Su Jing had many nicknames in his life.
He is a once-in-a-thousand-year-old martial arts prodigy and the "Instant Actor" who is famous all over the world.
He is the notorious leader of the intelligence organization and the "death-killing Yama" who kills people without any calculation.
He was the first warrior who dared to break ground on the heads of the Five Surnames and Seven Hopes, and he was the "gravedigger" of a wealthy family.
He is the leader of the anti-thief organization sweeping the world, and the "lamplighter" who ignites the anger of the grassroots.
He is the peerless strongman who drags the gods and Buddhas from the holy mountains down from the clouds, and is the "Sage of Heaven" who ends this absurd cycle of reincarnation for thousands of years.
However, these are all stories for later.
Now, he is just a young man who has just come to Fucheng from a remote country. He only wants to cling to noble people and establish himself in Fucheng. Little does he know that he has already reached a fork in his life...
Reader comments
It's good to read. I like this kind of book with positive energy.
The author must persevere. I will vote for you as soon as I can. Don't believe those smoky remarks in the comment area. People with a sense of justice just don't like to talk, not dead. In a novel full of violence, please finish writing this novel with a sense of justice thousands of times.
The sense of justice is too strong and boring. It is better to watch the postgraduate entrance examination politics. You can't think more about yourself and help your own people, but don't help others outright. The first step is to change this dirty world. You can't stop others from doing bad things, and you can't make them change their evil ways and feel uncomfortable. You can just say that he is the incarnation of the Holy Light. It's too rigid. At present, the logic is basically reasonable. The protagonist has a strong sense of justice, and it is also explained that he was a policeman in his previous life. I can only say that it is barely reasonable, as long as you can reconcile it yourself.
The protagonist is too stiff. There are no books on the level of Above the Galaxy and Empire of Shadows (I haven't read them). It makes me want to read Martial Arts Master again.
Alas, it's a pity that I discovered it too early and it wasn't enough to watch.
It's well written, but it's very frustrating. I'm tired of being a bull and a horse, and I don't want to be beaten up in the novel, but the writing is really good.
It is worthy of the power of reincarnation from the dirty soil.
The author changed his name, all I can say is, it's time!
The three-dimensional characterization, world building, and ability system are no problem. The overall writing style is considered top-notch after reading it for so many years.
It's really time for your original large size to be scrapped.
This kind of writing style will make those who love love it to death, and those who can't stand it will even more. Contradictions are also discussed in a balanced way. No matter how good the writing is, there will always be people who support the book.
There is really a problem with the plot arrangement. There are more than 50 pictures, and it is still struggling within a big contradiction. According to the development of the plot, it will take about a hundred pictures to climb out of this pit.
In the introduction, it gives people the feeling of being in a yakuza style, hacking and slashing along the way. After reading dozens of chapters, they are all complaining about how bad the world is.
It takes more than 100 pictures to demonstrate the justice of the protagonist's resistance. It takes so long that even if you read it all night, it would be difficult to pick it up again.
Let's deal with a few small conflicts while growing. Can't we get out of this pit first and then slowly make arrangements later?
The author's writing style says that he is a newcomer, which is impossible. Then he must have wanted to change something when he changed his number, but now he must be back to his old ways.
In this situation where the plot is protracted and depressing, good writing cannot change the fact that it is difficult to get into the plot without something exciting.
Maybe there will be very few people who leave, but they will continue to leave, and fewer and fewer people will see it. Finally, it will crystallize. Crystallization is a good thing, but there will really not be too many people, and it will return to the original state of the large size.
Reading novels is for relaxation. There are more than 50 pictures and it took two hours. It was a little bit refreshing but I couldn't put it down to prove the justice of your protagonist's hacking in the future.
Even if it is a daily relaxing plot, there is not a trace of it.
Before I even saw the random chopping, my patience was almost worn out.
I personally admit that the writing is very good, but it is absolutely impossible for me to come back after raising the book.
Just like some readers who saw that my writing was too long and were too lazy to read it, so they just turned to the bottom.
There's something, there's something, it's pretty good so far
At first I thought it was only three hundred, but now it's already three thousand. I'm still afraid of the cold.
Reading the first paragraph, I feel like the author has watched too much of Infernal Affairs and is crazily feeding his own personal stuff.
Time travel investigator
Investigation report: "Number" - 291
Investigation target: "The Legend of Tai Tian" - the male protagonist - [Su Jing]
Investigation result: [Borrowing the dead]
Judgment basis:
Abnormal traits:
Pass through A Yue investigator, as the name suggests, is a profession that investigates and records the travel situations of travelers. It aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all worlds know the travel situations of travelers in this world in advance, and volunteers to provide observers with fast travel information query services
If there are any fallacies, I hope to correct them
——Wanling Feast Zhenjun Stay on July 11, 2025
There is something
You can invest even if you haven't finished the first chapter. Just tell me whether it's valuable or not 😁
Why was there a knife on the first day it was put on the shelves 😢
Only when you write what you want to write is you truly comfortable
Write what you want to write and express it sincerely. Of course some readers will like it.
The author must keep at it! There are readers for books like this!
Some suggestions
I can give the book a score of 6-7. Currently, one of the main reasons for the lack of subscriptions is the character of the protagonist. Qidian readers have always disliked such noble and upright protagonists. The limited readers have conducted another screening. The plot setting is very interesting, but to be honest, some plots are written in such a way that it feels like you can see the whole story at a glance. For example, when you wrote about Xie, I knew that she would definitely bring the protagonist into the gang, and you deliberately mentioned the little girl, so I guessed There is a plot like this at the end. This is not a systematic novel after all. I can still write it even if I can read it at a glance. Now, what is the plot at the end (I haven't read a few chapters). I guess it is that the protagonist completes the test in a new place and makes friends with forces. During this period, Huang Chiren's men were forced to do it openly due to the pressure from Mr. Chen. They secretly engaged the protagonist and thought about bringing the protagonist back to the Huang family. Then it would be a great achievement, and so on. Or even Gou Chensi seems to ignore the Huang family's ill will towards him and relies on the protagonist to turn the tables on himself. I think you should try to bury some threads and create a slightly grand plot at the end of the volume. You can't just keep writing step by step. You should try to add to this thread and let readers see more interesting plots. We don't want to watch such bitterness and hatred every day. A typical example is the first volume of The Mysterious One, let's see how the squid buried the thread, and the first volume of The Immortal Eater. In these two stories, one battlefield is in Genting, and one story takes place in the small town of Fenghuai. A closed space without outside forces is the easiest to write at a high level. As for the grand narrative, you can look at the world view of Chen Dong and Mao Ni at the beginning. As for the other two loopholes of trusting the protagonist so quickly, and don't keep repeating sentences mechanically to reflect the anger and outlook in the heart, read the book under Binglin Shenxia, how to write about Xiao Gu's heart, and write about Xiao Qiu's tenacity. These two characters are early abuse of the protagonist, but the writing is very good. The book is a good book, but there are still many shortcomings. I hope the author will work hard and move forward.
Good! Good! Good!
Nothing to say, he is a comrade, a warrior for his old man, and a talking steel plate. Don't pay attention to the buzz, let the reactionaries inside and outside tremble in front of us!
The more I look at it, the more contradictory it becomes, and the more strange it becomes. Is it always a drag bottle that presses hard?
It would be much better if today and yesterday were posted on the same day.
Yesterday you broke the story and it was really disgusting🤢
The first time I bought a book, I actually cut it. . . . .
Alas, it's too late, brother. The beginning of this book is really exciting, but I don't have time to read the novel during this period, which is a pity!
Looking at it again, I felt that the contrast between the before and after of this book was too great. The protagonist's hang-up is too small. If the hang-up were stronger, it would feel like a different ending.
I don't know if that's correct, but I hope it helps.
It's good to read. I like this kind of book with positive energy.
The author must persevere. I will vote for you as soon as I can. Don't believe those smoky remarks in the comment area. People with a sense of justice just don't like to talk, not dead. In a novel full of violence, please finish writing this novel with a sense of justice thousands of times.
The sense of justice is too strong and boring. It is better to watch the postgraduate entrance examination politics. You can't think more about yourself and help your own people, but don't help others outright. The first step is to change this dirty world. You can't stop others from doing bad things, and you can't make them change their evil ways and feel uncomfortable. You can just say that he is the incarnation of the Holy Light. It's too rigid. At present, the logic is basically reasonable. The protagonist has a strong sense of justice, and it is also explained that he was a policeman in his previous life. I can only say that it is barely reasonable, as long as you can reconcile it yourself. The protagonist is too stiff. There are no books on the level of Above the Galaxy and Empire of Shadows (I haven't read them). It makes me want to read Martial Arts Master again.
Alas, it's a pity that I discovered it too early and it wasn't enough to watch.
It's well written, but it's very frustrating. I'm tired of being a bull and a horse, and I don't want to be beaten up in the novel, but the writing is really good.
It is worthy of the power of reincarnation from the dirty soil.
The author changed his name, all I can say is, it's time! The three-dimensional characterization, world building, and ability system are no problem. The overall writing style is considered top-notch after reading it for so many years. It's really time for your original large size to be scrapped. This kind of writing style will make those who love love it to death, and those who can't stand it will even more. Contradictions are also discussed in a balanced way. No matter how good the writing is, there will always be people who support the book. There is really a problem with the plot arrangement. There are more than 50 pictures, and it is still struggling within a big contradiction. According to the development of the plot, it will take about a hundred pictures to climb out of this pit. In the introduction, it gives people the feeling of being in a yakuza style, hacking and slashing along the way. After reading dozens of chapters, they are all complaining about how bad the world is. It takes more than 100 pictures to demonstrate the justice of the protagonist's resistance. It takes so long that even if you read it all night, it would be difficult to pick it up again. Let's deal with a few small conflicts while growing. Can't we get out of this pit first and then slowly make arrangements later? The author's writing style says that he is a newcomer, which is impossible. Then he must have wanted to change something when he changed his number, but now he must be back to his old ways. In this situation where the plot is protracted and depressing, good writing cannot change the fact that it is difficult to get into the plot without something exciting. Maybe there will be very few people who leave, but they will continue to leave, and fewer and fewer people will see it. Finally, it will crystallize. Crystallization is a good thing, but there will really not be too many people, and it will return to the original state of the large size. Reading novels is for relaxation. There are more than 50 pictures and it took two hours. It was a little bit refreshing but I couldn't put it down to prove the justice of your protagonist's hacking in the future. Even if it is a daily relaxing plot, there is not a trace of it. Before I even saw the random chopping, my patience was almost worn out. I personally admit that the writing is very good, but it is absolutely impossible for me to come back after raising the book. Just like some readers who saw that my writing was too long and were too lazy to read it, so they just turned to the bottom.
There's something, there's something, it's pretty good so far
At first I thought it was only three hundred, but now it's already three thousand. I'm still afraid of the cold.
Reading the first paragraph, I feel like the author has watched too much of Infernal Affairs and is crazily feeding his own personal stuff.
Time travel investigator
Investigation report: "Number" - 291 Investigation target: "The Legend of Tai Tian" - the male protagonist - [Su Jing] Investigation result: [Borrowing the dead] Judgment basis: Abnormal traits: Pass through A Yue investigator, as the name suggests, is a profession that investigates and records the travel situations of travelers. It aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all worlds know the travel situations of travelers in this world in advance, and volunteers to provide observers with fast travel information query services If there are any fallacies, I hope to correct them ——Wanling Feast Zhenjun Stay on July 11, 2025
There is something
You can invest even if you haven't finished the first chapter. Just tell me whether it's valuable or not 😁
Why was there a knife on the first day it was put on the shelves 😢
Only when you write what you want to write is you truly comfortable
Write what you want to write and express it sincerely. Of course some readers will like it.
The author must keep at it! There are readers for books like this!
Some suggestions
I can give the book a score of 6-7. Currently, one of the main reasons for the lack of subscriptions is the character of the protagonist. Qidian readers have always disliked such noble and upright protagonists. The limited readers have conducted another screening. The plot setting is very interesting, but to be honest, some plots are written in such a way that it feels like you can see the whole story at a glance. For example, when you wrote about Xie, I knew that she would definitely bring the protagonist into the gang, and you deliberately mentioned the little girl, so I guessed There is a plot like this at the end. This is not a systematic novel after all. I can still write it even if I can read it at a glance. Now, what is the plot at the end (I haven't read a few chapters). I guess it is that the protagonist completes the test in a new place and makes friends with forces. During this period, Huang Chiren's men were forced to do it openly due to the pressure from Mr. Chen. They secretly engaged the protagonist and thought about bringing the protagonist back to the Huang family. Then it would be a great achievement, and so on. Or even Gou Chensi seems to ignore the Huang family's ill will towards him and relies on the protagonist to turn the tables on himself. I think you should try to bury some threads and create a slightly grand plot at the end of the volume. You can't just keep writing step by step. You should try to add to this thread and let readers see more interesting plots. We don't want to watch such bitterness and hatred every day. A typical example is the first volume of The Mysterious One, let's see how the squid buried the thread, and the first volume of The Immortal Eater. In these two stories, one battlefield is in Genting, and one story takes place in the small town of Fenghuai. A closed space without outside forces is the easiest to write at a high level. As for the grand narrative, you can look at the world view of Chen Dong and Mao Ni at the beginning. As for the other two loopholes of trusting the protagonist so quickly, and don't keep repeating sentences mechanically to reflect the anger and outlook in the heart, read the book under Binglin Shenxia, how to write about Xiao Gu's heart, and write about Xiao Qiu's tenacity. These two characters are early abuse of the protagonist, but the writing is very good. The book is a good book, but there are still many shortcomings. I hope the author will work hard and move forward.
Good! Good! Good!
Nothing to say, he is a comrade, a warrior for his old man, and a talking steel plate. Don't pay attention to the buzz, let the reactionaries inside and outside tremble in front of us!
The more I look at it, the more contradictory it becomes, and the more strange it becomes. Is it always a drag bottle that presses hard?
It would be much better if today and yesterday were posted on the same day.
Yesterday you broke the story and it was really disgusting🤢
The first time I bought a book, I actually cut it. . . . .
Alas, it's too late, brother. The beginning of this book is really exciting, but I don't have time to read the novel during this period, which is a pity! Looking at it again, I felt that the contrast between the before and after of this book was too great. The protagonist's hang-up is too small. If the hang-up were stronger, it would feel like a different ending. I don't know if that's correct, but I hope it helps.