Tomb Raiding Across the Heavens: Starting with The Outcast

Personally, I think your writing went completely astray towards the end. First of all, you're the kind of person who's immortal, yet also an anomaly. To put it bluntly, you transmigrated into "Under One Person," and your goal wasn't to become an apprentice or learn from them, but rather to conduct experiments and get caught up in this feast of immortality.

That Qingkuang from Chunyang Temple, what kind of person is he? The protagonist was clearly being slandered and bullied. Even after the enemy came knocking on their door, he kept telling the protagonist to be tolerant. What kind of idiot is that? 💢

The important thing about the Corpse Immortal of Myriad Affairs is not the corpse, but the affairs.

When will the protagonist finally become a force to be reckoned with? Right now, anyone can step on him.

The tomb raiding world was going well, but before the exciting parts were over, one character suddenly left. Writing this far has been frustrating; is it any good to keep reading?

After just over a hundred pages, it became unusable. It completely lost its central theme and started drifting aimlessly, adding whatever came to mind as it came. It became increasingly muddled, with many logical inconsistencies and contradictions. It became difficult to read later on, and many plot points became disjointed.

I remember that the Tomb Raider Chronicles actually features some higher-dimensional deities, but humans are basically unable to contact them or even be aware of them. They can only be encountered in certain special large tombs.

It's a strange feeling, neither spontaneous nor self-centered, and certainly not about upholding principles or clarifying one's true self. It's neither good nor bad; it feels like I'm just writing whatever comes to mind.

It's not that the astronomy is all-encompassing; Zhang Jie has written over two hundred chapters and is still in a solitary state. Although the protagonist's strength is overwhelming, he is still constantly being trampled on in the face. It's extremely toxic.

The protagonist is a heretic and evil person who treats all living beings as playthings.