The Road to the Master of Cultivation in Nanhai

The IQ is online, the logic is clear, and the content is good.

The quality of Qi Kexiu's "The Road to the Leader" is too high. Many novels have been forgotten after reading them. "The Road to the Leader" I still remember a lot of the plots, and it has been many years.

How should I put it? Zifu should be added. When it comes to transforming gods, it is best to maintain a sense of mystery and not come out for the time being. First of all, in the early stage of the novel, do not have too high combat power and maintain the mystery of the world view. Otherwise, if you write it forcefully, if you do not shape it well, the transformed gods will often be written with similar personalities to ordinary people. The second grade is very low. If you are not a B-level person like Chen Dong, it is best not to make an emperor. It is best to use pure Taoism, Confucianism, and Buddhism. It is recommended not to add it. Don't describe the Yuanying and the dialogue between the masters of the gods. Keep the plot low and build the foundation. The elixir reaches to the sky, and the Nascent Soul transforms into a god and blows through the sky. Until the end, try to describe as little as possible the perspectives of the Yuanying and the Soul, maintain a sense of mystery, and portray the sacredness. The map is very powerful. You did not create it well in this aspect at the beginning. There are too many Yuanying transforms into gods, which is too straightforward.

Not enough compared to the top, but more than enough than the bottom. The author writes in the first chapter that it is more than the previous one, but not enough than the lower one. The Chinese language must have been taught by a math teacher 😅

After reading about 40 chapters, the quality is considered to be very good among immortal cultivating novels. The logic and rationality are good, the plot is well designed, the sense of substitution is good, and the excitement is good. The writing is a bit poor, but the story can be told clearly, and the fighting style is lackluster. After all, I am a newcomer. Generally speaking, the plot has flaws and flaws, it is not a trivial story, and the supporting characters and villains have online IQs. Because it is still very short, I don't know how well the follow-up author can write it. I feel that it has the potential to become a fairy grass, but it will be difficult. However, ensuring the quality of the food should not be a big problem. Considering that this book is about sect management and hegemony, and such novels are rare and difficult to write, what else is there to say? I strongly recommend that fellow Taoists read this book.

Well written. The context is clear. The characters have outlines, which are simple and not cumbersome. Come on.

I saw that the name of the protagonist was too dramatic, and I had no desire to continue reading.

Okay, okay, unlike a novice author, keep watching

Don't understand? Call you father and senior brother? Is the cultivating sect so unscrupulous?

From the early days, it actually looked okay.

Such a beautiful book, why doesn't it get a lot of attention?

It's like watching the leader's journey. It would be great if I could add a fellow sage.