
To Create a Clan of Immortals, I Have the Secret of Deduction
打造仙族,我有推演玄鉴
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- Classical Xianxia
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It's almost chapter 40, and I haven't started cultivating immortality yet. I've been talking about trivial matters. I guess I won't start cultivating immortality until chapter 100, right?
It's so tiring to watch.
Conflict, conflict, conflict, endless conflicts and crises. Every three or five chapters, a new life-or-death crisis arises. It makes people so tired that they cannot even take a breath or read comfortably. It's a bit like being in a battlefield, killing people endlessly and can't stop at all. The protagonist takes advantage of the gap between killing people to improve himself, and then kills the next person immediately.
Is the main character a nanny? Why do you run to save people every day? If you continue writing like this, you will end up on the street again. This book
It's quite good to watch, the plot is tense, and it's not brainless and has its own ideas. I just hope that the author won't have inconsistent settings. If he takes his time at the beginning and suddenly jumps into the sky at the end, it will be difficult to burn him to death.
Some suggestions
① When you pretend to be a member of the Tianji Sect to tell someone's fortune, don't make your words so clear. If you tell someone clearly, that's not fortune telling. When Zhang Laojiu was looking for his son, if you hadn't told it in such detail, would there have been any plot about Elder Liu later? Even if it was just to give money and treasures, it wouldn't be such a big flaw. In fact, you shouldn't pretend to be fake. The golden fingers all remind you that there will be cause and effect, so you still pretend to be afraid that you will be in trouble, right? Don't you understand that a big tree attracts the wind? Tianji Pavilion is so mysterious, and you suddenly came out to pretend to be there, and your whereabouts are fixed. Do you think that these immortal cultivators are just playing house, and that they are all kind-hearted people? ② As for the price of fortune telling, don't keep talking about the energy and trouble. What is the price of cultivating the world of immortality? Using this as a pretext is equivalent to saying to the rich that they will not be counted if they don't have 150 yuan. It is too insulting. At the very least, it has to be something like a loss of merit and life, something that can't be taken out easily. ③The biggest failure is the swamp map. Either change the swamp to a point where Jedi cannot produce treasures, or delete this plot. There are two reasons for its failure 1. If you produce treasures, the safe path you gave is equivalent to giving the other party the ability to develop the swamp. People all over the world should look to you to calculate the safe path to the Jedi Secret Realm. Don't mention there are other dangers in it. On the basis of a feasible safe path, if the immortal cultivators in this world cannot develop the swamp, then they are too useless. ⒉ This swamp is really that awesome. There are ways to get in and out, and even the immortal cultivators in this world can't develop it. Then it is impossible for people to be indifferent to the gold content of your fortune telling. In order to catch you, they will use their brains to catch you, and those who are unwilling to fail will also want to destroy you. This is not just relying on imagination. If you have a big background, you will not dare to do it. The benefits are too great.
You shouldn't put it in farming stories, you should put it in zhengba stories. You dare to classify it into farming stories even if you can't tell the difference.
I found that the biggest poisonous point of this book is the protagonist's father-in-law and mother-in-law. They are together every day and call them "please". They are both the patriarchs of the same family.
When will you become immortal?
I know I can cultivate immortality, but I still keep wandering around in the world. I don't know how long it will take.
In the beginning, it is actually difficult to substitute for the plot (not to assume the role of the protagonist). For family cultivators, it is generally better to have a fetal transmutation or awaken Su Hui. To put it bluntly, these four children have nothing to do with the protagonist (the one who soul travels). Apart from the fact that his bloodline is his predecessor, he has nothing to do with the real protagonist at all. There are four oil bottles on the way up. It is equivalent to raising a child that is not your own. Then you can only rely on a plug-in to force binding.
Ask the author
In the introduction, you write that the main character is farming and development. But what I saw was that the protagonist was on the verge of death, repeatedly jumping sideways. So, author, are you going to change the introduction or rewrite the book? (Hahahahahaha~)
Why is the comment section so deserted? Has the post been deleted?
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I don't understand. Is it difficult to change places? You know it after killing so many people. You can't kill all the Li family, there are still people in the immortal world. I don't know what the author is thinking. Do you want to keep Li Jia here after killing him?
This book belongs to the lower-middle category when placed on free websites. I don't know why it appears at the starting point.
It's very good. It took me a long time to find a good book in Qidian Library.
There are still people who want to steal heaven, but ants do not want to be submissive. No matter there are billions of sentient beings! Why are the nine great immortal clans superior to all living beings? Why can the nine great immortal clans determine everything for all sentient beings? Why are all sentient beings not able to enjoy the prosperity created by all living beings? Why do the children born to all living beings always have to kneel before the nine great immortal clans! Are they seeking immortality? ! Maybe. But in fact, compared to the distant immortality, what they want is just the living self at the moment! I would like to borrow the building as a courtesy and wish the author a great success in this book. Guest, would you like to come and watch "Nirvana Clan"? Group portraits, big background Family cultivation, power plotting, delicate writing, and emotions of each character Online, non-routine, original story. If you think it is still interesting, please comment and support it.
This golden finger has not even been agreed upon, and Gold Finger is responsible for everything he does. Completely overshadowing the show