Technology Invades the Cultivation World

It's very classic. There are women everywhere I go. I don't know who they are. There are also childhood sweethearts. The protagonists have low emotional intelligence. I don't know what the author thinks. Maybe he got too deep into it and thought he was in love.

The author has been emphasizing that the world of immortality does not value the productivity of mortals. Now that the protagonist has earned enough resources to build a foundation, he feels that after building a foundation, he will establish a force and start to capture the world of immortality.

After reading it, I realized that the performance of this book was not satisfactory. After thinking about it, it may be due to the following reasons: First, the author chose the wrong category. He should have chosen science fiction, a future world such as "Forty Thousand Years of Cultivation". This book has a strong sense of science fiction, but a weak sense of fantasy cultivation. Modern immortality itself is highly collectivist, which is inconsistent with the prevalence of individual heroism in mainstream immortality novels. The setting is a relatively new and innovative book, and there is a lack of reference experience. Most of the author's energy should be focused on the immortal sect, lacking the support of traditional culture. Therefore, the overall feeling is that traditional cultivation of immortality is useless. To be honest, I personally feel that it is not very friendly to most people who like traditional immortals. (It is more like cultivating the truth than cultivating immortals, and there is no label for traveling between the two worlds.) Second, the writing is average and the experience is insufficient. The author likes to use metaphors when describing the setting. To be honest, it is terrible and difficult to understand. It is not because the setting is difficult to understand but the metaphor is difficult to understand. The setting is the setting. There is no need to explain too much, just give a definition. The map setting was also incomplete in the early stage. In the later stage, it was basically based on the readers' imagination. Maybe the author didn't think about it well at the time. Personally, I feel that what attracts me most about this book is not modern immortality or scientific thought, but collectivism and the author's understanding and description of modern immortality society. (A bit red said 🙂)

This book suits my taste. I hope that it will not be like Da Ri Jianzi in the future.

Author, are you trying to sell sheep's head to dog meat? Can you please stop trying to mix your values ​​into novels to preach? This type of novel has already had two hits. It's awesome that you can write this with such a promising subject matter.

Classic college entrance examination. There is a rich woman next to you. She has to show up in three or two chapters. The key point is that she is the main character's school girl. How they met is not explained. She can buy supplies from other worlds and find the rich woman in inconvenient places. The material control is not a problem at all, the tool man's attributes are off the charts, the protagonist is just as confused about the love brain behavior of women, and the situation in the other world is opened by a beautiful girl from a powerful family. There are also a lot of inner dramas. I don't want to eat soft food for fear of affecting my practice. I can only say that the taste is too strong.

The writing is good, very in line with the taste, the plot is advanced reasonably, the writing skills are good, and it is attractive.

I said that after writing more than one million words, no one read it. It was strange that it became popular after writing like this. It's about technology invading immortality, but the subject matter is an old theme like two worlds being corrupted. Originally, this kind of theme can be very attractive if it captures the fun points and is well written. However, if you arrange a world of scientific cultivation of immortality and a world of traditional cultivation of immortality, you completely abandon the advantages (the culture, consciousness, and environment of the two worlds are too small and lack of interesting points. The senses written are like Europeans using glass beads to fool the natives). The writing itself is average, and the protagonist is a steely straight man who is close to Han Laomo. It's really not interesting.

I hope there will be more than one female protagonist, but the upper limit for a single female protagonist is too low in this Internet environment, and there are also many portrayals of the Chu family sister. If you don't accept it, no matter how you deal with it, there will be thunderstorms.

Why is the author's novel not popular? It's because he didn't write it out. Originally, the theme was quite interesting. You can read more historical novels.