Shrouding the Heavens: The Undying Heavenly Blade, Slaying the Undying Heavenly Emperor from the Start

The plot is terrible. Knowing that immortality exists, the protagonist shouldn't have been running around aimlessly; instead, he should have focused on cultivating and striving to become an emperor. Instead, he wasted millions of years. That's enough time for the protagonist to become a mortal immortal.

Writing both together is less efficient than simply writing a book about the Emperor's Son, the Immortal Emperor, or even just a novel about the Holy Spirit.

Well, here comes another novel with the template of someone claiming to be a Heavenly Emperor, quelling rebellions, and destroying forbidden zones.

You're really something. A woman who transformed from a three-life Fire Saint Spirit Emperor into a fourth-life Immortal Golden Saint Empress is telling me she's inferior to the three-life Wu Shi and the Heavenly Emperor's son, Di Jun? I just want to ask, have you even read *Covering the Sky*?

Several chapters described it as illuminating eternity, how magnificent it was, but in the end, the enemy died with a single Heavenly Emperor Fist. It's absolutely disgusting.

This looks boring. You need to be awesome!

The writing is mediocre, and the plot is weak. The premise involves taking in extraordinary, enlightened beings as servants, but the protagonist lacks the necessary charisma. Ultimately, it comes down to poor writing.

Dude, it's such a waste that you're not out there working!

You wrote *Covering the Sky*, and Chen Dong is a fanfiction author, right?

The protagonist is a bit frustrated, but it's still quite original.