Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from Establishing a Family

When I read the introduction, I thought it was a light-hearted article, but when I looked at the content, it was full of blood, violence, and abuse of the protagonist.

Writing style is not important, as the number of words will naturally increase with more words. The key is not to act behind closed doors, not to be stubborn and to understand the market. Just summarize a few points, at least you can eat. 1. The protagonist is a time traveler. 2. There must be plug-ins, and plug-ins have clear and unchanging rules. 3. The protagonist's character should not be chaotic! It can be good or evil but not chaotic. The rules of conduct must be consistent! Don't destroy the protagonist's character just to make fun of it. It is important to learn to let go of creative labor. There is no such thing as a must-have. 4. It is best not to write about other adventures outside of plug-ins! If you have to write, you can only write about things! Don't write about disgusting people like being valued by some old man. 5. Don't want the protagonist to have strange phenomena all over the sky and everyone to know about them as soon as he practices, upgrades, or gains benefits. It's great when the protagonist silently reaps the benefits! It should be easy to do just a few general points! If you can't do this, then you really shouldn't eat this bowl of rice.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Stop updating it, it's meaningless, there's too much nonsense, too many small incidents, it's too long-winded, and there's no protagonist.

Chapter 7 Sese has been reviewed and I don't know when it will pass.

Such a trick shows that it is very popular and not a stand-alone game. I have read it. Anyway, I can't write it so well, and the concept is not cliché. The writing is very, very good, very good. Don't worry about what other people say, write your own~ Don't care about them, if you like to see love, if you don't, get out.

The writing is good, and the author has put his heart into it, but the question of the skills in Chapter 14.15 Is really poisonous. The protagonist is too arrogant. It has been like this since the beginning. It is good to have a conflict and a plot, but at least you have to stand firm before writing. It is not just once. If the protagonist dies no matter how many times, it is not enough. Although you can force it, it doesn't look very comfortable to you.

OMG, I have been reading online novels for almost 20 years, and this is the first time I have seen such an awesome 50,000-60,000-word setting and various introductions. I only wrote 120,000 words in total, and the actual content is only 60,000-70,000 words.

I would like to recommend the new book "The Supreme Cultivation Family" by an old author. Thank you!

In terms of setting, You are the most incredible novel among the many novels I have read. It is so strong. Thinking about this and how long it took to find information, the setting made me dizzy, as if I was back in high school when I was taking math class.

I followed it chapter by chapter, it's very well written, keep up the good work. The writing is very unique, the writing style is delicate, and the ups and downs of the story are very interesting~

The author writes very well. Objectively speaking, some people will not scold you because your writing is not good, but scold you for the sake of scolding. It's great if you can be signed. Some people just want to set the pace and mess with your mentality.

The first book should be used to accumulate experience, and you will know how to write the next book. Come on.

There is no sense of immersion in the character of the protagonist. It is purely a personal opinion. Maybe some people like the protagonist with this character.

Today, the system deleted a lot of content from the chapter, so it will look incoherent. I won't edit it on Tuesday for fear of review. Everyone, please remember to follow up! Thanks!

It's finally on the shelves, please feel free to order it for the first time and write it down well.