Tokyo: Girls Band, Starting with the Divine Song of Drawing the Sword

The writing is good and very exciting. Unfortunately, the current promotion is not good, and the results may be dismal in the future. The author's writing skills are online, but there is a lack of opportunity.

Can you try to update? 😆

After all, this is God. Full of the joy of the second dimension and the atmosphere of escape, but that's why he is God. You should really be able to persevere. You can feel the sense of picture very intuitively. The only pity is that there are still too few, too few.

It's a bit interesting, the concentration of the second dimension is off the charts 🙂

The author of this book writes very smoothly and happily. Everyone can tell by looking at the number of words. The free period is updated at 5,000 or 6,000 words per day. It will definitely be published on the shelves, at least 8,000 words per day. The million-word outline is included in the internal investment. The fun and career will definitely skyrocket in the future. Brother, please help me get the latest page for support. Please! If you have any suggestions or ideas, you can also mention them here! Your opinion is important to me! Give me a mouthful, brothers! 💋

After reading three chapters, I had three sets of Tomson first-grade products at my feet, which made me instantly rich.

5 Stars, why do I collect it? Because the introduction has embarrassed me to death, so I just want to collect it. It's invincible to see the introduction and it's so embarrassing.

It's so cool, it feels like Tan Li Dou is screaming famous lines in my ears.

I took a look at the single chapter description posted by the author and let me share my opinion. First of all, what attracted me was the copywriting, which means I came to watch the song copying. I actually didn't care whether the protagonist was a god or a girl, or whether he was a girl band. I just wanted to watch the protagonist copy the song, and then everyone would brag about how awesome the song was. Then from my point of view, the rhythm was very slow. I chose to skip chapters when it was about to be released, because it was just a song about drawing a sword. By the time professionals started to evaluate it, it was almost a hundred chapters in. And I couldn't quite appreciate how good everyone was at singing music. On the contrary, many in the novel wrote about how awesome the female lead singer was. I will read it for a while, and if the songs I copy don't match my playlist, I will probably abandon the book after a while. In fact, when I skipped chapters, I also discovered that the meaning of the chapter titles in this book is unclear, and it is difficult for me to clearly find the node I want to read.

The gap between Jiahao and Tiandao is the protagonist. It's so embarrassing.

Those who are in the second grade are the world's 😆

Is this the only level? I will probably forget you in the next second Can you add fusionrise!

"You are not our brother" "I like you"

🎭 Character: 6/10, some people 10/10 🎬 Plot: 7/10 ✒️ Writing: 7/10, 10/10 for some

Such sweets won't turn me into a god, right?

This book really, um... Has a strong two-dimensional flavor. It's hard to imagine the author's state when he wrote the book, but I actually caught up to the latest chapter.

Secondary 2 is over, author, please keep writing.

It's the kind of book that's interesting to read for a short period of time, but then you won't open it very much.

At first it was said that I hired the keyboard, but then after writing seventy or eighty chapters, I became a producer, and Maruyama became a mixer and masterer. It has nothing to do with live. Is the keyboard used entirely on the pad track for live performances? It doesn't make sense.

The various interactions between various characters in the early stage are quite amazing and make the readers laugh. However, after the opening warm-up and entering the main text, the various plot designs are obviously rigorous and complex, trying to draw the readers into the girl's frustration, struggle, anger, tenacity, and effort. The writing is not bad, but the main text has no room for the insertion of magical interactions, and it just keeps using the neurological settings thrown out before. There are currently 89 chapters. The last time I laughed out loud due to an interaction was about 20 chapters ago. The current text can be said to be warm, inspirational, and cute, but not interesting at all.

There is a strange feeling that Kamite Mashiro led his four Kamito teammates to win the music No. 1

After reading this book, Haji also wants Haji.

When I first came in and saw the name of the protagonist, I almost lost my temper.

It's just so tiring, the foreshadowing is too long, and it's a little out of touch with the main plot.

I feel like it would be much better to rename My Tokyo: My Band Harem

It's a strange story about middle school students, but the plot is a bit stiff, and most of it is from the new generation There are too many "auxiliaries" in the music, and the description is very good, but there is no clear matching song title. The writing skills are a bit far away from Lao Can, so there is almost no sense of the picture Because the protagonist is enjoying himself, the interaction between the characters is quite smooth after retrieving the members, and the emotional line is a bit hard to push to the beach The book waste is delicious

Md scared me. I didn't refresh the chapter two days ago and thought it was cut.

I feel that if the protagonist is replaced by Tan Lidou, the plot will be easier to accept 😃

There are some traces of AI, but not much, mainly focusing on the details of band training.

An introduction to the four well-formulated characters