Jin Chan Asked

In the middle, there is a scene where a widow is forced to cook and support her in order to have some delicious food. This plot is a bit baffling. Let's take a look at it later.

It's inexplicable. Immortal cultivators can't cook, but you, a time traveler, can't do it? It's written as hiring a widow to cook. What's wrong? The author is Wang Sicong and has never cooked.

One word "awkward". Chapter thirty-eight was downright boring. There are so many books with tens of millions of words, rigid thinking, and no improvement in literary background. You can criticize me, what qualifications do you have to criticize others, and what novels have you written? But after reading a few of your books, I feel that you have made no progress at all.

The manuscript is similar to what I wrote in the Immortal Cultivation World, which will last forever and follow the stream of beast-controlling immortality. I copied it and included it🔥

The setting of the golden finger is reasonable. How to determine the scope of treasure hunting? See how to set it.

Judging from your poor grades, you will probably become a eunuch soon.

No matter what comments are made, they are all disparaging the author. If you want to read it, just read it. If you don't want to read it, just don't read it. They are all teaching the author how to write. How others write is none of your business. Do you have the ability to open a book on your own?

Yoyoyo has written a new book. Except for the one about controlling beasts, the other books have dropped drastically.

Just stick to the desert and beast-controlling books and write family stories, and don't think about stepping out of your comfort zone and imitating other people's popularity. After all, family articles have stable readers. Although they are not many, they are guaranteed.

He is also a talented person. Has this number been sold to someone else?

Wait until it reaches a million words before reading it, don't cut it again

Write the widow to death, look at the enemy, and then take in the daughter, and find out that it is Tianlinggen

I still like to read Ziwei's family fairy tale novel. From cultivating immortals, starting in the desert, to becoming a beast-controlling immortal clan. . Personally, I think the best one is the desert. . I hope Ziwei will write another good family cultivation novel. From the perspective of the Xuanjian Clan, there is still a market for family novels. . Influenced by you, I just wrote a novel about my family's cultivation of immortality, "If you want to fly, don't become an immortal, if you want to become an immortal, you need to live forever." The setting of sword cultivation and golden finger is novel. . . I wish Ziwei the boss to write an awesome family novel soon and achieve platinum status.

The writing of this book feels good, I hope I can stick to it

I think the beast-controlling fairy clan is pretty good, except for the fact that it's a bit crude and perfunctory near the end.

I don't understand the latest chapter. Why does this fire-attribute monk want to sneak attack on the protagonist? Why didn't the Taoist priest help each other? If we were to kill people and seize treasures, wouldn't it reveal our true nature if we started fighting without winning over the Taoist priest's friends? He didn't suffer in terms of prey allocation, scoring 44 points with the protagonist. I really don't understand the origin of this conflict point. Killing people and seizing treasures should be done privately between the two of them!

I became a fan of the book about cultivating immortals in the desert. The old patriarch died calmly, and the Zhou family grew up little by little to dominate the desert cultivating world. The Zhou family, the best beast control in the family, can only be said to be good. I didn't expect that the author's writing became worse and worse starting from the tiger demon. After reading the epilogue, I realized that there must be something wrong with the author's mentality. Family cultivating immortals cannot be rushed, and don't always think about conferring gods in one book.

The author's level has dropped a lot since the last book. It can be said to be mediocre. The story must have ups and downs! Fortunately, I didn't continue the family story

If you feel like it's on the shelves, I'll cut it. The maximum order for this one is 100.

It's eunuch again, the same old routine, one is complete and the other is eunuch, it's quite regular 😅😅😅

When will the new book be released? If you want to read about beast control, don't write about family.