A Knight in His Old Age, Starting from Raising a Vampire Apprentice

Both the writing and the characterization are top-notch novels. The context of this book is very clear and there are many hidden threads. The portrayal of the protagonist is surprising, but I feel that although the portrayal of the white-haired vampire lolita is good, it is not as good as the knight. It feels like it wants to portray a growth process, but it ends up being a bit generic and does not have the most profound image. But apart from this, they are almost all advantages. I heard that the wise men in ancient times did not work hard when writing. This is the reason for writing good articles, so the author must work harder if he wants to be like the wise men in ancient times.

The book is very interesting, but why are the teammates still unable to figure out the red dragon curse even though they have become some of the strongest people in the world? Are the dragons so stupid in the author's world view?

Shen Nong is here Not bad, to be honest, it's really not bad. I did write a stubborn and old knight in his old age. His strength does not lie in his body, but in his god, but it also has shortcomings 1. System, although it does not appear often, this late system is indeed dispensable. 2. Pharmacist, a rural pharmacist who has joined an ordinary organization (not sure about the follow-up background, but this is what it looks like so far) looks rational, with a bunch of cells, tissues, and 60%, but he still has a big face and doesn't want to help. , And they have cooperated for a long time but are not willing to help, and their own strength is not particularly strong Highlights 1. The sense of immersion is not bad, it is really written about a stubborn and unwilling to accept the help of teammates, the system and becoming the guardian knight of the vampire 2. Being tied back The ancestor of the loli blood clan who came to cultivate, the cultivation system, is expected to be the plot promoter, the handling is okay, at least there is no minor poison for now 3. It is a warm daily life, and the gryphon is killed without delay, unlike other stories that drag on for a long time and do this and that. In short, it is worth watching

Let's take the simplest example, an action of cutting someone: The normal writing method is to draw the sword, cut the person, describe the action, the result, and the chapter ends. Author: Chapter 1: Drawing the Sword, Inner Drama of Passerby A, Chapter 1: Passerby B's Inner Drama, Chapter 1: Passerby C's Inner Drama, Chapter 1: Cutting Someone's Inner Drama, Chapter 1: Cut Down, Chapter Sheathing the Sword, Review, Chapter 1: Passerby A's Inner Drama, Passerby B's Inner Drama, Chapter 1. Passerby C's Inner Drama. By the way, every time I speak, I have to shout the slogan: "The upright knight Goss in his old age." It can be seen that the author is deeply influenced by Japanese light novels and Japanese animation. Also, the existing Chinese context does not add a title every time a person is called by name. After all, it is not traditional storytelling.

When I read it in the afternoon, the comment requirement was still 100 followers, but in the evening it changed to 500. Readers' comments are too sharp, right?

If you give up the first time, you will give up more easily later.

Short review: The good side: good writing, strong characterization The bad side: procrastination, the climax goes back and forth and can't be understood, the inner drama is a bit like Tang San's kind-hearted Death God

This is how I personally feel now.

Let me ask, if you don't write anymore, can you give it to me? I feel like I can write.

Some people think it's poisonous, but I think it's pretty good. As a knight, the protagonist cultivates his will. I think the strong will and the protagonist's refusal to eat food are a good match. It's easier to understand if he doesn't become a dependent. In this book, the human race and the blood race are mortal enemies. It is indeed normal for the protagonist to insist on the human position and not to mutate. You can say that the protagonist is stubborn, but I think this is also his charm.

Dear adoptive fathers, whenever the protagonist is not in a desperate state, just kick me.

The world the author wants to describe is huge, but the plot develops too slowly. It's already 80 chapters, and it's still around a city. Now that the protagonist's body has been repaired, it's time to start writing the main plot, right? Write about the conflict with your previous teammates, the development of the bloodline of the ancestor of the blood clan, and the development of your own strength. Author, don't you have an outline? If you are writing a short story, you can just write it until the protagonist dies. Now that the protagonist is resurrected, I hope the subsequent plot will develop faster.

In fact, one thing has always been difficult to understand, and that is why the protagonist doesn't accept help? After reading the following plot, I generally understand something, and here are my personal thoughts: ① The protagonist's injury should be irreversible, at least there is no way to treat it in this world. The previous methods may only be able to produce miracles, or just relieve, or simply help extend life... This cannot help the protagonist regain his potential. In the protagonist's view, it is better to save more meaningful people with these resources to deal with these small probabilities, or to support himself, a useless person. (I personally think that some of the technologies in this world are not superb, so I feel that they cannot be treated. I will talk about why I feel they are not superb later) ②The situation in this world should not be good. It is probably a plane war, and it is not even the upper hand, so the protagonist does not want to drag down his teammates and the entire world because of himself. ③Some methods that can provide fundamental treatment, in the eyes of the protagonist, are contrary to their own moral values! I am afraid that this kind of method is absolutely unacceptable to the protagonist... If he accepts these methods, his will will not be strong enough, and he will not be able to perform at his current level. (For example, changing the brain and first embracing, this is simply an insult to the knight... However, this can also show the level of this world. Changing a powerful body instead of creating a powerful physical body. This kind of alchemy technology also proves that the level is not up to standard; while the first embracing of the vampire can only be simple Contract, rather than surgical transformation. Both of these indicate the technical problems of this world) ... As for the protagonist's path to rebirth, I think the protagonist should take a path similar to resurrection from the dead and Nirvana transformation 😏 Is the protagonist lacking in insights? Does the protagonist lack willpower? There is no shortage of these! If there is a reference object, it can only be the one in the "Zhe Tian Trilogy": Before an old tree dies, it takes root deeply and gives birth to a new seedling. At this time, everything is transferred to the new seedling and lives a new life. It has the vitality of new seedlings and the experience of old trees. (In a sense, this is creation, nirvana, and a new path of life, which should be universal in many worlds)

I vaguely remember that there is a groove mechanism at the starting point: If you are a newbie, you will be required to add a system to your new book. I don't know if the author was tricked.

The protagonist will play the second resurrection match from now on. . . Are you kidding me? 😡

Author, please, let Goss die like this, no ooc, even if he is transformed into a vampire without knowing it, Gossye will definitely commit suicide. Please, let him die like this as a human being. The history of mankind is a hymn of courage and inheritance. It would be a shame if he survived as a foreigner.

The writing is very good, but the first three chapters are a little bit toxic. First he was an ancient knight who was strict and solemn in doing things and was extremely proud of himself. Then suddenly his style changed and he was in trouble. It's really not a big deal, right? 🤔

Just add a little explanation that there will be a huge price to pay after saving, for example Even if he does not have a thorough understanding of the ancient elf tree, (the protagonist) understands the price of cutting off the branches of the elf tree to reshape his body. Then write that the protagonist doesn't want to be a drag on his teammates. Obviously many people feel speechless. The author can make it smoother with just a few modifications, but he has no intention of changing it. I think there should be quite a few readers who run away for this reason. (Die Jia is just a comment, no other meaning.)

The writing is very good. I understand that the author set up a foreshadowing for his teammates, but when he rejected his teammates and then the system showed them up, was it really embarrassing for the author to write this? It's hard to hold back 😂

I remember this picture. . . . .

The writing was good in the early stage, but the pacing started to slow down around the time it was released. During the playoffs, I started talking nonsense and huge side descriptions, which made me angry😡

I feel that the plot is indeed too dragging. The description of emotions in the first half is very good, but Gus can't do sit-ups repeatedly. Sometimes he needs to be simple and straightforward.

After reading the book for so many years, I am still excited about this book. The author perfectly captures the image of an elderly knight: tough and stubborn, adhering to the knight's creed and glory, inheriting and protecting, rich in experience, powerful but declining.

The system is a complete failure. I would like to ask how the system feels after it. If it is low, I will continue to check it out.

6 The author should not always write the protagonist to death. It is a bit boring.

It's very well written. It's hard to find a book that I like. Just slow down the pace and be sure to stick to it until it's finished! ! I have completely broken my defense for several authors who have cut books🤦‍♂️

Although performing surgery is an insult to the protagonist, and the protagonist will never undergo such a sacrilegious surgery, what if after the protagonist dies, someone takes advantage of the remaining body temperature to perform surgery? (This should be considered an if line. Does the author really want to write an extra story? 😁) If the protagonist undergoes surgery, then the carrier will most likely be Lilith. I am afraid that the ancient dragon Aigfener will also be brought along. At this time, the protagonist may become a three-in-one suture monster. I don't know How will it be twisted into 😎 (Such a protagonist is indeed pathetic, and indeed blasphemous and insulting) The author uses a long length to describe a lot, but he does describe a noble knight, a noble personality, a firm will, and an unshakable self! The character is definitely adequate👍 But the more perfect and noble the protagonist is, the easier it is for people to imagine what will happen if the protagonist falls? ! If the protagonist corrupts, I'm afraid it's not the protagonist himself who wants to be like this, but someone else takes the protagonist's remnants and makes bad repairs to create a shoddy product. The protagonist's will, even if he undergoes this kind of surgery and has a three-in-one personality, the protagonist will probably dominate! What will become of the protagonist? Maybe it feels like the protagonist in Pineapple Bun's "Blood Princess and the Knight"! !

It is recommended that the author combines the second or third chapters. After the system appears, the protagonist accepts in the second chapter, and rejects it in the third chapter. It is too separate.

In fact, the quality of the book is acceptable. Except for some redundant sentences, the book is overall good. I'm just worried that TJ will happen later

I would like to ask, does the protagonist become younger after his resurrection?