Over Fifty Years Old, He Started Cultivating Immortals by Raising His Children

What is so messy? Junk novels

The price system is confusing and the prices are unclear. One grade of spirit stone is equal to 10 spirit stones. One spirit stone for one night's accommodation is 3 spirit stones for a bowl of barbecue rice. The flying machine (Broken Wind Kite) is 80 spirit stones. I bought it after searching, and almost spent everything. Here's an idea. If you want to make it simpler, then make the exchange according to real life. A first-grade spiritual stone is equal to 100 yuan (or 1,000 yuan, 10,000 yuan). It is best to write it as 100 yuan, because there are also middle-grade and top-grade ones. The other issue is income and expenditure. How many pieces of soul a casual cultivator needs to live in a day, how much he can earn, and how much balance he has. This needs to be divided and designed. According to the realm, it is the early stage, middle stage and late stage of Qi training. Possess special skills such as picturesque charms, alchemy, and weapon refining. Taking price exchange into account, the novel can be improved to a higher level. Come on!

It's so disgusting... Every time I meet a girl, I save her. Once I save, I have to save her together for various reasons, and then save her and go to bed. Isn't there anything new? If you see this kind of plot, you will give it away with 2 points

Staying in an inn for one night will cost you one spiritual stone, and eating a meal will cost you a few spiritual stones. Isn't your stay in the hotel too outrageous? The protagonist's IQ response is too slow. It took me a few years to have Goldfinger before I knew how to practice more. Doesn't the protagonist himself need to improve his realm? After having Goldfinger, his realm has not changed at all.

Another author who is obsessed with his own pleasure, 88

The appraisal is complete. It's a pure garbage novel. It's not as good as a dog in the village.

I was taking the exam lying down. There was a cheat and almost everyone was wiped out. My son was either dead or injured. I didn't want to watch it for a while.

6. The system has long rewarded a ancestral protection formation disk. Alas, the protagonist just doesn't use it when establishing a family base, just for fun. It's the same when entering Xiuxianfang City. I have a huge sum of money, so I don't know how to disguise myself. When I see old acquaintances from the past, hey, it's just for fun, just to show off that I'm rich. Well, I was knocked on the door by an acquaintance. After killing the protagonist's son, I found out that I had hired someone to arrange the array. I can only say that it looks better 🙂

I have said before that the world of cultivating immortals is very cruel and dangerous. I don't know how to behave, but I just go to the market with hundreds of spiritual stones to buy and buy. I don't know how to pretend to be disguised. I deserve to be remembered when I meet an acquaintance later. The protagonist in this plot has no brains at all. He just shows off what he has in front of others. , That person who went to Huangsha City to compete was completely clueless. A few years ago, the new family was practicing at the third level of Qi. Now they are directly practicing at the seventh or eighth level. After a little investigation, even a fool can see that there is something wrong with you. Are there any sword skills and body skills that even a common man does not understand? If you have no background and no strength, you can wipe out your whole family just by practicing seven or eight qi in the late stages, but you still don't know how to be stubborn. The more you look at it, the more poisonous it becomes. And the blood-scaled beast that was seriously injured knew that there must be someone chasing behind it, and even tried to make a wedding dress for someone while being injured. I am really speechless. I can't stand it anymore. I'm so poisonous. Please stop practicing immortality next time. Thank you...

After holding it in for a long time, I reached more than 70 chapters before I improved my cultivation. Is it so that "completing tasks will reward you with a level of cultivation"? The slave of the system is stable. Hey, disappointed. There is so much water, and I have been holding it in for more than 70 chapters So this is it? ! !

If people outside knew that almost every descendant of the protagonist's family had spiritual roots, guess whether Jindan Yuanying would be very interested.

What is obviously very simple is often complicated to write and cannot be written well For example: There are nine levels of spiritual roots. The Tao body is the Tao body. Why is it written in the Tianling root? It's okay to write the root! The magic weapons are messing around again. The magic weapons in the Qi refining stage are called magic weapons! It feels like a novel pieced together!

After reading Chapter 53, I wanted to give up the book and try my best to suppress the protagonist. Goldfinger is so weak and has so many restrictions. The protagonist, as the head of the family, can't use the family luck and clan rhyme. It's a joke.

After reading a few chapters, I found that the logic didn't make sense and the plot was completely forced into it. Let me just talk about the part where granaries are opened to release grain. A wealthy family provides disaster relief, and the victims can wait to eat. There is no need to rob, but there is food to rob? The daughter of the main protagonist of the disaster relief has to rely on his brother to save it. There is also a section about the protagonist's second son. He dares to satirize an ordinary minor character, not secretly but in person. The protagonist's family is a wealthy family, more powerful than the county magistrate. Various unreasonable insertions are made into the plot. It feels like the author took it from other articles without looking at the different background. Does the logic make sense?

One comment said that if the writing is good, how can a smell of AI be bad... In addition to psychological description in one chapter, it is also psychological description. I love to choose words and sentences. It can be summed up in two words, but "the corner of the mouth twitched violently, and an indescribable huge sense of loss, like a heavy mountain rock, crashed into my heart." There are too many similar expressions Maybe you want to appear literate? But the whole article is so expanded that it just feels verbose and too watery The group portraits are not understood by the group. For example, the two sons, one has a delicate heart with seven orifices, and the other is cold and tenacious, but they stay on the surface. In fact, the father and son all have the same personality expression. When they are happy, they will start all kinds of elated joy, and when encountering difficulties and blows, their hearts will be smashed... This heart has already been smashed into powder The characters are vivid and need words. The characters and behaviors fit their set personalities. The characters will grow at different stages. The protagonist is no longer in his fifties, and his children have also embarked on the path to immortality. Each and every encounter, he will forcefully calm down on the surface and act as if nothing happened, but in fact his inner emotions are turned upside down 😅 To be honest, AI is still too easy to use (I don't say it must be written in AI, so feel free to prove it

The sea, you are so full of water, I don't understand. There are so many pieces of ink about how the heirs have spiritual roots one by one. The task is just like a joke. Just tell them directly that you have a method for them to have spiritual roots. 😅 Later, when they came into contact with the world of cultivating immortals, they couldn't guess it. I also wrote about the second son and felt it was unfair. He has the perseverance to practice martial arts and let him become an immortal cultivator first. Isn't it good? I can't explain how it feels🥲

Don't you use your clan's fortune for yourself? How can one control the family if one's own cultivation level cannot be improved? I cannot understand the author's brain circuit.

I can't stand it anymore. The protagonist's cultivation level is always on the third level.

Waste material flow is no longer popular. Basically, if you write about waste material flow, no one will read it. Don't mention anything else

The more I write, the more time it takes. I have a mountain-protecting array in my hand but don't use it. Maybe I forgot. I have to kill a few people. It's really stupid.

The Mortal Cultivation to Immortal Stream starts with a few million, but the Mortal Cultivation to Immortality Stream is well controlled and keeps upgrading, instead of taking one step forward and three steps back, cheating is worse than not cheating, and using poison if necessary.

You can be approached by state agencies and asked to pay protection fees. If this kind of mortal country can monitor everyone all the time like the Eye of the Sky, you really shouldn't write this book. All practitioners have no secrets. Whether or not the people below are allowed to practice is just a matter of one sentence. Really outrageous

This writing makes me feel depressed and not happy.

As a bookworm who has been reading for ten years, the writing is not bad, the writing style is also good, and the rhythm is good.

This book is a bit slow but I really enjoyed reading it. Each character has his own style. Good looking

Author, I don't know how you only gave birth to five with a group of wives and concubines. It's unreasonable. As a modern person, if the system of having more children and more blessings is helpful to you, then you should have more children. This is only reasonable.

There are still people who want to steal heaven, but ants do not want to be submissive. No matter there are billions of sentient beings! Why are the nine great immortal clans superior to all living beings? Why can the nine great immortal clans determine everything for all sentient beings? Why are all sentient beings not able to enjoy the prosperity created by all living beings? Why do the children born to all living beings always have to kneel before the nine great immortal clans! Are they seeking immortality? ! Maybe. But in fact, compared to the distant immortality, what they want is just the living self at the moment! I would like to borrow the building as a courtesy and wish the author a great success in this book. Guest, would you like to come and watch "Nirvana Clan"? Group portraits, big background Family cultivation, power plotting, delicate writing, and emotions of each character Online, non-routine, original story. If you think it is still interesting, please comment and support it.

The protagonist of Goldfinger cannot be used. This is the first poisonous point. Secondly, the plot is protracted, unenjoyable and disgusting. It is recommended not to waste time.

I finished reading it, and I can't stand it anymore after reading more than fifty chapters. It's systematic but not exciting.

In the early stages of the book, in the city where the protagonist is located, mortals do not know about immortal cultivators at all. However, in addition to the protagonist's family, there are also other secular cultivator families nearby, which means that before the protagonist holds a spirit testing conference, there have been other places in the surrounding area. This is a bit contradictory to the mystery of the immortal cultivators that has been created previously. After all, people are mobile, and nearby news will spread. It is impossible not to know about the deeds of cultivators in other cities holding conferences to recruit disciples.