
Death: Can a Blacksmith Also Be a Captain?
死神:铁匠也能当队长?
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 304k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2d ago
- Source
- Qidian
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17Fans
134Chapters
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Eccentric
The setting is too bad. The Zanpakutō was made by Team Zero Wang Yue. That thing is not an ordinary sword. Can the Rukongai blacksmith repair it? If you reveal your ability, you will be arrested immediately. How do you look down on the supervision of the Technology Development Bureau?
The setting is OK, the writing is awesome💩
Authors: Byakuya Kuchiki, Genryanagi Yamamoto, Sai Shigekuni, Kyōraku Shunsui, Ukitake Jūshirō, Saraki Kenpachi, Hitsugaya Toshiro, Aizen Sosuke, Ichimaru Gin, Higashikata, Nirvana, Komamura Zuojin, Abarai Renji, Kira Izuru, Hisagi Shuhei, Shooting range Tetsuaemon , Shiha Petrel, Urahara Kisuke, Ishida Uryū, Chadata Taitora, Ulquiorra Cifer, Grimmjow Jakajak, Ginjo Kūgo, Tsukishima Hidekuro, Kurosaki Isshin, Shiha Iwanwashi, Hirako Mako, Arikada Hakigen, Rokukaru Kensai, Aikawa Ratake, Hyōsoubu Ichibei
I feel like the author has never read the original work
Advice for authors
It feels like the author has watched a lot of Japanese anime and somehow mastered "Japanese people read the air", and then had a bunch of inexplicable dialogues. I want to say, don't learn from Japan's messy etiquette. What corner misunderstood that the protagonist might have killed Death, made the protagonist unhappy and then apologized. There is absolutely no need to talk about this kind of thing. It also doesn't fit Ikkaku's character. What you have to consider is telling the plot, followed by shaping the characters. This kind of dialogue is the dregs of Japan, don't learn from it! My suggestion is to read a few more online novels first and forget about the Japanese's petty style. For example, the author wrote here that he doubted whether the protagonist had killed a god. With Ikkaku's character, one might say, how can you defeat the real God of Death! Then maybe drag him into a fight. It can also introduce the Zanpakutō of both sides, and it can also provide readers with a fun fight. If you want to talk about the setting, just use the plot to talk about it, don't use that kind of dialogue.
I hope that the heroine will be Inoue Orihime, Arizawa Ryuuki, Toubine Riruka, Shiha Kukaku, Ise Nanao, Shifouin Yoruichi, Zaihou, Kotetsu Yuune, Kotetsu Kiyone, Unohana Retsu, Hinamori Momo, Yagomaru Lisa, Kunan Haku, Matsumoto Rangiku, Nirune Yume, Hijin, Rukia, Dia Harribel, Ni Lielle du Odeshovank, Bambietta Basta, Gadis Catnip, Minina McCarron, Litoto Lampado, Kujo Nozomi, Akane Shizuku, Aura Michiwa, Yusho Boyka, Miyano Matsuri, Nene Spangkur, Noel Shimbashi, Moshi Barja.