Lord of Secret Treasures

First of all, the sense of routine is very strong, and the routine arrangement in the early stage is too dense. It would be better to just focus on the conflict between the Bai family and Pig's Feet. Secondly, I feel that some parts of the plot are not very coherent. I'm not sure whether it's because of restrictions or not! Furthermore, the author's detailed descriptions are comprehensive, the plot arrangement is reasonable, and the writing style is also good!

Well written, I recommend it, keep it up

In fact, this novel is quite good-looking and has clear ideas. No worse than those on the list. Some of the ones on the list are not as good-looking as this one. I read novels more carefully. If the top and bottom parts of the writing don't match up, I'll shoot it to death. The downside is that there is no humor. It still feels better to add some occasionally. This is purely a personal review, don't comment if you don't like it.

Very well written, I like it very much!

I believe that many people have watched "Mob Brick" and have no desire to watch it at all, right? Me too

After reading Chapter 30, I just want to say where does the protagonist have the confidence to hide his abilities? And I really don't know what the meaning of hiding abilities is. It is obvious that if you can report a weakened ability, you will be protected as a researcher. Family problems can also be easily solved. It is really a forced intelligence.

Recommended by Eagle, I will give you two recommendation votes first.

This is the first and most miserable master I have ever seen. He only got a hundred votes.

Everyone is welcome to submit recommendation votes and monthly votes~

You are all mentioning great masters, but I just want to know how many great masters have hired ghostwriters, or have written for others under their name? Nowadays, many so-called masters are halfway through writing their books, but their writing style suddenly changes later on. Some publish new books, just like new writers. They feel like they have earned enough money and don't want to write or can't write anymore. They simply consume the remaining value of the gods to squeeze out as many loyal readers as possible, and fool one after another.

I'm convinced, too. This novel is still the same as it was a few years ago. It creates a halo of hatred for the protagonist's family, and everyone can bully the protagonist's family. The protagonist also conceals his own abilities. Obviously, he only needs to reveal a little bit of his abilities to gain support. However, he keeps it hidden and does everything possible to drag out the plot.

As a person at the bottom, in the last days. They can still borrow money, which proves that the protagonist's family is afraid of death, the money is useful, there are official organizations, and schools, when the social framework is complete. There are so many things to write about. But what did the author write at the beginning? Goldfinger didn't write everything. He stared at the debt and forced everyone to pay. Author, do you think we like to watch forced debt? The underworld is a gangster who cares about everything and bullies the weak and fears the strong. You are not worthy of the name of a great god

Don't like to have family ties. It is estimated that the protagonist's younger brother will become a peerless talent at some point.

I tried poison, but it didn't look good. Basically, the main characters were all villains, and they were villains for the sake of villains. It was too poisonous.

I said that awakened people are treated well and have high status. Your family is in trouble and you need money. Then you have been hiding it since you became awakened?

Damn it, I wrote about a house and wrote five chapters, just to show off, and there was absolutely no progress in the main plot. Damn, I don't even want to see this water.

After reading a few chapters, I feel like the protagonist's family either owes money or a house or something. It's a sign of love to lend to you. Don't lend to others if they have bad character! Borrow sesame seeds today and return watermelon tomorrow! Don't you have any idea how capable you are?

It seems like something happened at the author's family. He seems to have said that before. Slow down, just slow down, at least it's better than not having to watch it when it's taken off the shelves. For example, "Blood Saber" was taken off the shelves and no one could watch it anymore. Hey... I hope this book can be written. I personally like Mi Bao, please support the author💪

This character design is not good, it is useless, full level of taunting

The reason for hiding the identity of the awakened person is too far-fetched. There is no need to keep a low profile for the sake of keeping a low profile. You can expose part of it and hide part of it.

Now I really can't stand the Great God's Book. Does it have to have a tragic beginning and add a golden finger that defies heaven?

Even if it's one chapter a day, it still stopped for two days. I don't have enough blades at home. I hope we can help with some funding! ! !

It feels like the author has become a eunuch. There are fewer and fewer updates. This kind of prelude to entering the palace is so obvious.

I even doubled my investment and lost it all!

Why isn't it updated?