Tokyo: I Really Don't Want to Be a Depressive Cartoonist

I think the biggest advantage is that the author abandons the process of drawing the protagonist. Some novels describe this aspect in detail, but readers often hate this. I am not a cartoonist. I know what this does. It has no other use except the word "water". Secondly, the author summarizes the plot of the comic just right, so that people who have never read it can understand the main plot. Furthermore, the feedback from comic readers is also good, and people of different identities have given Feedback from readers makes readers feel happy. Yes, it's all about your painful feeling. Also, there is no clichéd part of pretending to slap in the face. You don't have to jump out a supporting character to challenge the protagonist and make a bet to make it fun. Finally, daily life and comics are separated. Basically, one chapter of comics and one chapter of daily life, so you can skip the daily plot. This does not affect my reading of comics drawn by the protagonist to depress readers, nor does it affect some people who like daily plots.

At this time, an accident that sends the heroine to the hospital and becomes a vegetative state would be a sure blow. It would not only make the protagonist and the readers depressed, but also cut the author's account and the book in half.

After reading more than 40 chapters, I felt that the comic plot and the daily plot were completely separated and had no connection. Even if one of the two parts of the novel was removed, it would have no effect at all. However, the length of the two parts was almost the same, and they were constantly interspersed, which made me feel very separated. I just wanted to skip to the part I wanted to read.

First, the male protagonist is impotent and I suspect it is a female author Second, there is indeed too little connection between daily life and comics, or the focus is on daily life is too bland Third, the early writing of Edgewalker and Chainsaw Man was too bland and had no feeling.

If a light novel doesn't have a female protagonist, is it still called a light novel? The vast majority of people want to read stories about relationships between men and women. This is the core competitiveness of light novels.

I don't know how many are left after the first order of 600. The quality of Chainsaw Man has dropped a bit in both comics and daily life. But if the author wants to work full-time, he has to finish this book no matter what the results are. Because he has written three books of the same type, the first two were all Eunuchs, and no one dares to order this one after Eunuchs.

Chainsaw Man jumps all over, does the author know this part is boring?

The author has written three books of the same type in a row. The quality is pretty good. The premise is that you have to divide your daily life and drawing comics into two books. Plus two consecutive books with hundreds of thousands of words will be a eunuch. You have a criminal record, so I suggest you read it if you want, but don't have too high expectations.

This novel, which is worth over 1 million at most, is less popular. I have read it in three days. To be honest, it is difficult to put it into the story because it sets up an outrageous assumption at the beginning. It is better to first adjust the speed of five centimeters per second. The most critical point is that the protagonist's comic drawing skills are invincible from the beginning, and there is no need for any study, nor is there any school life. And the love process, to be honest, is not sweet, the protagonist is somewhat rational, and I suspect that the author has not talked about it, and there is a sister-in-law who acts as a light bulb in the middle. In fact, it can also be drawn. The pet girl of Sakurasou, Arima, must be a genius, and the male protagonist here is just an ordinary person. Although the ending of the story in the manga is good, the animation is just so-so. But in the end, if the author has no worries about real life, he can just bite the bullet and write 12,300,000 words, or just accumulate reputation.

Brother, my only condition is that I don't want to be a eunuch anymore. It was nothing at first, but after looking at your first two works, I found that they were both eunuchs, so I don't want this one. ‧˚₊*̥(∗︎*⁰͈꒨⁰͈)‧˚₊*̥

I have finished reading the chapters related to the comics, and I have also read some of the romance chapters. I can only say that currently, reading only the comics-related chapters does not affect the viewing experience at all. It is very smooth and very good. Falling in love, just average

Although it is a light novel, the emotional scenes are written too abruptly, and the transition between text and reality is too frequent. It is like falling in love, it just starts to pick up, and then you change people, this...

The author's comic content is quite good, but the solid content is mediocre. And the author doesn't intend to speculate in stocks, right? Copying + stock trading are too abstract

Daily writing is really about daily writing, but when writing comics, the touch and emotion brought by the original work are too strong, causing readers to feel like going down stairs, with one foot on top and one foot on the bottom. It's very good to have finished reading it so far. When I read it on my own, it feels like a light novel, but it's just not the same as the rhythm of writing comics. In short, when copying the original work, like the first part of Parasite, the author's writing skills are good and he can write with flavor. Although it feels different from daily life, I have not read this work, so the feeling of this gap is not big. But in the following four months, everyone has basically read or understood the original work. As the plot of the comic progresses, my mood will rise involuntarily, and I will inevitably recall the plot later, but in a blink of an eye, it is daily life, and suddenly it returns from healing to small daily things like "Ah, I have to get a glass of water." It is very mismatched, which caused me to jump a little when I read it later. The author should try to figure out how to grasp the relationship between the two, whether it is borrowing from the works of other great writers or asking editors. After all, he will have to copy more famous comics in the future. This rhythm will definitely be greater. Once it is handled, this novel will definitely be read as a light novel.

Instead of writing an emotional line, I would rather see the protagonist beating the father of the physiological cabinet

I just read the beginning and didn't want to read it anymore. Nothing else. Now that I'm older, I only like love and magic. After watching Akatsuki in the Slums, I can no longer read these depressing comics or anime 😭. I prefer healing comics like Little Little One in the Fairy Forest that can warm my bones.

There are no obvious poisonous points or exciting points. What is worthy of praise is that the initial love plot of the male and female protagonists is well written, but the subsequent love plot is a little weak, but this is a common situation in Japanese novels😅. The point of criticism is probably that after the release, a small part of the author is just for self-pleasure (or the word count is low), and a considerable part has no promoting effect on the plot. Among them, the comic commentary part is equivalent to a unit drama, and it needs to be brilliant to be successful, but I didn't read it and it seemed very bad. But it's pretty good so far. I won't comment too much on how to improve this aspect. For new readers, my food suggestion is such as chewing green arrows in your mouth after eating garlic juice. It's refreshing and can reset the brain.

The only thing that makes me feel uncomfortable is the person named A in the chapter comments. There is really too much bullshit. He is present in almost every comment section. He expresses his views in large blocks. Really, no one cares about your thoughts. He speaks with no preface and follow-up, and the logic is the same as that of an elementary school student. Even the sentences he typed are difficult and stiff to read. You have to chew on words to understand what he wants to express. It is recommended that readers turn off chapter comments. This person is as noisy as going to the cinema to watch a movie with a naughty child sitting next to him crying.

There is a serious separation between comics and daily life.

I want to ask, is the main story finished when the extra chapter is released?

If you're into depression, Game Life 0 is really good.

I think a lot, but my brain cannot constrain my thinking, and all my thoughts are random. In the past, this situation was said to be an imbalance of the soul. The spirit is very strong, but the sex is very weak. Taoists say that the soul is very weak, leading to all kinds of ineffective thinking. Others learn 1+1=2 and learn to push it back. After learning it, they will think why it is not equal to 3? Not equal to 4. . . Why not equal to 999? In fact, they are all invalid. . . In severe cases, this can lead to mental illness. . . Author, please go to the hospital and be prepared... Although you are not serious now. . .

Although it is a comic article, I still feel that the description of the comic is a bit too much. I skipped most of the description parts of the comic and did not subscribe (maybe because I have read it), and why I saw that it has been updated to more than 260 chapters, but the latest update is more than 100 chapters

When will my unheard flowers be ranked?

It doesn't feel fragmented, but it feels like an argumentative essay.

Has the author read A Shu's First Love? ? 😏😏😏😏