Douluo: the Peerless Dragon Elephant Regrets the Heaven

It feels like many chapters can be summarized in one sentence, which doesn't have much significance in advancing the plot. But it's not on the shelves, so it doesn't matter. I hope it's on the shelves and there won't be so many useless words.

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Such as the title: Dou Er Peerless, a relatively famous opportunity during the Tang Sect period The remnant soul of Electrolux, The Soul-Eating Carving Knife (Gold of Living Things), The 100,000-year-old fairy grass in the eyes of ice and fire, Snow Emperor's embryo, Ice Emperor's sacrifice, The fate of the auspicious beast Three-Eyed Golden Ni The power of the Earth Dragon Gate's Wanzai Xuan Ice Marrow and the Ice Divine Crystal, The gold of living things in the body of the golden substitute turtle in the Star Forest, The god-level soul bones and relics of the Dragon God in the "Dragon Tomb", the soul bone attached to the right palm of the Dark Gold Terrorclaw Bear, and the left arm soul bone of the Ice Jade Emperor Scorpion (fixed soul skill Ice Explosion).

Chun Chun Feiwu, a particularly top-notch beast martial spirit, ate all the top-quality elixirs used by Dou Er to lay the foundation, and then the entire sect trained him for so long. In the end, you absorbed 800 years of martial arts spirits for me, and you said it was the limit. I can only say that it is very, very outrageous.

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Douluo 2 is famous for its glory of the sun and moon, dragon chanting in the sky, senior sister, please wish me practice, and glory of the angel (I don't like Huo Yuhao's colleagues)

There are no ambrosia or magic tests. What do you think of the Shrek Seven Devils. Will you reach level 80 at the age of 25? . . . Judging from the speed of soul power cultivation. Xuantian Palace did not increase the cultivation speed much at all. . . Compared to the innate full soul power Or is there an upper limit to the soul power that can be absorbed every day? In other words, Xuantian Sky is a technique for improving the root bones? . . . No fairy grass, no divine test. How many levels can Tangshan reach at the age of 25 just by relying on Xuantian Kung? . . .

The soul skills are the Spear of Hades, the Furnace of Hell, and the Pure Land of the Gods 😜

Dou Er Peerless Tang Sect: T0. Gu Yuena (no need to say more) 1. Meng Hongchen (Ms. Meng) 2. Auspicious beast (loves to eat brains) 3. Snow Emperor (Ice Sky and Snow Girl) 4. Zhang Lexuan (Elder Sister) 5. Orange (Empress and God of War) 6. Wei Na (Princess Tianhun) 7. Ma Xiaotao (Phoenix Saint) 8. Ling Luochen (Ice Law) 9. Ye Guyi (Angel) 10. Ice Emperor (Ice Scorpion Loli) 11. Xu Jiujiu (Imperial Princess) 12. Ning Tian (Nine Treasures Rich Woman) 13. Han Ruoruo (Intellectual Big Sister) 14. Wu Ming (Irritable Royal Sister) ps: Choose a few from them. These are the more popular female characters. If you write a heroine, you should also choose from them🤔

I just found out that he is the author of Jade Poison King, so there must be less emotion. You are really not good at this aspect, but you are very good at portraying the martial soul family and inheritance.

Personally, it feels quite similar.

Good guy, I thought the protagonist was just a tall, muscular man, but I didn't expect him to be a bald guy 🙂

The Holy King and Elephant King is used as a template, and you can create your own soul skills like the Elephant King's Whip, God's Hand, Dominator's Body, and Dominator's Eye. Anyway, a divine elephant holding heaven in its hands and stepping on hell with its feet can be regarded as being on the same side as an angel. If you can't get the original version, why can't you imitate it?

I didn't read much, and my early writing was too divergent. I often wrote about an insignificant thing, and then just followed the details and wrote hundreds of words. The divergence in many places can be done in a few strokes, making it more compact and smooth.

Don't do anything fancy, just stick to the Douluo system and don't go too far with cheats. The protagonist is 3 meters tall, which woman can handle it?

Novel ideas that I have never seen before, jealous of the author's talent

It started out okay, but quickly became wordy. Each chapter talks about extended topics, and the plot advances slowly.

It looks good, but it doesn't have much to offer and is a bit watery. It's hard for people to decide whether to put it on the shelves or not to order it all.

Your martial spirit is already Dragon Elephant, not the entire Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu. Personally, I think Huo Yuhao's opportunity, don't take the ones that are not suitable for you. There must be someone who can compete with the protagonist to be interesting. In the later stage, it will be interesting to behead the guest and take down the dog, and take Huo to fight Tang San together.

The front is very dull, but later the world view gradually expands and becomes more interesting, but the front is really dull.

One is action, shocking the world; the other is emotion, touching the world. There is such a big difference between the two, and we should not make this mistake.

Why do you need a 100,000-year-old soul beast and a soul ring? I feel that many works randomly absorb a bunch of different skills from 100,000-year-old soul beasts, but they are actually useless. I feel that twin martial arts create a more mature and stable one that can be linked. The combination of soul skills is more important. It is not easy for him to practice the 100,000-year-old soul beast itself. Moreover, if he absorbs too much, it will also burden his mental strength. The skills he is given are almost useless later and cannot be used with his own skill set. It is a complete waste.

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Damn it, I'm chasing you today, it's fucking limited to free of charge, what happened to Qidian?

What does the Holy Spirit teach that Chen Ming is the Son of God? ? Why do you feel so poisonous? ?

I feel that the author's writing is very loose, very loose. It's the kind of trivial matter that takes half a chapter to introduce the background in detail, which seems very watery. It's been five chapters and I haven't even finished talking about a trivial matter. Moreover, the author likes to write settings very much. He often writes a chapter about setting, but the plot does not advance at all. Generally speaking, it's just water. If you put the content of five chapters into one or two chapters, your results will definitely be much better than what you have now. It's rare to find a Douluo fan whose protagonist is a tough guy type, which can only be said to be a pity.

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1. Huo Yuhao: Level 99 Ultimate Douluo, Level 9 Soul Master, defeated the Beast God Ditian in a duel 2. Ditian: Defeated the Level 98 Xuanzi in a duel, defeated the Level 98 Poison Immortal in a duel, and suppressed the 99th level in a duel. Level Xuanzi 3. Evil Emperor: Almost defeated level 98 Huo Yuhao + Tang Wutong, injured Ditian in a duel 4. Snow Emperor: No clear record, set to be undefeated in the extreme north 5. Niu Tian: Level 99 Ultimate Douluo 6. Mu En: Level 99 Ultimate Douluo, 98 Defeat Poison to death 7. Ye Jishui: Level 99 Extreme Douluo, resist 10 level 9 high-explosive fixed-fire soul-guided artillery shells 8. Kong Deming: Level 10 soul mentor, defeat level 99 Xuanzi 9. Long Xiaoyao: 99 Level Extreme Douluo, suppressed Xuanzi and Du Bushu teamed up 10. Xuanzi: Level 99 Extreme Douluo, lost to Du Bushu at level 98 Side, Di Tian, lost to Di Tian and Kong Deming at level 99 11. Titan: Level 98 Super Douluo, clearly stronger than 98 Level Xuanzi 12. Poison will not kill you: a level 98 super Douluo, defeated Xuanzi, and when the soul core was ignited, he resisted the dragon Xiaoyao undefeated 13. Poison will kill you: a level 98 super Douluo, lost to a level 98 Level Moon 14. Yan Shaozhe: Level 98 Super Douluo, escaped from the siege of the Holy Spirit Cult powerhouse at Level 96 15. Zhong Liwu: 98 Level Super Douluo, teamed up with Fengling to severely injure Poison Immortal 16. Ye Yulin: Level 9 Soul Master 17. Xiong Jun: Failed to defeat Mr. Song in single combat, but was undefeated against Mr. Song Xian Liner together 18. Fengling: Level 97 Super Douluo, completely defeated by Level 92 in single combat. Level Huo Yuhao 19. Xian Lin'er: Expected to be a level 97 super Douluo, and tie with level 95 Zhang Peng at level 95 20. Mr. Song: Level 97 super Douluo 21. Ice Emperor: The upper limit of combat power was locked by Mr. Xiong 22. Ten Thousand Demon King: Draw with an unknown person Level 96 Su Lao 23. Jing Hongchen: Level 9 Soul Master 24. Tianyang Douluo: Level 97 Super Douluo 25. Red King: Lost to Level 98 Xuanzi in a duel 26. Zhang Peng: Level 96 Super Douluo

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