Something Is Definitely Off About This Hogwarts!

The overall atmosphere of this book is weird. Even if the protagonist dies several times and successfully passes the prologue and enters the school, everything has just begun. The current difficulty is that in other novels, even if Dumbledore can't beat the protagonist at the beginning, he must be ranked in T1 and be a solid backing for the students. However, as a traditional wizard, no one in the academy can fight against the weird side. The protagonist has almost no strength and can only observe. The only plug-in for death return is also passively triggered, which makes it impossible to see the fun.

I don't know if the author has done his homework. The letter should end with Minerva McGonagall, not Dumbledore. Since it is written by Dumbledore, do I think that this letter was handled by Dumbledore? There is obviously something wrong with the address and it will not be discovered. Finally, since there is something indescribable, why can't there be a Nine Heavens Yingyuan Thunder Universal Transformation Tianzun? (Funny)

The writing is pretty good, but the title and introduction really don't match your content. When I saw the title synopsis of your book, I thought it was a light-hearted novel, but after reading it for a long time, I discovered that it was actually a suspense novel.

The creativity is interesting, it's a haunted version of Hogwarts, and the suspenseful atmosphere is quite good, but the protagonist himself doesn't seem to have any bright spots at the moment. He is more like a tool to promote the plot. He is not calm when he should be calm, and he seems calm when he should be panic. He entered Ravenclaw but he doesn't look smart or easy to learn at all.

It makes me laugh when I think of a protagonist in his twenties pretending to be an eleven-year-old wizard 🤭

He actually said that Peeves was the ghost of Gryffindor. . Doesn't the author read the original work now?

Has the book been sold? The first part is very good, but the second part is the same as AI?

Occasional flaws in details are innocuous. It is indeed scary enough so far, and it is well combined with the world under HP. However, the tone of this book is thriller rather than magic, which will inevitably disappoint friends who are interested in the HP world view.

The first time I met the protagonist of the Harry Potter novels, he hadn't learned a single spell in more than 70 episodes, and he didn't even have a wand. The most important thing was that this was only the second day in the book.

The plot was okay at the beginning but not so good at the end. The weird puzzles in front of the protagonist have not been solved yet, and you add new weird ones. If you keep repeating this over and over again, the main plot has not been advanced yet! In the end, it's still the same as when I just traveled through time.