Hidden Dragon Fairy Clan: Start by Picking up a Loach

The writing is good, but the story is unappealing. Inversion of priorities: The protagonist has almost no sense of participation and is just a background board. Remove him and just say that Lin Qiu is lucky. There is no problem at all. In other words, the protagonist's ability is not a decisive force for the "blessed one", and if he doesn't have it, he will die; And the Lin family's help to the protagonist is not indispensable, and there is no strong binding relationship between the two. The two aspects of the book in which the main character is a tree are very good. The author can read it. The story of the real protagonists, the Lin brothers, is also too ordinary. Everyone knows this kind of plot from beginning to end, and there is no new idea. The core is all about upgrading and killing monsters, and the Dungeon Mushroom version has a fresh feel.

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He is always causing trouble. It is clear that he is a small family of two people who insists on causing trouble. He makes enemies everywhere. If only he could eradicate the roots to avoid future troubles, he cannot defeat others and he is always caught and abused. The way you write it, What readers can do, it doesn't matter if the reality is so suffocating, reading a novel is suffocating, thinking too much, it's impossible 😒😒😒😒😒

The core elements of this novel: the hidden dragon and the fairy clan; the cool points: the growth of the hidden dragon and the development of the fairy clan. From a personal reader's perspective, the opening setting of the protagonist and the Lin brothers' struggle for survival are more attractive, but the subsequent portrayal of the two elements has tended to be mediocre. As for hidden dragons, the protagonist's race, abilities, body shape, habits, and growth process are poorly described. The protagonist is still written as a human being, which lacks the flavor of a dragon. The realm is synchronized with human martial arts, and there is no system of monster beasts; the ability only has buffs that increase luck, and there are no magical powers unique to dragon beasts. Even the primitive and universal water control, breath control, and quick swimming and bite are just like mascot ornaments; the description of the body shape lacks a sense of space. The protagonist, a loach, has not even broken through the first level realm and has been eaten to a length of several feet, which is perfect. The giant thing is already very dangerous, but it is still nesting in the pond in Lin's courtyard. If someone climbs the wall to investigate, it will be directly exposed. There is no clear way to deal with this big hidden danger; in terms of habits, I can only say that the body and consciousness affect each other, and I will stop there. I think this is also the key factor in the lack of dragon flavor in the author's description, and this is precisely the highlight of the details and writing power. In terms of food, it's just a dry fish diet, and there are no other recipes. I don't know whether the protagonist is tired of it. Anyway, it looks like a captive flying column to me. Speaking of Immortals, there were a few popular ones in the past. I forgot the original name of the mirror novel. I read it in the first few dozen chapters. The second-generation genius was overwhelmed and ran away, feeling depressed and panicked. The second-generation genius spent his golden years killing various plots to make room for the next generation. He looked unhappy and had a weak sense of belonging. Later, I don't know why, but I changed my name, and then a lot of family stories came out. There is a common stinking problem. The Immortal Clan has practiced martial arts for hundreds of chapters, but the leaders have hardly done so. The latecomers can write martial arts vigorously. After dozens of chapters, there are still several karaoke fights in small villages and counties, and the main topic is not introduced. As for the cheating results, the protagonist is purely in love and widowed. I won't mention it. It's too bad. There are so many chapters in this book. The Lin family has not yet set up a stick in the county, but they are still lying low behind others, raising fish, selling fish, and sending fish to die to feed the protagonist fish. If they continue to raise fish according to this trend, I don't know if they will be able to do it

Didn't I feel lonely after watching this one all day long? I posted a whole picture to explain the current changes, but it didn't provide any promotion or excitement at all. Where's the dragon? Even if it is a group portrait, what is the significance of the existence of a dragon as big as the protagonist? Looking at it as a decoration? It doesn't move and has no sense of presence. Where is the system? What about Goldfinger? How do you feel that you got obsessed with writing and wrote in it. It is all some words and some exaggerated and shocking techniques. If you write too much, it will really make you read I am tired of aesthetics. Can you push the rhythm a little faster and give it some refreshment. It's not just a few words of praise for how awesome it is It's cool to just pretend to be awesome. I want to see dragons, systems, changes, opportunities. Even GB County has not gone out for so long. When will you write to Qichuan and write to the outside? You are not a pure writer like the old master.

Just like this eunuch? The book is still okay, but too little and too slow.

The author just needs to write at his own pace. Don't think that Ji Yue has to issue so many knives.

Dragon luck reaches the sky!

The sky is falling, we have to raise eunuchs

Is the plot too slow?

Not bad, come on, build a character vest

The protagonist appears too little. Based on the title of the book, readers come here just to transform into a dragon and cultivate a family. As a result, the whole book is about family. The protagonist appears too little. As a result, even those who come here just for the title can't stand it. They still talk about poor grades. Doesn't the clickbait just mean poor grades?

It is a world of martial arts in itself, and you can definitely enter Taoism through martial arts. Make up some Kung Fu with dragon characters, such as Dragon Claw Hands, Golden Dragon Immortality Magic Kung Fu. Subdue the dragon with 18 palms and subdue the dragon with 18 legs. Isn't this plot very involving? And you can also clearly distinguish the various characters in the group. Who is proficient in 18 palms and 18 legs can be distinguished at once. This group portrait does not immediately become three-dimensional.