Dreamweaver: Is My Mission to Save the World?

The current content of this novel can be regarded as food. It depends on the author's subsequent imagination and description whether he can turn it into fairy grass. There is still a lot of potential, and I look forward to the author's follow-up content.

The sea is all fucking water. In one sentence, a horse can turn over the water several times. Authentic large fountain pen

I booked everything and found out I had been cheated. I don't like watching the behind-the-scenes stories 😭

In fact, there is innovation and new ideas, and the development of those skills and whimsical ideas are all OK. But sometimes you get excited about writing, or you are particularly satisfied with a certain paragraph of description, and you don't need to repeat it many times. Just like this paragraph of mine, it is really too watery. The same sentence appears repeatedly, and the description of the same thing is mentioned repeatedly, and the words are not very big without major changes. It's so stupid. It will cost us money to read the book after you put it on the shelf, brother.

You! Go kill the Dream Master of All Realms!

The stupidest thing is, I don't know if your repeated paragraphs are due to the AI ​​generation not being done well or because you want to play out of chapters and can't play. But it hasn't been improved in the second volume, which only means that you can't even understand the AI.

The book is okay. Well, it's considered plump food. It just has a little too much moisture.

The plot is okay, you can see the PUA dummy after the tsunami is solved, but the style is a bit biased toward a novice, with all kinds of exclamations, explanations of settings, talk about the wheel, and straightforward jokes (I can get all the jokes, and I have also played Ring World, but the author just feels a bit embarrassed when writing it). That's not to say that I don't recommend it to people. The writing is still acceptable, but I don't recommend that people who like The Dream Master read this book with the intention of reading similar books.

I immediately checked out Dream Master again.

It's not funny. People who come to the Dream Realization Agency basically want to see the whole show. It seems that the writing is more traditional, and it incorporates too many ghosts and monsters to make it more difficult to understand. I will wait until I change to the next world before subscribing.