Technology Invades the Cultivation World

It's a classic story; there are women everywhere, their relationships ambiguous, and there's even a childhood sweetheart. The protagonist's emotional intelligence is incredibly low. I don't know what the author was thinking; maybe they got too immersed in the story and thought they were actually in a relationship.

The author has been emphasizing that the cultivation world does not value the productivity of mortals. Now that the protagonist has earned enough resources for Foundation Establishment, it feels like he will establish a power base and start to control the cultivation world after reaching Foundation Establishment.

After reading it, I realized that the book's performance was not ideal. After thinking about it, I think the reasons might be as follows: First, the author submitted the book to the wrong genre. It should have been science fiction, a futuristic world like *Cultivation for Forty Thousand Years*. This book has a strong science fiction feel, but the fantasy cultivation element is weak.

Author, are you trying to sell something completely different under the guise of something else? Stop trying to preach your values ​​by injecting them into your novel, okay? This type of novel already has two bestsellers; it's amazing that you've achieved this much with such a promising subject.

This book suits my taste; I hope it won't end up like Da Ri Jian Zi's book, which is all hype and no substance.

The classic college entrance exam trope, and the classic "clingy rich girl by your side" trope, appearing every few chapters. The key point is, she's the protagonist's junior from a different year, and how their paths crossed is never explained. When dealing with inconvenient places involving otherworldly resources, finding a rich girl is the obvious solution.

It's well-written, very much to my taste, with a logical plot, good writing style, and is engaging.

I was wondering why no one was reading my million-word novel; it's no wonder it's so popular. It's about technology invading cultivation, but the subject matter is the old trope of a two-world trading company. While this kind of story can be very engaging if you capture the exciting moments, setting up a scientific cultivation world versus a traditional one completely negates its strengths (the…

I hope for multiple female leads; a single female lead has too low a ceiling in this online novel environment. Besides, the character of the Chu family's younger sister is quite fleshed out; if you don't accept her, any way you handle it will likely lead to plot holes.

The reason this novel isn't popular is because the satisfying moments weren't well-developed. There were plenty of exciting plot points; the author could have focused more on historical novels.