The Mysterious Resurrection of Ghosts in the World

As a new author, the writing is quite good, and even quite a few places are well written The description of the horrific scenes, the danger of the ghost killing, and the struggle of ordinary people to survive in the scene are obviously carefully crafted When describing the reaction of the headquarters, one can also consider that this is the early period of the headquarters, and pay attention to the specific reactions of the relevant personnel Of course, There are some flaws in the article, or it may be that the chapters are too short, so some parts of the plot are not fully presented, which leads to strange expressions of some plots. For example, the two ghosts that have been controlled are very simple to control, and they are even controlled during direct confrontation. Theoretically, it should not be so easy, but there are exactly two ghosts, one is a scattered puzzle piece, and it is incomplete. It is easy to control as soon as it comes. It is an existence that obviously prefers to directly control each other. It can also be seen from this that the author should have a plan for the growth and development of the protagonist. It is generally towards putting together puzzle pieces, superimposing curses and exploring the crash. The most important thing is the crash. Let's see if the author can describe the process of the crash well The author has consciously avoided Yang Jian to grow up, which is good. Mysterious Resurrection fandom is not suitable for grabbing Yang Jian's resources all day long. After all, Yang Jian's path to becoming a god and the resource acquisition route itself cannot be copied. Here are recommended guides to supernatural places preserved in the Republic of China. There will even be institutions specializing in cultivating aliens. The protagonist will always benefit if he does not die there, and it is more convenient to participate in large-scale events. The exploration of the Republic of China itself is also a major event. It is also convenient to stagger the things assigned to Yang Jian by the headquarters and reduce conflicts with Yang Jian Finally, the first book of a new writer must be completed. It has been written very well. I look forward to the day when you become a great master 🤓

There are too many jokes, and an occasional sentence is okay, but you have three or four sentences in this chapter, which looks very strange.

Have you ever been a ghost exorcist? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

What is the introduction and disclaimer?

Join the headquarters in the early stage and wait to be treated as a knight. In the early stage, Yang Jian was a auxiliary, so he was treated as a knight. But think about those city leaders, it is estimated that they will have to deal with a supernatural incident in about three days.

A ghost controller whose strength is above average should join the headquarters or the supernatural forum. When encountering danger, the headquarters will measure your future value to decide whether to rescue you, even if you are the headquarters' trick controller, Ye Zhen will not only consider the value, but also consider the past friendship to take action. Take the original plot as the trick breaks out in the headquarters, and just watch helplessly, and let those who joined the headquarters for training to fend for themselves. That is in the headquarters and not elsewhere. This If something like this happens on a supernatural forum, if Ye Zhen gets angry, he will have to fight until Li Wei is revived and suppress the ghost. Even if Ji doesn't do this, Wei Zai will be lured away. In short, either he is strong enough to compete with Mr. Qin and can protect himself even if he loses. Either he has a deep background like Cao Yang, or a deep foundation like Wang Sandai, or he is weird enough like Liu San. If you are a white man, Mr. Qin is good at layout, some people in the headquarters are good at conspiracies, Wang Xiaoming is good at conspiracy, and you are a white man, and your strength is not top-notch, it will be difficult to survive for a long time under the intrigues and calculations of all parties, otherwise why is the headquarters so short of masters of tricks. So the best choice if your strength is not top-notch is to join the supernatural forum and grow up. After all, if something happens, Ye Zhen is really good. Writing fan fiction must have its own unique entry point. It is not recommended to use the same main ideas and processes as the original work. Only in this way can people's eyes shine. It is different from other fan fictions and has different points of interest from the original works. Otherwise, reading some fan fictions is basically the same as reading the original works, except that the protagonist is changed, and the protagonist's ability system is different. There is no difference in the rest. Whether you can be popular or not depends on you...

The writing is average, slightly poisonous, and some parts are inexplicable.

There is no secret or boss planning for you to wear for a mysterious revival. . . To trick people?

In the fanfic, I would like to call you the strongest

There are only three ghosts in more than forty chapters. Is the pace too fast?

The development route is unclear and I haven't planned it.

I recommend the author to read a book, Sadness for the World. This one is also in the puzzle genre.

What I wrote before was fine, but now I feel like I have written a lot of nonsense. Why do I keep describing the change in the appearance of the protagonist? What is there to write about? The original work only said that the world of the underworld has become colder and has no sense of humanity, instead of just following the appearance. Jiang Shangbai's confession also feels very strange.

In fact, if you think about it carefully, if you don't follow the routes in the original work, they are the routes that have been taken by people so far. They are basically related to the situation of blood suppression and unlimited solution. Few people play the mechanism. The previous generation played witty, but this also caused them to be one-sided. In other words, most of them are in a small team. You are like a ghost show. Ben, he has a few puzzles and a lot of them, but the most important one is the black faces of the stage stools and opera singers. After gathering these things, you need to consider the ghost makeup, ghost costumes and the like. If you want to get most of them together, you can even add some selling items to make your puzzle bigger, but you must know that the balance is a bit difficult. If it's like the Ghost Bride, it's almost full of bugs. Most of the ghosts will be a little red, or have a little bit of it, like a stool, it's just red. If the author had opened a big ghost bride in the early stage, there would be no play at all in the later stage. The old Buddha originally wanted to have this aspect of the plot. This is the plot that was really revealed and was definitely cut. Otherwise, in the early stage, A mummy bride passed through, and I met some in a crash in the later stage. I will not mention it at all later, and I am slightly worse than them. But if it is in the mysterious recovery worldview, there will definitely be a way out, like ghosts seeing the light. Whether you build it in Baishui or Taiping Valley, or build a separate one where you build it, where is the center of the ghost bank you opened? It's a pity that the inheritance was broken relatively early, at least in the last half of the era. In other words, the Republic of China may have been broken before the 1980s before the modern storyline. Once it is broken, it will be hard to find it everywhere. Unless you re-establish a currency, there should be an earlier status quo. It is a pity that the inheritance was almost broken in the last era.

The headquarters is really cool, a C-level one only has a few hundred thousand, and some of the lives are removed.

What do you think? Why are you worried? I set it up for myself in the early stage and fixed it for the author. Now I can't write anything anymore. Then the most important point comes. When it is clear about the plug-in, how much past life can be added to this life by a system like time travel and rebirth? To help, the author could add a story about Han Gui shouting Yang Jian when he was escaping from the hospital, and then write those who only know the previous plot, write a few ellipses under Yang Jian, and then continue to run away, asking the other party to seal the memory. I just read Chapter 10-20, and I can basically tell that I am stuck at the end. As for why, I know that this one will definitely be stuck at me, because I have seen similar settings of your predecessors. I wrote the ghost house book, and I was stuck. There are still plug-ins there, which means that I can write a small and confusing plot for myself. In fact, this is the suggestion I gave you. Similarly, it is all about breaking away from memory, but there is nothing you can do if you don't peel it off. You can't return to the previous settings, and you can't return. Why didn't you do this before? The author also admitted that this kind of operation of the left and right brains fighting against each other is indeed a fight between the left and right brains. Well, that book had plug-ins directly in the early stage. This book didn't have it at the beginning, and it's hard to add it with your own patch (๑•́ωก̀๑)

The biggest problem in the article is that it is too detailed about eating, sleeping, etc.🙄

Is the author female? Why is it always

Good luck to Zhan Xin. Rereading the old chapter recently, I still feel that there is still more to it. The story is reaching a critical point, but there has been no follow-up, which makes me feel worried. If you have time, can you give me a little update? Even a few words can help alleviate expectations. I know writing is not easy, just take your time. Just hope you can see the following if it is convenient. Wish Bi Jian.