Hunter: Close Your Eyes for Five Years, Open Your Eyes to Hunt

The protagonist is just a clown with useless abilities. Since vision is not used normally, the expansion of the field must be actively opened and announced. When fighting, circles are used to unlock abilities. The circle itself is the observation ability plus the protagonist's long-term blindness training. This vision is of no use to the protagonist who has been blinded for a long time. Then condition 1 should be changed to require self-destruction of eyes to enhance the ability. This is a cumbersome way to open condition 4. It will not be targeted as a weakness The setting of conditions 4 and 5 is outrageous. This condition does not greatly enhance the ability but gives the enemy a lot of space to target. In the future, it can only be mixed in the human area. It is impossible to go to the Dark Continent of the Magic Mirror Secret Realm without a long battery life. If you say that I can change the conditions in the later stage, then for the protagonist who thinks that the conditions can be changed in the later stage, the existing condition bonus will be gone. A good telekinesis ability is adjusted step by step. It is not like Kurapika's needs. He is blocked by so many conditions at once and wastes five years of improvement time. A person with weak combat ability who knows nothing about combat and a telekinesis user who has been trained for five years. In which state do you think the protagonist accounts for the greater proportion in the protagonist's heart? The ability to read is produced by physical energy plus personal experience and thoughts, so it is called the ability to read. The improvement gained in the past five years will not be big at all. The protagonist's development method is a complete waste of potential and limits himself, and the effect of the ability set by the author in the end is not very good. This ability effect is used through the circle, and the circle has to radiate from itself, so the protagonist uses the enhancement system to attack. I opened my mind and by chance, I knew the ability of the passerby who knew about restrictions and oaths but didn't know anything else.

Laughing, the protagonist has only been out for a while and he lost several teeth after being beaten by the clown 🙂 From now on, the protagonist's image will be that of a handsome guy who makes his eyes shine when he smiles 😃

The starting point of ability is the beggar's version of deep enlightenment. It took five years to replace the blue strip. The mechanism is complex and requires a lot of mana, and the soft control effect is hard to say easy to use. You have to be a beggar anyway, and it would be more convenient to die as a beggar than this. At least it won't be difficult to chop melons, chop vegetables, and clear out the miscellaneous soldiers. You are not born five years younger than your peers. 🤭

Sacrifice 5 years of basic skills in exchange for the ability to compete with basic skills

The price of the ability is quite high, but it doesn't feel very strong. Not only is he a quick man, but he also has to be careful in fighting, and his power is not absolutely strong.

If you want to have balanced and flawed abilities, don't do it at a high cost, otherwise you'll be a clown.

The viewing experience is extremely poor. If I hadn't seen it later, I wouldn't have thought it was a Hunter fanfic.

It's better to close your eyes for 5 years and open them to get the Sharingan.

The game experience is not as good as strengthening the system, let alone how many can you beat? Later, when you encounter a BOSS with hundreds of thousands of thoughts, do you use your skills to deliver food?

Does the editor recommend it? That's very lifelike😅

The writing is too detailed, everything is written in such detail, you can't get out of the island even if you write dozens of pages like this. . Don't you think it's too verbose to write about where rice is grown, what water to use, and so on? What's the point?

Now this line is too strong, twelve teams have come out, and there are two brigades. How do you write it later? The protagonist can be very strong in the early stage, but the conflict must be from weak to strong to be easy to write. In addition, the hunter's wisdom and intelligence analysis ability are very important. The image of the character Chou Niu in the anime must be that of a strong man who is good at analyzing and dealing with complex situations. In the latest chapter, he was beaten and vomited blood first, which is definitely inconsistent with the character. He may not be a quick-win type, but no matter how strong the opponent is, don't even think about injuring him in a few hits. He still has the ability to dodge. Franklin of the brigade is the most calm person in the group. He puts the group first. He is definitely a person who has a very clear understanding of the pros and cons, and is not an impulsive personality. It is recommended not to bring out all the top strong players in the anime at the beginning, and they all behave so weakly. In the mid-term, the stronger the laning intensity will be, which can better show the comprehensive ability of the characters.

Author, did you intentionally understate the word count? There are 90 words out of the 100 words in various inexplicable descriptions. If you want to see some plot, you have to search carefully.

Welcome everyone to discuss. This is my first time writing a novel. If you have any good suggestions and opinions, you can tell them in the comment area.

The existence and teaching of mind are themselves the final secret test content of the hunter exam. Doing this will make the examiner look much wiser. Without unconventional means of teaching, it is impossible to achieve normal mindfulness in just seven days. In other words, explaining mindfulness to others and teaching others during this period of time is not a good idea at least for people with normal mindfulness abilities. So this kind of design will always be wrong no matter how it is explained.

You are too close to the plot and the protagonists. Can't you develop yourself and become a nanny?

We found part of the plot in the water

Why doesn't anyone in Hunter write about Kaido's Blue Dragon Fruit?

Many people are scolding the author, but they don't know that if the author can write, he won't follow the plot and write fan fiction. Be direct and original, and be considerate of the author! It's not easy for this kid

After reading the free chapter, I felt like it was a nanny story, but I wasn't in the mood to read it later.

I can only say what I expected.

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The original work doesn't add any of your own thoughts, such as doing something during the exam, otherwise you won't have the desire to read it. I guess you have fewer people watching it in the past three days.