The Zombies Are so Powerful, I Will Become a Saint in the End

Yoxi, you kid secretly opened a new book to work 😍😍😍

There is too much inner drama, I feel like vomiting when I see it🤢

To be fair, if you want to say that modern people would think about the army coming to save people, then it's really outrageous that a scholar's wife with an ancient background would think about the army coming. Let's not say whether it will come or not. She really doesn't understand the truth that bandits are like combs and soldiers are like grates.

Fuck, fuck, what did I discover, new book

The author, I think that in ancient feudal society, creatures like zombies suddenly appeared. It can be a bit of feudal superstition for specific characters, which is more in line with the background of the times. Of course this is unprofessional advice

More than seventy chapters, pure eunuch

Xu Xiuxiu

The dialogue is a bit long-winded, mainly because the plot progress is too slow, but the creativity is still okay. You can look more at the Doomsday Trilogy of Pagoda to see how others handle the dialogue plot.

I liked the author's last book very much. Compared to similar genres, it has real feelings and a sense of life. If he had kept writing, he would probably be famous by now. This time he changed the subject to a new one.

The protagonist is so pitiful, it feels like no one really cares about him, everyone has their own thoughts

I really hope you will make some changes beforehand, at least delete the description of the scholar's ​​wife wanting to kill the protagonist.

I originally wanted to set it up after it was put on the shelf, but it was too severely affected these days, so I simply set it up in advance. Otherwise, I will have to cut the book into pieces. Sorry for the inconvenience caused to everyone. Bow.

The status of women is placed too high. I should read light novels. The writing is too rough. Light novels are not suitable. I need to sharpen my writing skills. At least they are not so wordy and white. I can't hold on for more than 30 pages.

，，，，，，，，，                                                                                   You set up a small villain at the beginning, don't wait for more than twenty chapters to solve it, three or five chapters are enough. Readers have a sense of expectation, and what they want is to kill the enemy quickly and quickly. If you have to wait for that long, the hard ones will become soft. I can only say that the subject matter is acceptable, but the author cannot write it comfortably.

Mainly because modern identities are more interesting

Author, what have you... Done again? 🙂

The portrayal of the heroine is, in my personal opinion, the most important aspect of this book. Therefore, I have the following views The current portrayal of the heroine is a bit out of touch. The possible reason lies in the description of the heroine's inner activities. Knowledge and action are not consistent. If it's one, I think it's okay. After all, it can be set to be cute in contrast. But it feels a bit strange if there are more. There will be a sense of homogeneity and I look forward to various types of female protagonists. Then there is the excessive change in the heroine's feelings. As far as the current two main characters are concerned, I personally feel that the pace is a bit fast. Although the elements are complete, the thickness is a bit different. Looking forward to continued enrichment in the follow-up Of course, the above are some immature ideas, and the author still relies on his own ideas The above,

The fan group is also banned, and the fan value is also set in the comment area. Boss, it's hard for you to write this novel.

Can the author... Be more specific? Love to watch