Shrouding the Heavens: I Am Donghuang Taiyi

Yet another example of a physique where stronger individuals consume more resources. Your physique, similar to the Innate Sacred Body Dao Embryo, requires more than ten times the resources of a Sacred Body, even including the resources Ye Fan used to break the curse. With this kind of setting, the Chaotic Body might as well not cultivate at all.

Good heavens! He's only level four, yet he's given away fragments of the Nine-Turn Golden Elixir, a Sacred Fruit, the Demon Emperor's essence blood, divine spring water, and the Demon Emperor's Scripture—instead of using them to improve his own strength, he's given them to a little tiger he's only known for two days? Even giving them to Lin Jia would be better than giving them to a tiger.

Perhaps I'm too old-fashioned; my understanding of fanfiction is still limited to making up for the regrets of the original work, rather than this kind of suppression of the original protagonist and taking all the glory for them upon myself.

The premise is too toxic; the protagonist is like a native. Various teddy bears are looking for Daoist partners, and the most outrageous one is someone with a special constitution who goes to the Yao Guang (a magical realm), seemingly wanting to die even faster than expected.

As someone with the dual special constitutions of the Sun Body and the Holy Body, how dare you go to Yao Guang? Are you tired of living?

No wonder your writing is so simplistic. You're just creating unnecessary drama. It's like writing a novel; you're writing to make money, not just for your own taste. You need to make the readers feel that way. Otherwise, fewer people will read it. On Qidian, most fanfiction of *Covering the Sky* only has one or two readable works; the rest are just garbage. They add random things out of nowhere while writing.

Extremely toxic, this character, knowing the original story, directly steals all of Ye Fan's opportunities, claiming it's to protect his old classmate and expecting Ye Fan to be grateful. He has an incredibly domineering name, and is completely infatuated with women, acting like a sycophant.

Seeing so many people cursing me, I can leave with peace of mind.

Why choose a different constitution? Why choose a combination of Solar Body and Holy Body? Just go for Solar Body directly, why add Holy Body? It's completely unnecessary.

Good heavens, after consuming so many resources, you still have the physique of a Solar Body and a Holy Body, yet you can't defeat an Emperor? Are you kidding me? Look at the neighboring Yao Guang Quasi-Emperor fighting a Supreme Being who just became an Emperor, and he couldn't even kill the Heavenly Emperor, and he didn't even have any physique enhancements.