Douluo Dalu: From the Start, I Had an Infinite Blood Egg

I immediately abandoned the Holy Spirit Church fanfiction after it came out. Although I'm not a fan of the original work, this addition was superfluous. Many fanfics fail to gain traction for this reason; they always try to inject other elements, resulting in something completely mismatched.

In the original novel, Tang Hao had already noticed Tang San's strangeness, but as a member of the Tang family, those who knew better understood. The four clans that had once been subordinate to Tang Hao were crying in the toilet.

The protagonist is perfectly assimilated by Douluo Continent, lacking his own thoughts. Even in a world where immortality is possible, he's like a salted fish, just getting by.

Want to play Fantasy Mountain and Sea? Start with an infinite health egg

I suggest adding a "scumbag" male lead attribute when writing another Douluo fanfic. The protagonist should possess Tang San's body and secretly commit treacherous acts while Dai Mubai, Oscar, Zhu Zhuqing, and Ning Rongrong are in a relationship. The description should be ambiguous, but the bedroom scenes should be brief. Please arrange the "golden finger" (powerful ability/cheat) for the protagonist.

Looking at the table of contents, it's all about fighting against the Holy Spirit Cult, which is meaningless.

The plot is dragging on too much. The Holy Spirit Cult is already over ten chapters in, and we're probably only halfway through. It would take the author half a month to write this part, and there's no real improvement or other exciting moments. It's likely to alienate readers.

The ultimate evolution of the entire Douluo Beast Martial Soul is the Dragon God. All sorts of miscellaneous god-level Martial Souls are useless; the Dragon God is better at everything and is the strongest in everything.

The protagonist knows the original story, but it offers no benefit. He has no special advantages, and his initial provocation of Tang San is utterly suicidal. That's a huge flaw! If you can't afford to offend him, don't just avoid him. Even if you're annoyed, don't try to kill him with a single blow; otherwise, don't even think about causing trouble for yourself.

It's a pity. It was alright at the beginning, but the later Martial Soul evolutions became too flashy. It would be better if Martial Souls only had one evolution path. All this talk about dragons, grass, and bears... Why not just have a Dark Gold Terrorclaw Bear evolution and move on to something else? It would be so much better without all this fancy stuff.