I'm in the Cyber World Weirdly Cultivating Immortality

You said that loyalty must be tested all the time, and only those who meet the standards can become public officials, and then those officials in the public service system are extremely corrupt! As a result, pig's feet were born and raised but dare not take part in the test? ? ! Just because someone might recycle antiques, just build an ancient computer in a garbage dump and hang it in it? ? ! ! ps: Wouldn't it be more appropriate for you to change the setting to allow modern people to travel through the cyber world? This would solve the problems of loyalty and retrieving ancient computers.

I took the college entrance examination in 2010. After the exam, I saw a pirated physical book of yours at a roadside stall. Then my mother went to pick me up and found me reading a novel on the roadside. She hit it and kicked it.

It's a bloody plot, it's better to make the protagonist an orphan. The first few chapters made me feel angry.

It started well, but I feel that some parts are not so good. 1. The King of Martial Arts and the God of Martial Arts are really too low. 2. The conflicts in the episodes of Qiangwei are inexplicable. 3. I don't quite understand why the school cares about the upper limit of a student. Can they still train students to become Martial Gods? At present, it seems that the core demand is not to get the top few in the competition among which schools?

Boring! I thought it was because the main character was practicing weird magic, but I didn't expect that he had opened a strange world dungeon and was practicing serious magic. So boring!

The writing is quite good, but the realm and martial arts are not handled very well. I don't think the martial arts in the strange world can be shown. Each one uses family traditions to fool people and treats everyone as a fool. You can use the credits from selling the charms to buy a few martial arts costumes to show off. I really don't think others will be interested in you and investigate you.

Just push Shuangwen flatly, pay attention to the rationality, you have too many messy plots recently, the first few chapters are really good, the following chapters are difficult to explain in a word, in the game world, learn skills and get equipment, in the real world, just push hard and do it hard, the world's best martial arts are the same, ordinary people Just like people who are cultivating immortals, it's all fun. Small authors think more messy than great writers. They always think about adding some messy plots. Look at the past great novels, there are so many messes, it's fun, or it's sad. So cool is the simplest novel.

Instructor Lin, those chapters are really too deliberate, just to highlight the protagonist's perseverance and justice, right?

After all, he is an experienced author, and he is able to write about such a common subject matter with a sense of reality.

Water, + creative + too little cyber style + slowly becoming less weird + similar logic + but too unattractive + not much subject matter + it will gradually become unsightly in the future

I always feel that the setting of this family is for water. When the time comes, if the parents have problems, they will solve them, and if the sister has problems, they will solve them. Maybe they can have water on and off for a hundred chapters.

Some settings about the cyber world: 1. There are no bankers. I can't think of any reason why all banks have collapsed or lost their glory. There are generally no rulers in the cyber world. Theoretically, the bank reserve ratio is infinite, that is, banks have countless money. To be conservative, bank capital is a hundred times the equity, which means that the wealth of a giant bank is equal to the wealth of a hundred giant companies. Money is power in the cyber world. The banking industry has the vast majority of money in society, which is the vast majority of power. However, in the setting of the cyber world, there are almost no banking loans, such as mortgage loans. It should be a very natural and common thing to use people as collateral in the cyber world, so the mortgage loan before the death of a cyber madman is derived. 2. There are no speculators pursuing high risks and high returns. Generally speaking, money is the most important thing in the cyber world, and the scope of valuation business can be derived from all concrete and abstract things. For example: In this book, martial arts investment is obviously the favorite of speculators. (1) Speculators can invest 10,000 people and invest a total of one million credit points. As long as one person withdraws gold, the capital will be returned, or ten silvers; (2) A more profitable way is to securitize martial arts talents and other resources and trade them as derivatives. 3. Buffetts who do not pursue value investing. Facts have proved that followers of Graham and Buffett are still the most profitable people in the world. The company controlled by Buffett, the leader in this technology, is one of the most profitable and market value companies in the AI ​​era. This proves the viability of Buffetts and that they can exist in the cyber era. It is worth mentioning that Berkshire owns one of the top energy companies in the United States, that is, energy giants that often appear in cyber world settings. Summary: The existence of bankers, speculators and Buffetts in the cyber world will change a lot, that is, the existence of bad debt insurance, derivatives with a market value far greater than that of stocks, the urgent pursuit of excellence, monopoly and cigarette butt companies and other reasons will cause There will be inevitable consequences, such as: destroying gangs that increase the rate of bad debts, gangs can only capture cyber lunatics who take mortgages, gangs do not make money, they can only make money that giant companies who only want to make money did not expect; speculators looking for martial arts geniuses are everywhere (this book); Companies that are divided at different levels are provided with good food and drink at birth (payments far lower than the intrinsic value). They are valued and rated every year. Those with low grades and high valuations begin to realize their profits and are given remuneration far lower than the intrinsic value; those with high grades and high valuations continue to grow. A prosperous cyber world has emerged, instead of a stagnant world where gangs are rampant, fighting, and monopolizing everything. Not all industries are suitable for monopoly. The more competition in some industries, the thinner the profits. If you want to make money, you can only increase production. The benefits are all with the buyers.

The author failed to consider that when people are oppressed to a certain extent, they can choose not to have children. How can a couple raise two children if they work more than ten hours a day and have no elders to help them?

Suppress first and then promote, but the protagonist is suppressed for too long

The writing is quite good. I like to read it. Why is the old author so unpopular? I gave it three monthly passes. Please update more.

Until it was put on the shelves, I felt a little bit happy. Everyone came to read the cool articles, why are you holding back so much?

I'm an old author, why am I no longer popular?

To commemorate the first novel I read, The World of Online Games

The World of Online Games is a very good-looking virtual online game. It is a top online game masterpiece along with the Online Game Career Life.

Chapter 30 before and after Chapter 30 are almost as if they were written by two people. . .

The writing style is quite high, and the protagonist's idiot is so vividly written at the beginning. I still like smarter male protagonists

The last few chapters have been great! I decided to give the monthly pass and follow-up reading to others. The book is on the shelf and I will read it in October.

I started reading novels in 2007, and I still feel that no online game novel can surpass Tiandi. I have read it 4-5 times. I really hope Yin Da will write another similar online game.

As the title states, online game writing is outdated, but game alien writing is still at its peak.

The content is good and the plot is okay, but what is the hierarchy given in the article doing? Do elementary school students just think about it? Even if you can't think of anything good, look at what other authors think, or just ask Al directly.

I want to order all of them. Are you going to stop updating them? I don't want to charge money and you won't update them anymore.

It looks good, but it's a bit lacking. . .