Doomsday Traveler

Man, the article is really good. The writing style doesn't look like it was written by a newcomer. I like this kind of science fiction and daily life. Fortunately, I didn't search for books by tags, otherwise I would most likely not click on the tag "Add Superpowers". Most of the books with this kind of label are cool articles. You should change the label. You are screening readers. Anyone who likes this style of article will not be able to find you 😅

Very good doomsday writing. The protagonist and the supporting actress are well-suited and three-dimensional. The inconspicuous plug-in is a rare embellishment. The pace of the story is also good. Come on! Author!

The writing and plot can be read all the time without being abrupt. Which old author has started a new one? There is suspense that makes people watch it. It's a road-side story, which is quite good, but also quite difficult to write. Very optimistic.

Come on, author, the writing is beautiful!

I really like this kind of post-apocalyptic road story so much, the feeling of a girl traveling through the end of the world with two people and a car supporting each other and walking in the apocalypse! Today's apocalyptic novels often turn into superpower battles or territory management. Before the beginning, no one had an appetite for it. I am very satisfied with this one so far. Good luck, author! Put it on the shelves as soon as possible

This book is quite good. It's like reading Robinson Crusoe. The rhythm of the writing is not bad, but there are too few words. But in the wasteland, the knowledge level is not enough, which is normal.

In the end of the world, there is still a single female protagonist, and the elements are very satisfying. The emotional scenes are portrayed quite naturally, and the characters all stand up. Although this book has supernatural elements, the form of expression is not that outrageous. Some apocalyptic novels are about gods fighting aliens.

Whether it is Tieba or Bilibili, there are various settings and knowledge similar to surviving in the apocalypse. I suggest the author to read more and write a rough outline. If you don't say anything else, people who know a little bit about the details in the book will have a headache. Brother, you have already written about the apocalypse. If you are not the kind with super powers flying around, then just do the details well. Without details, it will be useless no matter how well you control the characters and plot. Those are fine. Books written by authors who say not to care about details are either eunuchs or have poor grades. I dare say that most readers who like such books will have some knowledge of survival in the apocalypse, and most readers are silent. When they see that what you wrote does not meet their expectations, they leave directly instead of leaving a comment. Anyway, I think this book is good except for the details, so I just make this suggestion.

Finished reading another novel. The whole story is pretty good. It was after contacting Luo Ping. I feel like the story is a bit off. I still like the feeling of two people depending on each other best in the beginning. The appearance of the base at the back and the prototype car have greatly reduced the interest of the article, and there is no sense of urgency like before. While reading this novel, I sometimes thought about it. One night when I was reading this book, when I looked at the sky outside the window, was there a planet somewhere in the vast universe? Was there one night, a wilderness, a bonfire, and two people lying on the ground looking up at the stars in the sky. Will there be a moment when we look at each other?

Why does the end of the world have to add a female protagonist? Otherwise, if you just accept one after another, there will be no heroine? If you love writing about female protagonists so much, why not write about the city...

It's a very special novel, not in terms of subject matter, but in terms of content. It's rare to see a work that is so divided in terms of level - just the right and comfortable writing style, and the horrific details... It can be seen that it is definitely the trumpet of an old author. The storyboards are full of sense, the language is concise but there is no shortage of descriptions of actions and expressions. The characters stand up quickly, and the simple dialogue quickly transitions from unfamiliar to more familiar. All in all, I quite like the writing style. As for the content, according to the author, he wanted to write a story similar to Robinson Crusoe. I haven't seen the Queen Mother so I won't comment. I'm not sure whether it's about farming development or something else, but based on the title, I feel it's more like a road movie or a beautiful way of writing about what I've seen along the way. Then there are shortcomings. I don't know if this is the first time for the author to come into contact with this kind of novel, so there are really too many loopholes. There are a lot of them in the first ten chapters alone. It is recommended to revise them. It is very unpopular. Specifically: 1. According to what is known, the protagonist has been alive for almost a year (half a year plus more than three months of diary writing). I don't know how many roads he has traveled, but at least he has passed through three or four large cities, right? However, no information has been collected to understand the world view, so it is ridiculous that we still don't know what happened in the disaster, we don't know the level of technology, we don't have a map, we don't know the direction, and we don't know the time. 2. Although I don't know the specific time, most of the vehicles have been scrapped for at least three to five years. In this period of time, not all paper data will disappear, at least the storage condition in the cabinet should be very good. And if all paper documents are damaged, then the wooden structure, furniture, and textiles in the house should also be basically damaged, but the villa at the beginning mentions furniture, etc. 3. Gasoline has a shelf life, which can be as short as three to five years or as long as ten years before it expires. Please refer to Article 2. This is another contradictory setting. If gasoline is useful, then there should be no data found. If there is no data, then gasoline should not be useful. 4. Tap water is still supplied in the villa? ? ? Tap water is not an independent water supply. Not to mention the water plant, how do you use electricity to power the pressure pump of the water pipe in your home? ——The mechanical dog is not powered when the heroine gets water. 5. You have been living for a year and you haven't found a set of wheels? I went to a gas station with the heroine to find the wheel and wanted to replace it with parts for the dog? It's been a year and you haven't found a single tool like a screwdriver or even a pen refill? ? ? I'm speechless... 6. After living for a year, you haven't saved anything and everything is destroyed? Then can you explain why the gasoline has not expired? I couldn't even find or build a cart, cart, or bicycle. I can't understand what I've been doing this year... In short, it smells like a Japanese light novel. The imagination and writing style are very good, but the details are all for the plot. Only when the plot requires it can we find the corresponding things. There is no subjective initiative at all. The protagonist has lived for a year and has not practiced a gun, has not collected supplies, has not understood information, knows nothing, and has not considered anything... Evaluate based on the reasons why the work has potential. They are not related to the basic outline level. Just change it. I hope the author sees it as soon as possible and can regain some popularity. The rating will be improved and the revised food will be improved.

Let's talk about the advantages first. This book is a very rare road novel in apocalyptic literature that starts from the beginning. There is no intermediary struggle for hegemony. The plot of highway exploration is also handled very well. The details of various search plots are very rich. It can be called a masterpiece. If we want to talk about shortcomings, there are three main points. I think they are caused by the author's lack of experience. The first point is that the battle scenes are really poorly written. I believe other readers feel the same way, and the more the combat power is separated from mortals, the worse it is. The author may need to improve the description of extraordinary high-level battles. The second point is an extension of the first point, and that is the problem of stacking boxes of combat power. After the emergence of new humans, every time the protagonist encounters a new group of enemies, the enemy's strength will increase by a large level. Just going to the next county is like ascending and changing maps. In this way, the combat power will be out of control after a few battles, making it difficult to write down. I suggest the author pay attention to this in the next book, and just increase the combat power a little at a time The third point is the handling of the ending. The final world view is very full of information. In fact, it can be divided into two or three paragraphs for the protagonist to discover. It is a waste to throw it out at once: I personally think that the heroine's father should not appear. His existence is very embarrassing, so it is better not to write it Although this book has some shortcomings, it is still a masterpiece of road writing. Readers who like road writing must not miss it.

The heroine makes me feel like a strong woman like Luna

Gouzi

It's so ugly, it feels like a criticizing stallion

The beginning is actually good, but the beginning of Chapter 192 is too unreasonable, really boring, and too overwhelming. It is originally a road trip decryption text, not an upgrade text. There is no strength level, so why stress the combat power. If you encounter someone who has fungi and has a longer time than the two protagonists, the combat power cannot be compared. What's the matter? It's so unreasonable that someone who doesn't have the combat power enhanced by the bacteria stone can't do it. Did I write before that I could beat ten of myself before encountering the bacteria stone? Why is it so rubbish here? Two sneak attacks enhanced by the bacteria stone and one without the bacteria stone can't easily do it. Does the author think the combat power shown is reasonable?

It's a very good book. How come it's not recommended? What kind of rubbish is there on the recommendation list?

The devils dance There are eunuchs, but there are women who don't watch. There is a Hehuan sect, and single women do not watch it. There is a science fiction school, and I love one the most. The entire field can develop without restrictions in all categories, and all ingredients are included. Happy.

After reading five chapters, it was obvious that it was a trumpet. The writing was very natural, with no artificial words and no outbursts of anger. It brought me back to the feeling I had when I was watching this very apocalypse. No matter what the subsequent plot is, this aspect crushes most authors.

I've read it and caught up on it. The novel still feels like a good road novel to me. I feel very comfortable and can read it leisurely. The only thing I want to say is that I hope that the heroine's character can be richer and more natural (if I have planned for this kind of change later but haven't written it yet, just think I'm farting now). Mainly, this kind of road trip novels are about the gradual changes of people. This is obviously focused on the heroine, and the heroine has indeed changed a lot since the beginning. But now I feel a little dependent on the male protagonist. Many things have to be solved and the male protagonist takes the lead. This is a bit inconsistent with the heroine's purpose of starting the journey to avenge her mother. The main heroine is not a delicate type (to be honest, some battle plans against the enemy can be proposed by the heroine. After all, she is a person who kills people all the way and practices marksmanship). (The above is purely a personal opinion, I am just a quail)

A post-apocalyptic road story, the male and female protagonists are deeply bound together, the writing is not good, the plot is okay, the character portrayal is not so good, the plug-in makes the plot more warm and less oppressive of the end of the world. The male and female protagonists heat up a little quickly, and it feels like the male protagonist is tricking a primary school student into falling in love. At present, I have seen more than 150 chapters. The plot direction is probably to travel together and avenge their mother (it feels too bland at the moment, let's see what the author writes next)

The author failed to grasp the wealth and wealth. What a pity

It's good-looking, really good-looking. Although it's a post-apocalyptic novel, it has a touch of warmth from beginning to end.

No big brother, I only raised over 100 of them and they were gone

It feels like it's over after only one month.

It's time to finish. The author has done a good job of balancing daily life with fun. I look forward to the author's next book 😁

The author wants to use this as the cover image of the character introduction.

Can I do character covers?

It was finals week some time ago and I didn't have time to read I didn't read any novels after the holiday. I logged on today and found out that it was finished. I felt a bit melancholy. In general, it is good. The plot is compact and exciting. The combat power does not have the problem of imbalance and expansion in most novels. It also fills in the pitfalls in the early stage. Even the love plot is still a little ordinary, but in the Qidian male channel, the shorter ones are better than the taller ones, which can completely kill most of the novels.

The heroine actually has the same birthday as me. I'm giving you this face. Let me see what's going on.