining", but it was short and watery after I took it.

I have long said that writing like this will inevitably lead to a hit on the street, and the one with the opening chapter of Blood Red, which is ancient and has a pistol, will also hit the street.

Doesn't anyone think it's particularly uncomfortable to write about traveling between two worlds while time is suspended? I just started watching it. One, the two women on PG Island were very awkward. Two, traveling to another world, and time in other worlds was suspended. It was uncomfortable, especially uncomfortable.

The protagonist can travel through ancient times to modern times. The author wrote the ancient parts very smoothly, but the modern parts are really hard to read.

I came here to read it after reading the recommendation from the old ghost. I picked up the gun at the beginning and immediately abandoned the book.

It's better to do a soul-piercing thing. If the physical body runs on both sides and doesn't land well, just bind one. It's hard to write about the running scenes on both sides, and I'm tired of watching them.

Am I too old-fashioned? I always feel that putting science and technology together with cultivating immortals is a sign of something different.

The latest 256 chapters take up more than 3 pages by copying and pasting the end of the previous chapter, making a total of 15 pages. This is too much. Are you bullying readers like this? ? ! !

Time on the other side is stagnant. This kind of setting needs to deal with the time difference and double-sided plots. Obviously this one does not. It can be said that it cannot be worse than this.

Open up the pattern and make the experience more complicated

Newcomers and new books seeking attention, Darkness of All Heavens, early stage of Naruto, "The World of Naruto in the Eyes of the Dark Supreme"

I saw Chapter 240, how could a machine in the real world suddenly detect psychic energy?

My mother is a dragon who gave birth to two eggs and me. She recognized the eggs, but not me.

He is a master just for his writing style. His starting point is really awesome.