Full-Time Cartoonist in Tokyo

The writing so far is quite average, with no highlights. The title of the book is Full-Time Cartoonist. I feel like the author felt that he couldn't write much just about comics-related knowledge, so he added a lot of trivial matters in life, focusing on the people around him instead of working on the plot of the comic. It seems that the plot has no ups and downs. And does anyone really want to know the temperament of the protagonist's Japanese parents?

Recent updates... It's hard to describe in one word... What is daily life? It's not just a few chapters of a movie review or a comic review. Really, would anyone come to Qidian just to read a movie review? Interesting content generated by the interaction between characters is called daily life. Lengthy output of opinions at every turn. Aren't you writing a paper? Aren't you writing a news report? This is a novel!

Let's evaluate it. It's the best writing among all the comics in the past three years.

Writing group portraits for newcomers is a dead end, unless you can update more than 8,000 times a day. Author, you spend too much time on the supporting characters and fail to grasp the focus of the writing, and the way you write is too chronological, and you want to write about everything.

The author's writing style is very good. It was a bit slow at first, but then I felt like it was getting better. Why did he suddenly cut it off?

Author, is the protagonist you wrote about self-hypnosis? Using his own psychological activities, which are not geniuses, to hypnotize himself into a real waste, then there is a reasonable explanation for the protagonist's increasingly poor performance! ! Because that is indeed not a genius, but a waste who denies himself.

There are too many words about painting skills and inner feelings, and there are too many conversations with famous painters. Now that the protagonist is still a newcomer, it feels very disconnected to have such conversations with seniors. After watching it, I felt like it was watery. It didn't focus on the creative efforts like Dream Eater, and there were too many scenes for the heroine.

It's obviously very well written, but it always feels too light and makes me feel tired just reading it. It would be good to read a few of them occasionally, but it's not suitable to be read in one sitting.

The protagonist's setting is really ordinary. If you chat with a great writer for a while, the secret will be revealed! Unless you don't participate in group activities or never express opinions, you won't understand anything others say. It's all your knowledge blind spots, let alone keeping up with the rhythm.

After reading the first few chapters, I was a little confused. I didn't realize the excellence of the comic "Goodbye Eri" from the text. In my opinion, the plot is actually very simple, so the excellence should be the storyboard and inner depiction. The description in the article is too brief and pale, which gave me the feeling of, ah, that's it? You can't expect readers to make up for the comics themselves, but readers should be able to get this touch directly from the article.

After reading thirty chapters, I feel like I haven't read anything.

My impression after reading it is that the progress of the manga is too slow. Each chapter has to add too much description of how the protagonist hates himself and so on. Occasionally, it can flesh out the character. Every chapter says that it is really boring to read. It is unnecessary. I think the author writes well when he does not explain the protagonist's feelings. Once he writes about how the protagonist hates the genius or something, he will keep writing about this feeling. I feel like I can't stop. It's really boring for me personally. I shouldn't write this kind of description even if it's a daily two pages. If it still feels like this on the shelf, I will feel that the word count is too low and I won't order it. I really hope that the author can take a good look at the recent chapters. I think other places are very good. The selection of comics and the portrayal of the protagonist are also very good. Come on

There are too many daily routines. The problem is that your daily routines are... Well, the saying of high emotional intelligence is readable. Anyway, I skipped it. The plot related to the comics is quite interesting. If I mentioned the rhythm earlier, if I didn't write so many daily routines, my results would definitely not be as good as now.

The daily life, which is well-written and as plain as water but as hard to let go of as air, really shocked me in the current starting point that is almost called a quagmire. After reading it in one sitting, I suddenly remembered the sentence "Perhaps the daily life we ​​are experiencing now is composed of one miracle after another." 8 recommendation votes are presented. I hope the author can keep the pace and quality updated.

How can I put it this way? It's fine if the story is slow, but there is a difference between slow and slow. I skipped chapters and there was no sense of inconsistency.

Mr. Author, could you please advance the plot a little bit? 🙂 The timeline in the book has only gone about a week from the beginning to the present. I think if the plot progresses faster and there is less content about the stream of consciousness, your content will be more in line with the public's taste.

Selling dog meat over sheep's heads. They say they are drawing comics, but they turn out to be daily life.

This author hasn't updated for several days. All are eunuchs

They are all unpopular or old shows. What do you want readers to think?

The writing is pretty good, but the pacing is terrible. To be honest, I skipped at least half of the chapters so far. If this rhythm is maintained, I will probably not subscribe if it is released on the shelves. The main line is too slow to advance, and most of the text is just popular science. It's really not necessary. It's understandable that more words are needed to create characters, but 80% of the science content in one chapter is really unbearable.

Where's your update? You should update

Mark it first and then look at it after 300,000 words.

You seem to be quite unpopular with your copying? At the beginning, there were two works that were both well-received and not well-received. It would be better to release such works after becoming famous...

Where's your update? Are you really not going to update?

Are you entering the palace to serve your empress so soon? Is the Sunflower Collection so attractive to you?

Don't be a eunuch, this book is really good

Uh,,, If you think of or can't think of a new way to write about giants, you can definitely call a few colleagues to discuss it. If it doesn't work, even a few old bookworms can give some advice.

The author has made rapid progress. Now daily life is finally good. Yes, the essence of the story is what happens to a group of people. Although daily life is difficult to summarize all the content and difficult to define, but it cannot be separated from the essence of what happens between the characters. Use a thousand points of writing to describe a story. Scenery It is not as good as using 100 points of writing to deepen the character, nor is it as good as using 100 points of writing to deepen the character interaction, As a later author, you will definitely have to write a lot of comics, and there will definitely be those who need to change the plot if they are not accustomed to the climate. On the other hand, the protagonist is drawn more and more, and it is impossible to keep improving his ability. Instead, the best thing to do is to restore the original work, right? Just like many authors who write about a hodgepodge of world views, until the end of the copy, the only way is to be original. It is not the kind of operation where editors randomly mess up the order of the manuscript and overcome the times, but the overall improvement of the painting power, character portrayal, plot processing, lens, etc., Just like the movie Giant, the fundamental solution is not to change the ending, and then change a few plots, which is innocuous, but the overall idea, the core, must be replaced, It's like you keep talking, with a hint of warmth in the coldness, If you apply this idea to Giant, how would you write it? In other words, how would Fujimotoshu draw a giant? The plot of how many dead people must be written is not torture for the sake of torture, but written as a dramatic expression. The overall style will not show shocking and bloody, anti-war, or "that day human beings remembered..." Emotional expressions, It won't even be a youth-blooded comic genre anymore, Who can say for sure, maybe it will be better, maybe Fujimotoshu will change beyond recognition, or maybe people are not willing to ruin themselves

Please put it on the shelves as soon as possible. It doesn't matter if your book is slow and there are few updates. Please put it on the shelves quickly to get more updates.

What manga will you draw after Attack on Titan?