Technology Invades the World of Immortality

After reading it, I realized that the performance of this book was not satisfactory. After thinking about it, it may be due to the following reasons: First, the author chose the wrong category. He should have chosen science fiction, a future world such as "Forty Thousand Years of Cultivation". This book has a strong sense of science fiction, but a weak sense of fantasy cultivation. Modern immortality itself is highly collectivist, which is inconsistent with the prevalence of individual heroism in mainstream immortality novels. The setting is a relatively new and innovative book, and there is a lack of reference experience. Most of the author's energy should be focused on the immortal sect, lacking the support of traditional culture. Therefore, the overall feeling is that traditional cultivation of immortality is useless. To be honest, I personally feel that it is not very friendly to most people who like traditional immortals. (It is more like cultivating the truth than cultivating immortals, and there is no label for traveling between the two worlds.) Second, the writing is average and the experience is insufficient. The author likes to use metaphors when describing the setting. To be honest, it is terrible and difficult to understand. It is not because the setting is difficult to understand but the metaphor is difficult to understand. The setting is the setting. There is no need to explain too much, just give a definition. The map setting was also incomplete in the early stage. In the later stage, it was basically based on the readers' imagination. Maybe the author didn't think about it well at the time. Personally, I feel that what attracts me most about this book is not modern immortality or scientific thought, but collectivism and the author's understanding and description of modern immortality society. (A bit red said 🙂)

The writing is very good. The one about Explosive Cluster Heavy Artillery is good except for the part about women at the beginning that is too dragging and dragging. For example, if you ask the rich woman to kiss the male protagonist at the beginning, you will lose a lot of popularity. Change the title and introduction of the book and highlight the plot - where you rule the Thousand Islands. Remember not to give such good treatment to the Thousand Islands place.

Alas, when I left a message on QReading, there was no reply or feedback. How could you give me 50 billion for your latest chapter? Obviously 500 million is enough to finish the job, why not give the rest to the Immortal Sect companions? Why are you selling it so cheaply when you are giving Siyuan Dan? Just ask them directly for the best spiritual stone. What else do you want if you don't give it to the Immortal Sect? Can't we really sell Xianmen's things at a cheap price?

I came here because of the limited exemption. The idea of ​​this book is great and the story is well written. It is beautiful and worth recommending. Ten years ago, when the eve national server was still there, I played for a while. I did not participate in the space war. Instead, I flew the original ship according to the coordinates of space wonders found on the Internet. I saw space tombstones, Titan wreckage, the Prime Gate, encountered space pirates, and star gates blocked by bubbles. The space battle part of this book made me feel the mood at that time. But there are also some flaws. The Kyushu part of the story is too fragmented after the protagonist goes to space. Although it is due to the realm, the protagonist who just used so many weapons has become a marginal figure in Kyushu. All in all, it's still a good story with a score of 8 or above. The beginning of this book seems to talk about the idea of ​​using clusters of heavy artillery to bombard immortal cultivators? I haven't read that book, can someone shed some light on it for me?

It's very classic. There are women everywhere I go. I don't know who they are. There are also childhood sweethearts. The protagonists have low emotional intelligence. I don't know what the author thinks. Maybe he got too deep into it and thought he was in love.

The author has been emphasizing that the world of immortality does not value the productivity of mortals. Now that the protagonist has earned enough resources to build a foundation, he feels that after building a foundation, he will establish a force and start to capture the world of immortality.

This book suits my taste. I hope that it will not be like Da Ri Jianzi in the future.

Author, are you trying to sell sheep's head to dog meat? Can you please stop trying to mix your values ​​into novels to preach? This type of novel has already had two hits. It's awesome that you can write this with such a promising subject matter.

Classic college entrance examination. There is a rich woman next to you. She has to show up in three or two chapters. The key point is that she is the main character's school girl. How they met is not explained. She can buy supplies from other worlds and find the rich woman in inconvenient places. The material control is not a problem at all, the tool man's attributes are off the charts, the protagonist is just as confused about the love brain behavior of women, and the situation in the other world is opened by a beautiful girl from a powerful family. There are also a lot of inner dramas. I don't want to eat soft food for fear of affecting my practice. I can only say that the taste is too strong.

The writing is good, very in line with the taste, the plot is advanced reasonably, the writing skills are good, and it is attractive.

I said that after writing more than one million words, no one read it. It was strange that it became popular after writing like this. It's about technology invading immortality, but the subject matter is an old theme like two worlds being corrupted. Originally, this kind of theme can be very attractive if it captures the fun points and is well written. However, if you arrange a world of scientific cultivation of immortality and a world of traditional cultivation of immortality, you completely abandon the advantages (the culture, consciousness, and environment of the two worlds are too small and lack of interesting points. The senses written are like Europeans using glass beads to fool the natives). The writing itself is average, and the protagonist is a steely straight man who is close to Han Laomo. It's really not interesting.

I hope there will be more than one female protagonist, but the upper limit for a single female protagonist is too low in this Internet environment, and there are also many portrayals of the Chu family sister. If you don't accept it, no matter how you deal with it, there will be thunderstorms.

Above the grain and grass, next to the fairy grass, the plot is very smooth, much better than the ones on the ranking list.

Why is the author's novel not popular? It's because he didn't write it out. Originally, the theme was quite interesting. You can read more historical novels.

Don't have too many heroines, don't even have one. Don't really confirm the heroine. You can have a confidante, but don't have a confirmed heroine.

Spending a long paragraph describing the exam is equivalent to downloading a dungeon. The key is that the main character gains very little from the dungeon, and there is almost no upgrade from killing monsters. Skipping the reading will have no impact at all. The other world is purely free-range and does not develop. Farming is completely random. I have no idea what the point of this book is.

The protagonist is neither a R&D genius nor a talent with great imagination. . . Also suppressed. . . . I'm out of ideas. . .

It can only be said that the world view has not been revealed in the front, because this is a very ordinary novel about the exchange of science and technology between two worlds. But after the author unfolds the world view in the back, and the grand plan of the immortal sect, I think the author's subsequent plot becomes more and more exciting! ! ! The only flaw of the author is that there are few explosive points in the beginning, which is not exciting enough, so few people can read it. The author's subsequent chapters are getting more and more exciting, but because there is no promotion in the front, the popularity of this novel is not very high! ! ! I can only hope that the author will do better next time! ! The author is just lucky! ! ! I suggest the author improve it so that more people can see posts with excellent comments!

When I saw this introduction, I thought of Dainichi Jianzi again.

I can only say that the subject matter is phenomenal, there is definitely content to write about, and people can be interested in it But there is something wrong with what the author wrote, especially the latest pictures. The world view is inexplicable. What is it about? What the hell?

Overall, it's good. The thinking about society is also very profound, and the imagination is also very good. However, some details are not clear in writing. However, it is still a bit intellectually depressing to write about outsiders, but it makes sense.

Seeking success

Mortal: Start from the game store

A novel that works. In the early stage, the protagonist's pretentiousness was a little stiff, but in the later stage, his IQ was gradually unlocked. There were many minor problems but no major ones. I must write it down.

It's so boring. There are so many pictures and they don't mention anything about cultivation. There are so many resources and they don't do anything to improve your cultivation.

Support me

I haven't read a few chapters on the shelf for a long time, so I picked it up and it has a single female protagonist, ugh

There isn't much of a climax, it's a bit bland.