Madam, Let Me Die in the Middle of the Night

August 11, 2025 AD. I just finished answering my mother's call and started peeling eggs. I wanted to see if there were updates to the novel, so I saw the update of your novel in my [New Books] folder. There is no title, only the sentence "The road is far away, farewell" From this moment, I knew that you had cut the book again. I read it from "The Ex-Wife: The Villain". Logically speaking, I am not a long-time fan of your book. So, I am actually not very likely to read this book because of you, the author. When I saw you releasing a new book, I was actually looking forward to it. After all, the last one was a pity. Your opening story is very well written. Compact, tense, and very tense. Very very nice looking. But after reading a few chapters, I suddenly felt tired. In the past, I read a lot of new books, and it was easy to read more than twenty chapters at a time, but with you, when I read the seventh chapter, I put down my phone, took a drink of water, and took a break. I have to say, you started the story very well, and it made my anticipation outweigh my fatigue. Driven by curiosity and regardless of fatigue, he continued to read. Then I continued to catch up with updates every day until Chapter 16, when the first copy ended. I breathed a sigh of relief, and then I continued to catch up with updates every day, but I suddenly found that I couldn't catch up anymore. I got to Chapter 21 and then I couldn't follow it. Sorry, I couldn't continue to follow up. But I am really tired. At this point, I actually have a question, not for you, but for me. I'm tired of reading your books, including "The Villain of the Ex-Wife", but why can I follow the last one but not this one? I thought about this question for two hours, and finally came to a conclusion-the expectation is gone, or I am no longer interested. I like to read harem stories, so for me, my expectation is that the male protagonist has a harem and gets entangled with beautiful women. This is very vulgar, yes, I am a vulgar person. Although I was very tired watching "The Ex-Wife", I enjoyed watching the awkward attitude between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, the inseparable relationship, the male protagonist not caring, and the female protagonist pretending not to care. All in all, it's very tiring, but I'm happy to be tired. In this book, this sense of expectation is missing. I couldn't see the relationship between the heroine and the hero, and I couldn't even tell who the heroine was. The following story is about the male protagonist going through some things alone, and he feels... It's not interesting anymore At that moment, something in my heart dissipated, and I suddenly realized why I don't want to pursue your book. There is indeed an ex-wife in the previous book "The Ex-Wife", just like there is a real large intestine in the Nine-turn Large Intestine, but I can't see the wife in this book "The Lady", it's like the wife cake has no wife. Maybe your wife will appear later, or maybe your wife is hiding in secret, but it doesn't matter, because I no longer have any expectations, curiosity, or desire to watch anymore. While pursuing your book, I have also pursued three books, one is "The Unparalleled Jinyi" by Rong Xiaorong, the other is "Princess, Please Respect Yourself" by Niangzi, and the last one is a book written by an old man called "Everywhere is an Ex-Girlfriend" I have been chasing the two books "Jinyi" and "The Princess" and read them with gusto. Then, these three books were all on the new book list, and their rankings were pretty good. I had a vague feeling in the past two days that your book might need to be cut. The result is real. In fact, I am not surprised at all that you cut the book. You are an old man and a LV5 writer. Therefore, you have very strict requirements for the score of the book. The minimum score must be 500, otherwise it will be difficult to write. I can understand this very well. When I saw you cutting the book, I was thinking, why? Why did I give up on updating only yours among the same four new books? After thinking for a while, I had some ideas. The following is just my opinion as an ordinary reader. It is not professional, but it can be regarded as my voice. First of all, I am very tired from reading your book. I didn't feel this way about any of the three books mentioned above. Let alone two chapters a day, I could read them all continuously even if they were twenty chapters a day, and even read them a second time. But your book is different. I really feel tired. Is it because your book is a mystery? I don't know, I rarely read suspense books. Secondly, there is no sense of expectation. No, I think I should say this, it doesn't meet my expectations. Just like your "Ex-Wife", I am actually looking forward to what kind of relationship the male protagonist and female protagonist will have in the end? I like their entangled love very much. In "The Princess", the male protagonist is an ordinary young officer and the female protagonist is a princess. In the book, there are differences in etiquette and ethics between them, as well as the eager eyes of others. This feeling of stealing the sun really makes me want to watch it. In "Ex-Girlfriend", the male protagonist is a small officer, but he can travel through time. His present is related to the past of every female protagonist. How to discover this relationship, how to break this relationship, and how should they deal with each other after breaking it? I'm looking forward to it. In "Jin Yi", although the sense of expectation is actually much weaker, it is still there. The male protagonist is also a junior officer (how come they are all junior officers...), And the female protagonist who appears now is a man in black who forces him to be a spy. Later, this female protagonist becomes the male protagonist's neighbor on the surface. Now I really want to see his expression when he suddenly finds out that the soft and cute girl next to him turns out to be a ruthless man in black. But in your book, I don't see this sense of anticipation that I want to see. Or... The relationship between your characters can make me have this expectation. So, I can't pursue your book. Of course, this is a matter of my preference, and it does not mean that there is a problem if you write a book this way. In fact, many people like to read books without female protagonists. In such books, you only need to see how the male protagonist solves the dilemma and shows off. However, this is not what I like. Everyone has their favorite things. Actually, there are only two things I like. The first one is that the protagonist comes up from the bottom, so I like some pretending to be pigs and eating tigers, but I don't like the invincible style. The second one is harem, so I rarely read books with single or no heroines. Readers have different tastes. There is actually a saying in the author circle: "As long as the data is not lost, don't care what the readers say." My opinion is that many times, readers don't know what they like, but they must know what they hate. What readers say they like doesn't necessarily mean they really like it. But when readers say they hate it, they must really hate it. But the preferences of readers are the same. Generally speaking, the story is exciting, immersive, and has a harem of beautiful women. Just choose a few combinations that don't conflict with each other and that's it. So, author, have you really thought about your general direction? A novel is a commodity, and the commodity must have its own selling points, and the commodity itself must also meet the selling points you mentioned. I did see the ex-wife in your previous book "The Ex-Wife", but I didn't see much of the "Lady" in this one. This one is not as good as the one you cut before, "The Devil in a Coffin." At least that one actually shows the devil. As for "The Devil", to be honest, I have already taken the role of the male protagonist. You can't let the male protagonist lie in a coffin to play rabbit... In short, whether you are a new author or just posting on this account, in fact, you have to understand that readers just want to read a book in a relaxed and happy way. First, be relaxed. At least, don't make me tired, right? Many comments are saying that the book you wrote is very good, but it is useless. Because you can see where the data is. Readers have core pursuits in their hearts. They won't say it, they will only say it's very good. Because I can get the author to reply and give the author likes, it gives me a sense of accomplishment. This is not an accusation or a pointer. It is just a reader's experience and the most real feeling. It is not a simple criticism or a blind compliment. I am not a professional author, and maybe what I said is not the main reason, but I still want to provide the author with a new thinking angle, or the mood of a reader, for your reference. Of course, I personally hope you don't change your account, because I can see the updates, and it saves me the trouble of looking for books. The old author is still trustworthy when writing, and I will read it as soon as possible. However, new account, maybe I will see you when I refresh the book list occasionally. Put it in favorites. The world is far away, but we will always meet again. Actually this is just a blessing. I have read so many authors, some can survive, some disappear after one book, and some also disappear into the sea of ​​people after a few books. I write this just because I have a wish, and this wish is—— I hope that the author named Best Bean Sprouts will not disappear because of this. He was finally able to cross over, just like the story says, a cultivator crosses the thorns and the abyss, kills the evil cultivators, and walks on his own path to heaven.

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There is a female protagonist, let's take a look first😍😍😍

Didn't you think much about writing this book? Have you written an outline? Don't start your journey to become a eunuch just now. I bet there will be 200 chapters in this book about eunuchs.

When writing about young girls, just write about young girls. When writing about young women, just write about young women. Don't try to write about virgins and married women. If you don't dare to write, just write about never-married girls. Everyone can accept it.

Don't listen to them. This book has absolute potential. Just write slowly and calm down.

Write well, there are only a few harem stories that are readable and not poisonous, and you are one of them, Bean Sprout 🙂

After reading so many books, I still like Douya's writing style. Regardless of the plot, I enjoyed the writing style.

Is it right to pay for labor? Every book you spend money to read is like a eunuch.

The writing is not very interesting. It seems that the author has been writing the plot, which is not very good.

Come on, write according to your own ideas, write well. Don't listen to your book friends and rewrite it again and again, otherwise the writing will fall apart later. Judging from my 12 years of reading experience, it is difficult to find novels that I can follow and read. This novel is indeed good. Even if it's cut now, I think the author's next novel will definitely not be as well written as this one, and it won't be able to satisfy everyone. Of course, for the sake of life, we also respect the author's ideas.

Can you write well? I can allow you to take a two-year break.

I can only say that the male protagonists in the first two books are not men. Although the male protagonists in the first book are a yellow-haired character, they are better than the male protagonists in the first two books. I hope that the male protagonist in this book will be a decent male protagonist.

Write slowly, I think it looks pretty good

I cut books several times every day. A new book will be released in a month. You can see how many newbies will read it. This operation ruins popularity.

Isn't it? Come again? ? ? You might as well write a good ending hastily, you will really lose popularity. I probably won't read the next book until it's finished.

Is this still a heroine-type book like Madam's? If so, I'll wait for the next one. I hope it can be more like the lady's book 😓

Please don't use Riddler in the plot. The forced contrast in the suspense part is really uncomfortable.

What can i say

Why is this the case for two books in a row? Although the first few books were not big hits, they were passable and high-quality. From the time Ex-Wife finished the book, to now, no one has read the two books in a row. Is the subject matter wrong? Or what's the reason?

This book is not as good as your last book, The Devil Who Raised in a Coffin.

I have read every one of your books. What I like the most is the suspense part. No matter how the comments criticize you, your most outstanding one is the logical detective reversal. It is rare to find novels of the same type. I still want to say, keep up the good work.

He said it was possible to create a trumpet. What was the name of his trumpet? Does any brother know?

When will the new book be released, Douya?

Please update it, you are too easily influenced.

It can be said that Xianxia + any theme is easy to attract traffic once written. I think the biggest problem for the author is that he did not choose the world view well.

I quite enjoyed reading the last one, but I can't stand this one.

This is the first time I read your book, and I have caught up with the latest progress. I simply read your old book. I objectively evaluate that your "Madam Dies at the Third Watch" is more interesting 🙂 with many twists and turns, but the plot rhythm of that book may not be suitable for today's fast pace.

Why is this book finished? I'm still planning to gain weight before reading it again.

That is the protagonist's own growth, or fighting monsters, upgrading and picking up equipment. Books written by this author basically have this problem. Most of the space is spent describing the world view and shaping the heroine, but there is very little description of the male protagonist's own growth. Every time there will be a bunch of people with extraordinary strength surrounding the protagonist, making the protagonist look extremely weak and giving him a strong sense of depression. To be honest, I wanted to give up the book every time I read a third of it. The plot and characterization are good, but the most basic part of a novel is defeating monsters, upgrading and picking up equipment. No one likes to read a garbage protagonist. Anyway, it's really hard to read. I seriously doubt that the author's book is a mediocre read. If this problem is not corrected, the author will suffer. {"NickName":"The best bean sprouts","UserId":211300707}