True Immortal of the Ruins

The writing is really cool, with dozens of chapters foreshadowing. The protagonist was beaten on the back by the midwife because he didn't cry at birth. Do you know this is a world of immortality? Then I had my Taoist body repaired, which made me feel good about myself.

Hello author, I have copied this book on other platforms. The feedback from readers is very good, it is very popular, and there are many rewards. I plan to pick up a new car in early July. I hope you can add a few more chapters so as not to affect my income or make my readers anxious.

This is not a classical fairy tale, this is a classical fantasy, right?

Thanks to the author. The time-travel plots in the previous chapters reminded me of the feeling of watching the sky-covering sky in high school. Ye Fan and his classmates gathered at Mount Tai, starting from ancient mythology, and started a story of group portrait practice. Just like Emperor Ye Tiandi gathered his classmates to meet in Mount Tai at the end, I was still very moved and had a sense of memories when I looked back. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write his own story.

But isn't the chapter on the three-year-old coming-of-age ceremony too much? The 3-year-old killed a pig with a knife... Forget it, I'll put my brain away first.

Obviously the rest of the writing is okay, but the first ten chapters of your book, emmm, I feel will dissuade a lot of people. The first chapter has the flavor of Long Aotian in the ancient city.

It's too exaggerated. Were those scenes at the beginning to show your sexual repression?

It's a sword energy and a flying shot, but the result is that the sword is thin in the hand, just like the missile is designed to transport you to punch you, which is ridiculous.

The first eleven chapters have been deleted without affecting reading 🙂

When you see the three top posts, you know the level of this article. The author has no brains at all.