Adventurer Camp Log

Which extraterrestrial demon is it? Which boss's trumpet is it?

After reading the comments section, everyone has positive reviews, and I was successfully scammed. There are really so many questions that I don't know where to start. The logic is a mess. I don't want to say that the writing is messy, but it is indeed on the low side.

Let me talk about the conclusion first. There is no obvious poisonous point in the food and grass. Those who like dark dungeons or high-pressure resistance worldviews can try it. The following is a detailed review Let's talk about the advantages first: The author does a good job of showing the despair and powerlessness of adventurers in the world view. In this regard, this book is also quite excellent among all the books I have read, with a kind of pure powerlessness. Also because of this sense of powerlessness, the adventurers' struggle in the plot has a different kind of charm. Whether it is monsters, various forces, or power systems, it is good to have a unified style of painting, and the author draws inspiration from Dark Dungeon to a large extent. At least I personally think the world view is very attractive. The protagonist's strength is very well controlled. He is in a state of a little but not much. When facing the enemy, he will neither lack the strength to resist nor weaken the enemy's strength due to his own level. More often than not, the protagonist must defeat the enemy through "fighting of wits" or will, which can better highlight the characteristics of the world view. And the protagonist is a normal person with brains, which is a huge plus in today's novels. Each character is also quite distinct. Teammates who have a good relationship with the protagonist are all useful and can play a role at critical moments and in ordinary times. Moreover, this role does not feel like it is given forcefully, so the perception of each role is quite good. Moreover, in this crazy world view, the struggles and despair of different characters can better enhance the atmosphere of this world. Then there are some shortcomings that I personally think Compared with the exciting plot itself, the plot is a bit too "bland", and it may even make people feel that there is no desire to read it. When watching it, you will have a feeling of "well, I am reading a novel". This world is a bit "barren". Except for a few human strongholds and basically one-time strange spots, there are basically no special descriptions. It is very empty. Of course, if the author wants to write a story like the Dark Dungeon game itself, with the exception of small towns and various dungeons, I will not say it. The protagonist is a very calm and rational smart man. This character is well written, but it also makes the novel somewhat lacking in passion. The protagonist is a restrained person who can really survive in this terrible world, which may be a big advantage to some people. Summary: A very good dark novel with brains. If you like this type of novel, you can read it without thinking. Even if you are not particularly interested, you can still watch it and give it a try. The author's writing style and plot control are quite good. ps: This book is not very to my liking. I probably only saw it here, but the author's writing is really good! If it's of the same type, I recommend another book on this site called "How come you, the brave man, are a special forces soldier?" Is also a Dark Dungeon fanfic, and also sews in things like Trench Crusaders. Relatively speaking, it will be more radical, not as hopeless and powerless as this one, and the setting will be more complicated. Looking forward to more excellent Darkest Dungeon fan fiction, I hope everyone here shows virtue time and time again.

It's the kind of movie that once you put it down, it's hard to get back to it and read it again.

It seems quite special. The author writes with peace of mind, and is careful not to be too influenced by our readers. Write what you want to write. People like things in all kinds of strange ways, and there are many things that are contradictory to each other. All works are loved by some people and disliked by others. Just maintain the consistency of the work.

It feels like the author has started to use AI instead The key points are still full of mistakes Key settings and details are often forgotten The plot also begins to collapse inexplicably How to kill the Lord of Fear, why he is inexplicably teleported, and some details are forgotten as soon as he mentions them.

Writing a book at least lets the reader know what's going on. Writing about killing the Lord of Fear is already very confusing. There is no foreshadowing, not enough clues, and the transitions are abrupt.

It's anticlimactic, and it's basically unreadable after about a hundred chapters.

At that time, I said that the pace was too slow, and the author rebutted me 🙂 Sure enough, I haven't read The Eunuch anymore.

I am more bloodthirsty, I hope the author can portray Eunice better and make her death more heroic😍

The writing is solid and the characters are vivid and detailed. He doesn't look like a newbie, but more like an experienced player who plays a small account. All in all, the book is very good, but there are not many available at the moment.

I always feel like there are a lot of details missing. The power system is a bit confusing. The world view is not as big as imagined. Being suddenly teleported to a new map is too abrupt. The protagonist has the setting of a time traveler.

OK

A question suddenly occurred to me when I saw selling living bodies of fear. What is the underlying structure of this worldview? The simplest thing is that if adventurers want to eat, who will grow the land? There is fear outside the city, but is there fertile land behind the fortress? The protagonist team works hard to survive and earn 3 silver coins to earn money. What is the basic price? The wheat produced by a farmer in a year can feed several people. For example, there are 1k people in the city. The fortress has 200 soldiers and 300-500 adventurers. There should be 10,000 farmers around, and considering the backward productivity, there should be about 500,000 acres of cultivated land. It is obviously impossible for such a large area to be enclosed by a city wall. Only in the wild. It becomes abstract when I think about it😐

Written by an old person, there is no poisonous point so far There is no novice in time travel to help her. In front of her, she inexplicably said that she was under the red xxx in her previous life. Is she going to picture someone later? Bobo Zhao? It can only be said that it is an old thing, but a fantasy with little oil and water, and an endless cycle of eunuchs

The first adventure story is very well written and gripping. This book has a lot of potential, but it's just too little.

Is the entire camp so weak? And why hasn't the protagonist's spell book been robbed? Being able to get involved with a mage should be very valuable, right?

This book feels a bit dead... Mainly because the protagonist's growth is too slow. Even now, he still can't stand alone. Standing is basically a fireball technique, and everything else is basically auxiliary. If it is written too much, readers will not be enthusiastic about it. It doesn't mean that you can't write about a team of adventurers who work together, but it is not suitable for survival in the current novel environment, and it is not fun.

Investigation object: "Adventurer Camp Diary" - Male Protagonist - [Vic] Investigation Result: [Physical Time Travel] Judgment Basis: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, investigates and records the time-travel situations of time-travelers The profession of "Wanwang" aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all the worlds know in advance the time travel status of travelers in this world, and volunteers to provide observers with fast travel information query services If there are any mistakes, Wanwang will correct me ——Zhenjun Wanling Feast Stay on June 20, 2025

The first 100 chapters and the following chapters don't look like they were written by the same person.

It feels like the writing is the same as the description of stand-alone RPG and game copy

The early stage is very good. Let's work hard after the next book.

Is it refined

The quality of the recent chapters seems to have declined a bit. I don't know if it was my imagination. I came back half a year later and looked at the notes I wrote. It seems that it is not an illusion. I couldn't read this book since the protagonist did not prevent Eunice from dying. (This made me feel that the protagonist's actions were very illogical. I gave up after watching the protagonist forcefully rescue her and actually cure her) The setting of Dark Dungeon can at least maintain a lower limit. Although the author's own worldview has a higher upper limit, it is prone to loopholes. What a pity, the beginning of this novel is quite good.