I'm a Three-Year-Old Salted Fish. My Father Conspired Against Me and I Surrendered to the Enemy.

After reading the whole story, it's as if the protagonist doesn't exist. Just remove the protagonist and it won't affect reading at all! Whether it is plot promotion or character creation, the protagonist has nothing to do with it.

When you read the book, look at the title. It is about a three-year-old salted fish, not a three-year-old prodigy. The protagonist in the front is too small, and the story is mainly about unfolding. There are thousands of good books from Qidian. If it doesn't work, let's change it. Thanks to every brother who supports this book. Thank you also to everyone who clicked on my novel. If the writing is not as good as you like, I apologize in advance.

It's quite comfortable to watch, the unfolding is pretty good, and the characters stand up well. I remember quite a few of them, and I have a good sense of anticipation. But, I am a new author. I don't know if it is too big or too biased. I am skeptical about this... If I can take it back, I hope it will be a high-quality product. Come on, if you can go to Sanjiang, I will give you 100, and I will post it as proof.

I only read 28 chapters in two hours. I can take away the label of "easy" in this book. After reading more than 20 chapters, it is all conspiracy and conspiracy, and there is no relaxing atmosphere at all. The only thing that can be considered "easy" is the two servants who play small roles in the book. Moreover, the protagonist has almost no sense of existence. The first twenty or so chapters focus on the characters involved in seizing the heir, and the number of chapters focusing on the protagonist does not exceed three (PS: average). Those who like to watch machinations can take a look, and that's it, let's go.

In terms of characterization alone, it's already good enough. There are fewer protagonists in the early stage, but the basic framework is almost set up. Now it's time to cut, and it's no less than half an hour of eloquence. The unicorn arm is rampaging at 50 Hz. Finally, the second brother is found to be invincible, but he surrenders. You are frustrated, and she is not happy either! The protagonist has also begun to make plans. The girl from Wanhua Tower is still waiting for the protagonist to grow up. Write, write, write, three chapters today! ! !

Just write it. It can be written really well. Don't cut it. Don't mess with it later. I'll order it all. It's really possible, and your book has passed the most difficult period. It can be seen that the previous characters and framework are carefully thought out. This framework is set up, there is no reason to cut it. Don't rush to read, the number of words is too few, it's normal to maintain a book.

My suggestion is to either gradually downplay the existence of the protagonist, change the group portrait, or let the protagonist participate in the advancement of the plot. I saw 33. The protagonist is like a bystander, unable to advance and interfere with the plot. He keeps throwing things out, telling us about the political layout, telling us how the Li family will deal with it, and explaining to us. It is a bit noisy and seizing control.

Why bother? I just thought I had a few chapters to read, but you're gone.

Come on!

This setting is interesting, come on, give me a monthly pass

It's a masterpiece, it's a platinum title, I suggest you spend more money to promote it, too few people are watching it.

I wrote and wrote, and a brother who was passing by helped me to check it out. The writing was pretty good, and it can be seen that the overall framework was carefully arranged. It's a good grass