Immortal

Some book friends said that the layout of this book is small, but in my eyes, there are small advantages in this book. If I write another fairy book fifteen years later, it will be nothing special. I always feel that the problem with this book is not the size of the book, but that the original down-to-earth feeling of the book is a bit weak. In fact, Toad wants to write a little bit of the taste of the world in every book, but he can always write that taste in the first 200,000 words of the book, but then it disappears. Of course, the "secular world" in this book is basically about casual cultivators in the city, but the ecological niche has not changed. Toad's book writing is better than imagination and control of plot clues, but it is weaker than the internal logical consistency of the setting, which is actually quite important in the online world after "The Lord of Mysteries". In books such as "The Immortal Gourd", "One Sword" and "Riding the Dragon", the world of mortals is the same: there are only a few types of people in the world, those who are pretentious are domineering, the weak and kind-hearted people are full of politeness, those who have no immortal fate are all scheming, and those who have worldly wealth are blind. The first characteristic of these people is not their profession and destiny. They are not traffickers, pawns, princes and generals, nor are they successful people and unlucky people. Their first characteristic is always "whether they have a destiny", but it is the former that best reflects the characteristics of ordinary people. This is not as simple as whether Toad has "thought it over". Could it be that he hasn't thought about a book in twenty years? It's not about "writing power", he has enough writing power. It's just that Toad has never thought carefully about what the social structure of the mortal world should be like in the transcendent world. Toad's world view always has the secular world, but the secular world and the world of cultivating immortals are essentially independent. Any power in the secular world is false. Even the more power you have in the secular world, the The "power to truly determine the fate of the world" is further away, but the secular world is still running stably according to its own logic. It's just that some people who are half-immortal and half-incompetent will be like a fish in water. The society written in this way is essentially a divided society in two halves, and there is no "qi of the earth". In the second half of the secular world, all social relationships are inherently fragile and irrelevant to the overall situation; in the upper half of the immortal society, everyone is happy to be grudged and pretended to be slapped in the face or to be slapped in the face. This kind of separation means that once the protagonist becomes a little stronger, it becomes less "vulgar" and the essential flavor of the book disappears. Toad can think more about this aspect and let the protagonist participate more in issues that affect and transform the relationship between immortals and secular people, instead of being limited to casual cultivators and immortal sects. Only then can the concept and taste of "vulgar immortals" be maintained. Of course, no one can teach him how to write when he reaches the level of toad. It's just that the early stages of this book are really amazing, and I hope it can make further progress, so I'm going to introduce some family advice that is difficult to learn from.

The toad yawned, fifth watch, what time, until early morning, and then he pretended to be dead for a day tomorrow, oh, what a loud tone.

The writing is not as exciting as it was at the beginning, and the more I read, the less interesting it becomes 😫

Why is the monthly ticket for such a beautiful book so low? I think this is the only one I can read in the near future 🙂

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Lord Toad Can you do more updates? I'll rely on you to pay for the monthly pass😁

After the reward of 500, it's just to come in and hit the lotus❗Two chapters per day are enough❗There are also one chapter per day, it's so boring! The new book has been prepared for two months, but there is no inventory? However, due to slow work and careful work, the quality can still be guaranteed❗The currently updated ten or so chapters are much better than the previous two, Magic Sword Roar. It can be seen that it has been polished for a long time, and there are also a lot of foreshadowings. Let's see how to build this fairy world! I feel that the character of the male protagonist Xiaoliu is still a bit like a charred face, Chen Qi! Finally, a word of advice, two chapters a day is a guarantee, three chapters a day and five chapters a breakout❗ Come on!

I feel that it is not as good as the previous martial arts book. It has more than ten chapters. The protagonist is just an ordinary low-level person with no special characteristics. There is no highlight that attracts people to read. I suggest you cut this one and start a new one.

No matter how much you want to tell the readers, being silent completely disrespects your parents and is full of calculations.

You've already cultivated 250 chapters and your level is still so damn low. Are you getting old, toad? Can't keep up? Even if you have cultivated the Buddha's heart and become the Buddha's light, your realm is still too low. . . It's good to fight, but the level is too low. . . There is such a magic that changes the spiritual roots of qualifications and qualifications. It is so defiant, and the realm is too damn low. It just gets stuck, just ink marks. If there is anything good to see, tell me, and if there is anything good to write, tell me! There are so many awesome skills but the realm is too low. You must be doing it on purpose. You are trying to cheat money by pretending to be old wine but not the medicine. It is a waste of my monthly ticket! I won't give it to you!

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It's too slow to warm up, and there's no cool point so far. The main character is always a small one, and there's no hope of getting stronger and reaching the top.

Ever since the main plot found a way to save the teacher sister, the whole book was incomprehensible, with a hammer here and there a mallet, and when it came to being an eunuch, I wrote as I pleased. I guess I didn't even have an outline, right? To kill the reader's emotions, the opening chapter is invincible, 10s barbarian, let it go

The old guys are no longer good, their time has passed

I only update 2,000 words a day, but I haven't updated more🙊.

So far in this book, the practice system is Qi Refining→Golden Pill→Spirit Embryo→True Yang→Taiyi, with a total of five levels, each level has ten levels/ten levels. However, although the realm is clear, the level suppression is not obvious. The combat power is very different. Not to mention the huge difference in the same level. Some geniuses and masters often leapfrog the level to kill the enemy, which really blurs the level boundaries. In this case, the upgrade system is of little significance. The hard work of training and upgrading has no suppressive effect, and they are counter-killed at every turn. Let's list them as follows for now The first level, Qi Refining Realm, has ten levels in total. The first layer is gold essence and jade liquid. The second level is to boil liquefied gas. The third level is where the Qi condenses into the orifice. Fourth level, innate essence. The fifth floor, condenses the truth and combines the evil. The sixth level is to gather Qi and refine Gang. On the seventh floor, Gang and Sha merge into one. The eighth level is to refine the energy and transform it into shape. The ninth level, refine your form and live in the world. The tenth floor is wonderful in form and spirit. The second level, the Golden Core Realm, has ten levels in total. The first level, gold liquid returns elixir. The second level is to seal the pill and shed the fire. The third level is Kanli Water and Fire. The fourth level, the fight turns the world around. The fifth level, Zhou Tianhuo. The sixth level, Chunyang Zifu. The seventh level, dragon and tiger have sex. The eighth level is full of clouds and clouds. The ninth level, three flowers gather at the top. The tenth level, the five qi are heading towards the yuan. The third level is the spiritual embryo realm, a total of ten realms. The first stage is when the casting method enters the body. The second realm, Tao seed. The third realm, Dao root. The fourth realm, Tao Fruit. The fifth realm, Tao embryo. The follow-up has not been made public yet. The fourth level, True Yang Realm, has only three levels. The first level is to kill the mortal. The second level is to destroy the gods. The third level, magical power. The fifth level, Taiyi realm. As of 11.20, Lao Liu's cultivation level is at the fourth level of Jindan. Every time Lao Liu upgrades, there is a closing poem, but I am too lazy to read it. If you are interested, you can read it in the book.

I started to keep books, and it was a grind to write.

The word count is approaching one million, and it was updated during the National Day. Recently, it was like squeezing out toothpaste. The protagonist broke through two levels in a row, proved the golden elixir, and killed the spiritual fetus in anger. His combat power was almost exhausted. I can continue reading now only because of Toad's personal charm. The novel actually no longer attracts me. If Toad had a slight illness, a headache or a fever, this novel would probably be gone. And this feeling is so strong.

You, an old toad, have learned how to use Kawen to blackmail you. How much ink do you have in your belly? Do we, the old bookworms, know? The front must be smooth but there are many unfinished parts at the back. If you want a monthly pass, I'll give it to you

I just saw a brother saying that he was hanging out on Zhihu, so I went over to take a look. Today alone, from 11 hours ago to 10 minutes ago, I have been giving likes to all kinds of answers. The topics I care about range from the US killing line to domestic current affairs to Dou Jingtong. In addition to not writing a book well. . . 😰🤓😎

I declare that it's a mess and it's a complete bankruptcy of credibility.

Hehe, I didn't order the latter one, so I came to the comment section specifically to see how many people have been deceived by toads.

You were so thick-skinned when you were a eunuch. In your new book, you say that the main character is greasy and you are banned for 50 years. It is really amazing.

When You Bini heard this, her hanging heart completely settled. The orthodox disciples of Xuanmen are far more persistent in their path than ordinary people. Chen Qianliu is not willing to destroy his foundation with others, but he is more magnanimous. She took a step forward, her voice was very low, and there was some unquestionable firmness: "Fellow Daoist Nan, this matter is extraordinary. We have been trapped in the Demon Palace for more than a year. If we can't use your power to escape, we will starve to death sooner or later. You condensed the human evil, but it is just a temporary loan. With the power of our souls, I can still turn to earth evil cultivation in the future. It is better than the six of us dying together." The female cultivator from Wulong Temple also came forward. Her name was Chi Xiu Niang. Although her face was still shy at the moment, her eyes were extremely bright. : "There are ancient records in our Five Dragons Temple. If the human evil spirit can be guided by the souls of five monks with different spiritual roots, it can be condensed into the 'Five Spirit Evil Spirits'. Not only will it not destroy the Taoist foundation, but it will also lay the foundation for turning to earth evil spirits in the future. Taoist friends are righteous monks. If you can With the blessing of Wulingsha, the spiritual power will flow more smoothly when drawing the talisman. This is a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity." Chen Qianliu's heart sank. He was trying to find an excuse casually, but he didn't expect that Chi Xiuniang could speak such a profound theory. Little did he know that the "Five Spiritual Evils" theory was cobbled together by Chi Xiu Niang out of fragments of ancient books in a desperate attempt to convince Chen Qianliu. But when these words fell into Chen Ganliu's ears, he had to reconsider - he had been stuck on the fourth level of Qi Refining for several months. If he could really take this opportunity to condense the human evil, it might save him a lot of trouble in his subsequent cultivation. Seeing Chen Qianliu's relaxed expression, You Bini hurriedly struck while the iron was hot: "Don't worry, fellow Taoist, we are all righteous monks, and we will never harm you while our souls are blending together. We can make a great oath from the inner demons. If there is even the slightest evil intention, we will be counterattacked by the inner demons and our cultivation will be ruined." After that, she took the lead to sit cross-legged, made a seal with her hands, and muttered something. The other four female cultivators also followed suit, and for a moment, five faint spiritual lights appeared in the stone chamber of the Demon Palace, which was the Taoist charm emitted when the inner demon's oath was formed. Chen Qianliu looked at the determined expressions of the five female cultivators in front of him with mixed feelings in his heart. He knew that if he tried to shirk it again, it would appear to be deliberate. No longer hesitating at the moment, he sat down cross-legged and said in a deep voice: "In that case, I will follow what all the fellow Taoists said. It's just that when the soul and soul are blending, you need to be calm and calm, and you must not be distracted." You Bini nodded and took out a hosta from his arms. The jade hosta was completely white, with complex runes engraved on it. It was a low-level auxiliary magic weapon. She handed the jade hairpin to Chen Qianliu: "This is the 'Concentration Hairpin'. It can protect your sea of ​​consciousness when the souls and souls are mingling, and avoid being interfered by our souls. Please wear it on your head." Chen Qianliu took the jade hairpin and felt his hands were slightly cold. The runes on the hairpin were faintly flowing with spiritual power. He put the jade hairpin on his bun as instructed, and suddenly a cool feeling spread from the top of his head throughout his body, and his sea of ​​consciousness became extremely clear. Chi Xiu Niang had adjusted her breath at this time. She looked at You Bini and said softly: "Senior Sister You, we are arranged according to the spiritual root attributes. Wood, fire, earth, gold and water sit around each other in order. This can make the breath of the five spirit evil spirits more balanced." You Bini nodded in agreement, and the five female cultivators quickly formed a circle according to the spiritual root attributes, with Chen Qianliu sitting in the center of the circle. As You Bini shouted softly, the five female cultivators closed their eyes at the same time, each working on their mental methods. In an instant, five auras of different colors rose from above their heads - You Bini has a wood spirit root, and the aura is emerald green; Chi Xiu Niang has a fire spirit root, and the aura is as red as a flame; next to her is Lu Ge'er from the Taifeng Sect, this female cultivator has an earth spirit root, and the aura is thick yellow; Five spiritual lights slowly converged on Chen Qianliu, forming a colorful light mask above his head. Chen Qianliu felt a gentle force wrap around him, and his sea of ​​consciousness shook slightly, as if five slender threads were trying to connect with his soul. He suppressed the throbbing in his heart, followed the method Chi Xiu Niang said before, relaxed his mind, and allowed the five threads to penetrate into the sea of ​​consciousness. When the first thread - You Bini's wood attribute soul thread came into contact with Chen Qianliu's soul, You Bini's body trembled suddenly, and a blush instantly appeared on his face. She could clearly feel the aura of Chen Qianliu's divine soul. It was a pure and clean aura, not as sinister as a demonic cultivator, nor as complex as some righteous cultivators. This feeling made her a little flustered, and she quickly gathered her mind and focused on channeling her spiritual power. When Chi Xiu Niang's fire attribute soul thread was connected, Chen Qianliu felt a flame igniting in the sea of ​​consciousness, but it was not hot, but instead brought a touch of warmth. Chi Xiuniang's heartbeat accelerated involuntarily. She did not expect that the fusion of soul and soul would be such a wonderful feeling. It was as if part of her consciousness had entered Chen Ganliu's sea of ​​consciousness and she could vaguely sense his thoughts. She saw that Chen Qianliu was running the mental method of Fu Xiu at this moment, trying to integrate the five spiritual powers of different attributes, and she couldn't help but secretly admired in her heart: "A disciple of the Qingye Sect, who can have such a calm state of mind at such an age, is already considered outstanding." After Lu Geer's earth attribute soul thread was connected, Chen Qianliu's sea of ​​consciousness became extremely stable, as if it was supported by the earth. Lu Ge'er's face was also full of embarrassment. She had always been introverted, and now she was mingling with a strange man, which made her feel a little embarrassed. But thinking that she could take this opportunity to get out of trouble, she still gritted her teeth and persisted, constantly injecting her earth-attribute spiritual power into Chen Qianliu's sea of ​​consciousness. When Sun Mei's metallic soul thread was connected, a sharp breath passed through Chen Qianliu's consciousness, but it became gentle the moment it came into contact with his soul. Sun Mei had the most cheerful personality among the five, but she couldn't help but lower her head at this moment, her ears turning red. She could feel the talisman insights contained in Chen Qian's sea of ​​six consciousnesses. Those insights were far more profound than she imagined, and she couldn't help but admire them. The last thing connected was Zhao Yue's water spirit root soul thread. The spiritual power of the water spirit root is the softest. When connected, the six consciousnesses of Chen Qian are like a spring breeze, and the slight sluggishness caused by the integration of the other four spiritual powers disappears instantly. Zhao Yue's cheeks also had a faint blush. She could feel a trace of hesitation in Chen Ganliu's soul, and she couldn't help but secretly thought: "Fellow Daoist Nan must have felt that this move was against Xuanmen rules, so he did this. But after all, he agreed to save us. Such a kind of heart is really rare." Five threads of souls intertwined in Chen Ganliu's sea of ​​consciousness, forming a colorful network of light. Chen Qianliu followed the method mentioned by Lu Qingyao and used his mental methods to try to integrate these five spiritual powers with different attributes into the "Five Spiritual Evils". At first, the five spiritual powers were mutually exclusive and difficult to integrate. Chen Qianliu was not impatient. He thought of his daily insights when drawing talisman. The talisman method emphasizes "controlling the talisman with the mind, and guiding the spirit with the talisman." Nowadays, when integrating spiritual power, we may also be able to learn from this principle. He concentrated, integrated his consciousness into the five spiritual powers, and guided them to follow a specific trajectory. You Bini and other five female cultivators also felt Chen Qianliu's efforts and increased their spiritual power output to cooperate with his guidance. Time passed little by little, and the colorful light mask in the stone chamber became brighter and brighter. The five spiritual powers in Chen Qian's six seas of consciousness gradually began to merge, forming a brand new spiritual power. This spiritual power has both the vitality of the wood attribute, the fiery heat of the fire attribute, the thickness of the earth attribute, the sharpness of the metal attribute, and the softness of the water attribute. At the moment when the five spiritual powers were completely integrated, Chen Qian's six seas of consciousness shook violently, and a powerful force spread from the sea of ​​consciousness throughout his body. His cultivation level began to improve rapidly, and the barrier of the fourth level of Qi Refining was instantly broken, and he directly entered the fifth level of Qi Refining. But this force did not stop and continued to attack the barrier of the fifth level of Qi Refining. You Bini and other five female cultivators also felt the improvement of Chen Qian's six cultivation levels, with joy on their faces. Chi Xiu Niang said even more excitedly: "It's done! The Five Spirit Demons are done! Fellow Daoist Nan's cultivation is still improving, and he might be able to directly break through to the sixth level of Qi Refining!" Chen Qianliu was also immersed in the joy of improving his cultivation at this moment. He could clearly feel that his soul had become stronger than before, and his understanding of the talismans was also deeper. He knew that, as Chi Xiu Niang said, these "Five Spirit Evils" did not destroy his Dao foundation, but made his foundation stronger. Half an hour later, Chen Qianliu's cultivation finally stabilized at the peak of the sixth level of Qi Refining. He slowly opened his eyes, a glimmer of light flashing in his eyes. He stood up, bowed to You Bini and other five female cultivators, and said in a deep voice: "Thank you all fellow Taoists for your help. Chen is very grateful." You Bini and other five female cultivators also stood up slowly. Their faces were pale at the moment, obviously due to excessive consumption of the soul blending. But seeing Chen Qianliu's improvement in cultivation, they all had smiles on their faces. You Bini said: "You don't need to be polite, fellow Daoist Nan. You and I are all on the same path, and we should support each other. Now that your cultivation has reached the peak of the sixth level of Qi refining, you must be able to find a way to leave the Demon Palace, right?" Chen Qianliu nodded, but he was thinking in his heart: "Now that your cultivation has improved, you can take this opportunity to send them out of the Demon Palace. But how to explain the method of leaving still needs to be explained. Think about it carefully." He pondered for a moment and said, "Fellow Taoists, don't worry. Now that my cultivation level has improved, there must be a way to break the restrictions that I couldn't break before. It's just that it will take some time to break the restrictions. Please rest here until I am ready, and then I will take everyone away." After hearing this, the five female cultivators, including You Bini, looked excited. They have been trapped in the devil's palace for more than a year, and now they finally have hope of escaping. Their joy is indescribable. Chi Xiuniang said, "Fellow Taoist Nan, just go and prepare. I'll just wait here." Chen Qianliu nodded in agreement, turned around and walked towards the door of the stone chamber. He knew that he had to think of a reasonable excuse as soon as possible to send these female cultivators out of the Demon Palace. Otherwise, he would have long nights and dreams, and if they discovered his true identity, he would be in big trouble.

When I woke up, I found that Qidian was engaged in the [Light of the Great God] event. Light up the light of Toad's greatness and help write "The Immortal" to reach 3 million+ words!

Although we old book fans know you very well about what you want to do when you write this, I still give you all the monthly tickets. After all, you are one of our own, old boy 😅

My writing skills are limited, so I draw frogs like toads and give my favorite books an ending. Please take it easy, thank you! The following is the chapter setting: Chapter 475 One hundred thousand heavenly soldiers descend on Jiu Gai Chapter 476 Who is the opponent in the chess game? Chapter 477 One game of chess is ruined for half a lifetime Chapter 478 The world is not kind to a dog's body Chapter 479 From now on, I have no intention of loving Good Night Chapter 480 The old wife suddenly reports that her old friend has arrived Chapter 481 A light shines in the eternal night Chapter 482 The immortals of Qianlu swear to live and die Chapter 483 Playing chess with stars all over the world Chapter 484 The wind and thunder in front of Zhentian Pass Chapter 485 The eighteen ancestors opened their eyes together Chapter 486 A sword comes from the west to break the sky Chapter 487 Millions of heavenly soldiers are helpless Chapter 488 Chunwei's spiritual vein is finally perfected Chapter 489 Nine turns of the true yang breaks the sky pass Chapter 490 The old spirit on the stone of three lives Chapter 491 Entering the game in exchange for life Chapter 492 The Immortal Alliance shocked the five parties Chapter 493 A glass of wine in front of the old wife's grave Chapter 494 Three lives in one dream Chapter 495 Everyone has their own chance to cherish it Chapter 496 How could an immortal ever have a secular heart? Chapter 497 The world of mortals is washed away and innocence is seen Chapter 498 The home of secular immortals is the human world Chapter 499 Old friends reunite and talk about the past Chapter 500 Encountering the Fox Fairy from the past Chapter 501 Three or two talisman pens are bald again Chapter 502 No regrets in this life and the path to immortality Chapter 503 Postscript: New World Chapter 504 Epilogue: The sun is too long while leaning on the railing