Two Worlds: Starting from Occupying the School in the End of the World

It's been a long time since I've seen a very creative fairy-grass-level book with good writing and supporting characters with online IQs. After reading it, I think there are only three small drawbacks: 1. Dual World may have multiple female companions and play Liu Xiahui. At the beginning, the emphasis will be on the writing, but later on, it may Being reminded to downplay the role of a eunuch 2. The switching between the two worlds stops immediately, giving a feeling of a designated protagonist 3. One world is cyberspace, but the other world allows certain things to appear frequently. If nothing else, it is easy to be cheated if it is not well written.

So far, except for the treatment of parallel girlfriends, the other parts are good. In terms of plot, there are only two worlds: the cyber world and the zombie apocalypse world, not unlimited streaming. In the cyber world, when corporate dogs are involved in the company's secret war, in the doomsday world, they use prosthetic technology and wizard professional farming to play tower defense, use technology from the cyber world to build a doomsday fortress, and use extraordinary resources from the doomsday world to upgrade their wizard level. The upgrade system is micrograms. The moon monster that brings corpse transformation to the apocalyptic world and the tentacle monster of the wizard profession have a strong flavor. The "Church Witch Hunt", "Assassin League" and other plot points make sure that there is something to write, and there will be no such thing as transfiguration. Personally, I very much prefer the Ke-type ability system. Upgrading will bring a qualitative change, and there will be no "online game feeling" - only the numerical value seems to be changed after upgrading. Typical examples are tomato-eating types who constantly change maps, and the emperor ascends and becomes a miner.

Generally speaking, the characterization of this book is three-dimensional. The operating logic of each character is his own logic, which can match people and abilities and remember them. At the same time, the length of the events in the text is not abrupt, and they are well prepared. There is even far-reaching information foreshadowing, and the ideas buried earlier can be recycled. According to my evaluation, this book can be regarded as a Jiangxi stir-fry, not up to the top, because although it explains the social status, it does not have the huge conflicts reflected in the top novels. The short film shows a complete set of human conflicts, so it can only be regarded as an ordinary dinner. It has everything it should have, is nutritious, and can be full. It is okay.

I wish I could have encountered this book when it was a million words long. 😭

I have read several novels that contain the concept of the cyber world. This book made me interested in learning about cyber games for the first time. It is not uncomfortable to read, not so crazy or twisted. Showing the sense of cyber-science fiction, and having the modern post-apocalyptic world as a resource and helper, the perspective given by the protagonist is not so bad. This month's tickets are all for you. Come on! p. S The cyber worldview I know is all novel content, and may be second creations.

Very well written. But there is an unknown setting that I cannot understand. Up to the plot I'm seeing now. The successors these large groups are looking for are all women. I don't see anything outstanding about these successors. I hope the author can write about why they were chosen, or what qualifications they have for being chosen. Except for the protagonist, everyone else in this book is too mediocre. The roles in the top organization are somewhat similar. The other supporting characters don't have any very memorable points.

I am willing to give 5 points out of 10 6 points for setting creativity 4 points for language logic Although the dual world setting is not very rigorous, it can be rounded off. The integration of fantasy superpowers and technological abilities is not very smooth. There is basically no natural sense of complementation between the two. There are only a few additions when talking about the setting, which makes it difficult to feel the necessity of various professional abilities. Basically, except for the protagonist's wizard profession, there is no need for the other professions to be reflected at all. Even if everyone's professions are removed and only the protagonist's wizard is retained as a plug-in system, it will not affect the smoothness of reading. Moreover, the mysterious red moon in the setting is completely negative in shaping the cyber world. The fusion of mystery and cyber is not noticed, but there is a lot of peacekeeping. The description of cyber technology cannot be separated from the influence of 2077. This is harmless, but it is also obvious that the upper limit is completely restricted by 2077. The military capabilities of cyber technology have never been mainly reflected in prosthetics, whether it is basic AI, intelligent weapons, exoskeletons, energy, or biology. The author's imagination succeeds and fails 2077. Only by having productivity can we gradually develop science and technology. In the apocalyptic world, prosthetics can be directly provided to people under low productivity conditions. Generally, there are only two situations. Productivity requires the possession of machine tools and high-precision CNC machine tools to gradually improve the processing accuracy. Only with the possession of industrial electric furnaces or vacuum sintering facilities can the material science revolution be carried out, and the precise bridging of the nervous system with the support of cyberbiology can be completed in the apocalyptic situation. However, the description in the book is that the protagonist's ability replaces all these. This is the second situation. But since the protagonist can replace these, why does he need a prosthetic body? People in the cyber world are too plentiful in resources. The reason for replacing them with prosthetics is to do a better job so that they will not be replaced by robots. Since the protagonist has this ability, robots are obviously a better choice because they are cheap and large in quantity, rather than replacing the few remaining people with more technically complex prosthetics in the end of the world. It can only be understood as living a healthy life for the sake of living a healthy life. Regarding how to integrate cyberspace and fantasy, you can read "Binary Train of the Dead" written by an old eunuch. After reading it, don't forget to call him an old eunuch for me. Generally speaking, the author wants to write that the post-apocalyptic world should focus on developing productivity and support the cyber world through various scarce products that can be better obtained in the apocalypse. The cyber world will develop its own capabilities and help the development of the apocalypse through various advanced knowledge. However, it may be that the 24-hour interval and duration caused the perception of events to switch too quickly and the development to be fragmented. The apocalyptic world is more likely to be described as an adventure world to obtain resources. The cyber world is restricted everywhere. Even a lot of secretly acquired knowledge and operations have been canceled by the author for the development of the plot. It caused many inconsistencies and confusion after reading the storyline.

It's okay. I like the zombie world better. Cyber ​​still can't get his point. However, there are two things that I can't handle in the zombie world. One is the original parallel body girlfriend. All aspects have been completed with the parallel body. How should the protagonist deal with it? At present, it seems that the protagonist is completely evading. When she wants to be intimate with the protagonist, the protagonist avoids it by saying that it is very dangerous. She also pretends to be busy when changing clothes, but you can't avoid it for a lifetime. The second point is about leadership. The author may actually be a technical nerd or someone who is not involved in management, so he thinks that as long as he masters the core technology, everyone will support you. But the reality is that everyone is closer to the leader closest to you, especially so one person is responsible for the arrangements and speeches. The role of the protagonist is simply to save people and provide technology, and the person described by the author also has his own ideas, so what is the role of the protagonist? If you want to have power, you need to change your position

First of all, I have read about 190 chapters so far. I quite like this book. The writing is relatively comfortable to read. It continues to develop in the two worlds of the apocalypse and the cyber world. This feeling of farming is also what attracts me. However, I still have to write about some of the things that make me uncomfortable. First, the rhythm of this book is confusing. The overall rhythm feels very slow, but the local rhythm is very fast and very conflicting. Chapter 190, the story actually doesn't develop very much. It mainly focuses on the protagonist's slow farming and cultivation. The main thing is that the two companies had a fight in Greenland City. In fact, the story didn't seem to develop for a few days, more than a month? But the protagonist Lynch has something to do every day, and he is busy with endless things, one after another. Busy upgrading, busy rescuing people and developing in the last days, busy learning pharmacy, busy helping the company, busy doing mercenary missions. I don't know if my reasoning is right. I think it may be because the protagonist develops too fast with the support of the apocalypse. (In fact, if the combat power is not suppressed, I think level 5 in half a year is easy.) In order to ensure the rhythm of the story and prevent the protagonist from becoming invincible all of a sudden, the number and speed of tasks are increased, so the story naturally slows down. This speed and slowness made the protagonist feel unhappy, and the story fell into a strange cycle of procrastination and rush. Also, the development of the world view is too slow, so in Chapter 190, King Arthur was not asked about the advancement of other professions. There are several giant companies in the cyber world, and there are several professions. How to advance and how the strength is divided can be read as a suspense novel. Second, the settings are contradictory. 1️⃣ The first is the character that I think is the biggest failure - Guang Ling. This character is invincible in the cyber world. I think it is better to write a separate book with Guang Ling as the protagonist. The protagonist has no privacy in front of him. Although I don't know how to arrange him (or her? It can't be a female character), this kind of deus ex machina-like character naturally creates a hole in your story, and anything can be poured into it. The conflicting setting with Guang Leng is that the cyber world is tightly monitored everywhere, including in prosthetics and bank cards. No matter what you do, the protagonist is tied up and you are still afraid of the light edge. In this case, it is better to develop a second identity or a clone ability. 2️⃣ Secondly, there is the conflict between the identity of the protagonist of the cyber world and the plug-in ability. The protagonist's biggest need in the cyber world is to acquire technological equipment and various advanced materials, so as to gain first-mover advantage and accumulate combat power in the apocalyptic world. But now the protagonist has taken on the role of a research institute, which limits the acquisition of supplies. Instead, he might as well assume the identity of a black market supplier, and he can also secretly use the identity of a mercenary to carry out tasks, provide cover, and so on. Moreover, the protagonist can still fight happily like this and show off his strength. But now, the protagonist has to hide his identity as a wizard and has no other fighting power. Then your protagonist still needs to improve his strength, so why not just engage in scientific research and improve his technology and influence. At the same time, this involves Liu Xuan's patch (I don't know whether it was to interact with this character to obtain the researcher status, or to make the researcher status smooth, I understand it to be the latter). A small employee turned into a Gree tiger who befriended a rich woman. Although I know that it is standard for the protagonist to have a sweet wife by his side, without Liu Xuan, Lynch's story in the cyber world can be said to be difficult. Liu Xuan is like a task NPC. If she doesn't put an exclamation mark, Lynch will have no main plot. 3️⃣ Then there is the conflict about wizard abilities and advancement. (Although it is outrageous that you can get four abilities at each level, but I won't complain about this yet.) I treat the abilities in the book as skills. When combined with the four abilities at a single level, I feel that it is quite powerful to develop. At the second level, I feel invincible and reborn with blood. Just like that, the protagonist was forced to complete a few fixed skills, blood clots, and limb regeneration. What's even more outrageous is that the protagonist is all low-level invincible. No one can stop the blood clots. It's so funny. I don't understand how the upgrade mainly reflects the improvement of strength. I don't feel that the physical fitness of the protagonist has been improved, but the range of spiritual consciousness has been improved. 4️⃣Finally, there is the conflict between the apocalyptic world and the cyber world. The cyber world does not have enough cyber flavor. It is not so much a cyber world as it is the Age of Ending Dharma, and the end of the world is about the revival of spiritual energy. Putting these two together, I would choose the world to be dominated by the revival of spiritual energy. There is no real difference between the two worlds. In the end, wouldn't the apocalyptic world develop technology like the cyber world, and it will obviously surpass it in the extraordinary field, so wouldn't the cyber world be of no use? The cyber world is not obviously irreplaceable, but the main story is obviously set in the cyber world, and Lynch himself regards the cyber world as the main world. If the cyber world is finally revived, what position should the apocalyptic world occupy? I will continue reading and see how the plot develops. I just want to share some of my thoughts and frustrations.

There are a bunch of books on the bookshelf. I saw them today and thought I had added them accidentally, so I almost deleted them. Who gave the author advice? Is it because I have too much money and I don't want my grades?

I don't quite understand that the protagonist is already at the fourth level. According to his current performance, he is already the highest combat power in the mercenary group. He is still worried about his identity being exposed to the mercenary group. What are he afraid of?

Since the title of the new book is so unsophisticated that it almost fell out of my favorites, I think the author's brain is so red that it's better for everyone to think of a nice name with their feet. Let me start with: "Cyber, zombie!" As a scientist, I cannot become the moon! I think my name is better than the current book title in every aspect except that it is longer, akimbo, full of cyber elements and fantasy elements, right?

I was originally watching the pirated version, and if I thought it looked good, I decided to watch the original version, but I found that the shortcomings are still very big. The character Liu Xuan is too bad, and I can tolerate the rest. However, this heroine is completely forced by the author to play the protagonist. She is a yandere with no charm at all. The so-called super prosthetic genius is also a setting forced by the author. The heroine might as well choose King Arthur directly. Who can refuse the golden retriever lolita?

Investigation object: "Cyber Wizard Invasion"-male protagonist-[Lynch] Investigation result: [Reincarnation] (personal speculation) Judgment basis: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, is to investigate the time-travel situation of the time-traveler The profession of investigating and recording is designed to allow observers (that is, readers) in all worlds to know in advance the travel conditions of travelers in this world, and to volunteer to provide observers with a quick query service for travel information If there are any mistakes, Wanwang will correct me ——Zhenjun Wanling Feast Stay on May 1, 2025

Are you okay these days... The plot is like eating a mushroom... I think the reason for growing beyond control is very strange... It is completely different from the interesting foreshadowing at the beginning, when the legendary wizard Lynch began his legendary life... How is this round?

I've finished reading it so far, and it's okay. It's not as smart as other authors. I'll see how the author writes in the future. I'm very satisfied with it so far. I hope the author will update more so that I can read more.

The progress has been too slow recently. After a month of maintenance, the progress of the plot is only so small., I can understand that you often work overtime and are tired of writing. But my money is not brought by strong winds, and my willingness to continue reading speaks volumes Many of your descriptions are meaningless, even to the point of nonsense, such as describing Lynch again and again. There is no problem with the power of the character, but after you write it, can you not write about the feelings of everyone around you? Just go through it once. It is really a running account. The psychological descriptions of various characters are long and smelly, and they are described many times. The protagonist is already very powerful, but the writing is so sloppy, and the description of Qiao Xi is very weak. He is the spokesperson of a giant group, and the first director of that city, he has no brain at all? ? ? What does the protagonist say throughout the whole process? ? ? Words of mouth, running accounts, too ink! ! ! Also, the title of the book was changed! ! ! ! ! !

The World Parliament, what the weights are, what the first round of interviews, the second round of interviews, the handover of scores, does it have a strong variety show style?

What a bad name you changed, I almost didn't recognize it

Guangleng's identity cannot be established. As the main supporting character in the book, this character is too omniscient about the protagonist, unless he is a cyber being who returns from the future.

I searched for a long time and couldn't find the purchase record. Finally, I went to the personal center to find the purchase record. It's ridiculous.

It's not that this plot cannot be written recently. If you want to finish it in one day, there will be no problem. But with the amount of updates the author has made, writing this plot is a trap.

It's obviously not a crush on the protagonist. I've leveled up a few dozen chapters, but it's not satisfying at all. It's really dry Double-travel novels must write about one world in detail, and write it in half. There is no future if you write a little bit about this world and a little bit about that world

Overall it seems to be fine, but I can't tell what's wrong with it. It may be that the pace is too slow, or it may be that the way large companies responded to several large-scale incidents seemed too immature, and they made a lot of sacrifices to get something very poor. This level does not have the planning and level that large companies should have. In addition, the protagonist's promotion speed is very constipating, and I feel a little constipated after watching it.

What bad name did you change? After raising it for so long, I asked why I can't find it.

I have read Chapter 83 so far. Is the male protagonist a fake sword?

When did the name cover change? I almost didn't find it.

This book is very interesting, but why is it so unpopular? Does the author have any other vests? I'd like to check them out.

This book is well-written. It writes about the wizarding elements without any nonsense, the apocalypse without any off-site moral arguments, and the women without too much speculation or obscenity (currently, 250,000 words are all white sketches). For me this book ambrosia

I've read Chapter 100. The setting is good, but the characterization is terrible. The writing style needs to be improved. It's understandable for new authors. I don't know if the progress is fast or not. Here's an answer as I follow up.