Gou Became a Saint in the World of Martial Arts

Isn't this a bad review? Today I had a fight with you

After watching it for a long time, I couldn't figure out where the protagonist Gou was, he was getting more and more outstanding.

Is the author systematic? Can the author spend the money earned by the protagonist in his own book? Otherwise, the two to three hundred thousand taels of silver notes that had been silently collected earlier would be gone in the blink of an eye? The same was true for the alchemy treasure ship that followed. They made a huge profit, and then the money disappeared? No matter how you look at it, it's against the law.

You still have to read the comment section. It's not just one or two people who are slow to respond to the upgrade. It's true that the water is too strong and the pace is too slow.

① It has nothing to do with Gou ② Traditional upgrade text ③ The writing is pretty good ④ There is nothing new, the plot has no surprises, and there are no surprises. Although it is an old routine, the routine is also exciting, at least the feeling of upgrading is there. To sum up, I think this book belongs to the food level.

The same water, one picture has 2/3 in the water

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It's not because I think highly of you. Your name should be changed to that of Shifang Martial Saint. I have read more than 200 chapters of the book "Martial Saint of the Ten Directions". The main character is always in a dog-like state, and I can't see what's so exciting about it. Listen to them brag and kill all the way. There were killings, but they were all done in the dark, and the protagonist never came forward. The first 90 chapters, which I didn't subscribe to, were quite interesting in terms of character descriptions, but they were basically gone after that.

It feels like getting out of here, and it also combines elements such as "Gou Dao" and "Liver Proficiency". I feel that the writing is quite successful, and I hope it won't collapse in the future

When I looked at the name, I thought it was something the system would drool over. The writing is exquisite, the fights are rendered, the plot is progressive, and the layout of the novel is all the work of a great master. Which master is it? What a great book! Push! ! !

First, Nan Zhuoran (Jiuxiao) Second, Ji Yunliang (Xuanyang) Third, Zhong Yu (Jiuxiao) Fourth, Yanchi (Jiuxiao) Fifth, Huo Qiushui (Yuchen) Sixth, Qu He (Zhenwu) Seventh, Luo Chengxuan (Xuanyang) Eighth, Zhang Baicheng (Xuanyang) Ninth, Ruan Lingxiu (Yuchen) Tenth, Chen Qing (Zhenwu)

It is already the third level of matryoshka. The sense of repetition is too strong. The second level of Tianbao Sect is too similar to the current Da Luo Dao.

In Ji Do Ryu, the protagonist has the golden finger of God's reward for hard work. The early writing was very explosive, and there is a plot point in it that is very exciting, which is the partiality of the protagonist's grandfather. The grandfather devoted everything to support another grandson's martial arts practice, but the protagonist did not even have a small amount of registration fee for the martial arts school. The other grandson appeared to have good qualifications, but had a bad temperament and ended up with poor grades. The protagonist relied on himself to become a talent. This kind of extremely eccentric, blood-sucking character plot that creates the opposite result is very well written.

The writing is very good, the writing is smooth, I like to read it, it would be better to add some emotional drama

Although the routine is a bit cliché, the fun points and the fighting scenes are well written. It's much better than the other one. Although the other one was written by an old author, it was written in a coquettish way, with all kinds of bloody plots, and the protagonist was written to be both serious and strong, which was not smooth at all.

The rest is all for you. Don't do anything during the National Day holiday. Just write more and write more.

Understand?

Update soon. 😆😆😆

110 Defenders

Write better

Is it so difficult to write 7,000 or 8,000 words now?

I feel the transition to the book is too slow, so I will vote first and then make comments. I haven't read the last forty chapters because I really can't get into them, the transition is too slow. Speed ​​up the pace. If you feel better, please call me. I will start killing pigs again

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There is a panel, where you can get started with martial arts, and then you can practice at home to reach the highest level. What does it mean to go to a martial arts gym? You have time to practice fishing, but not good at archery? Why don't you practice that sword technique? A time traveler's brain is soaked.