The Martial Lord of the Troubled World

Zhongpin Book Bar I can only say that it is too overwhelming. How can anyone say that it can be compared with Get Out? This book is so watery. A water monkey is more of a protagonist than the main character. I killed him four or five times without being killed. I feel uncomfortable reading it. I really regret that I subscribed so much.

The martial arts novel of the Republic of China has a very strong sense of crisis, and Xiao Gunkai lives up to his reputation. The plot so far is quite good, but the background of the Republic of China naturally has a length limit, and the map cannot be expanded infinitely. It seems that I have already seen the scene after 800,000 words, and I will not even learn to get out of here.

This monkey deserves to die after following more than two hundred chapters, right? ? ? Is it possible that you want to write him as the Monkey King, the Monkey King?

The writing is so good👍I haven't read a novel with this theme in a long time

I hope that the protagonist will transform into a muscular tyrant later and beat the world hard. Big is strong! Strong means big!

The author writes very well. He is very talented and accumulated. He will write slowly according to his own wishes. Come on.

Great author, please work harder. I've given you a monthly pass. Please update more.

It's really cool. I'm really good at pretending to be cool.

The main line in Shenghai was too weak, and the pig's feet drifted with the tide. There was no predetermined target, and the follow-up was difficult.

1. The water monkey never dies and is stronger than the protagonist 2. Aunt Ding, who was good to the protagonist, dies 3. The newly opened map after leaving Shenghai is not so good.

The second uncle who is a warlord is a bit unhappy to be written like this. When I wrote about foreigners before, I thought he would find ways to engage in arms later. It's all on the shelves and the pattern hasn't been opened yet. You can just send your second uncle to the mountains to become a bandit. Don't expand your troops too quickly in troubled times. In the city, you are like fish and meat. When you leave the city, you are just a knife. This subject matter is really good, but the plot is not fierce enough, not ruthless enough, and not exciting enough.

It doesn't matter whether you write about the Republic of China or not, it doesn't matter whether you revolutionize it or not, and it doesn't matter whether you save the country or not, but it is a history of humiliation after all, and foreigners must go to death, otherwise only heartless people will have a sense of belonging. The biggest problem the author has right now is that the fight with monsters is too ink-written. No matter how well written this thing is, it will still cause visual fatigue. Since you like to practice, you can travel to the world of pure martial arts and fight monsters every day to practice. Since you are traveling in the Republic of China, you can leave foreigners alone and write weird stories all the time. Even if you write about flowers and can win more than a dozen Nobel Prizes for Literature, you will not be as attractive as foreigners.

The first 200 chapters can be called fairy grass, but the bad operations in the following include but are not limited to 1. Running away suddenly while beating, forcing the villain to stay alive (Water Monkey) 2. Jiahao behaves a lot, likes to talk to himself during the battle, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, and likes to cosplay others pretending to be b 3. Being controlled by the panel (can be said to be the system), what does the panel need (demon soul) ), the protagonist is like a man possessed and must complete 4. Aunt Ding (equivalent to mother) asks him to do nothing. He feels that he is very strong and wants to force his relatives to follow his will (in the early stage, he relied on Aunt Ding's selfless protection). As a result, he got into a fight and was arranged by the author to steal the house. Aunt Ding disappeared, and then he turned over the table and opened up 5. The protagonist gradually became a native from a time traveler

I think Water Monkey is more like the protagonist. The protagonist is a villain who dies because he talks too much.

Advantages of this book: Although the setting is not novel, it is still interesting. The upgrading aspect is very satisfying. The fighting scenes are exciting. The identities of the protagonists, rich and young, are vividly and interestingly written. The martial arts background of the Republic of China is quite eye-catching. Disadvantages: The protagonist often shows amazing wisdom and logic, the map switching events are quite abrupt and weird, there is a disgusting villain NPC (survival time is more than ten chapters), the plot's emotional setting is also weird, and there is a certain feeling of frustration if you want to be happy or unhappy. Sense (the feeling of attribute life) All in all, the advantages are very obvious (it rises quickly, it is fun to play, and the muscles are strong), and the shortcomings are also very obvious (amazing wisdom, abrupt picture changes, and occasional convulsions that depress the plot) Everyone can use it as a reference for reading.

Don't let a remnant of the previous dynasty be the heroine. The supporting character will be disgusted by the sight of zombies.

As soon as the protagonist came to Shenghai, he enjoyed Dingxiang's resources, and Dingxiang's resources all came from the smell department. As a result, when he needed help, he pretended to stay out of it, and he still looked down on him. Even if he doesn't follow Ding Xiang as enthusiastically, it doesn't matter if he helps out casually. The protagonist is not threatened by any position at all, it's just about whether he wants to or not. He obviously has this ability, and writing so many protagonists is bound to take action in the end. Why do you have to write so pretentiously? It gave me a sense of déjà vu, as if the Dragon King's son-in-law forcibly waited for the villain to finish pretending and then came out to slap him in the face.

The writing is really good, the writing style is very high, and the story is very strong. People say it is very similar to Go Away, but in fact the writing style is higher than Go Away.

Or just reduce the hang-up. If you take the nb skills like You Ling but don't use them, it will be a waste of resources. Make the main character look like an idiot.

Seeing the Xuanwu Terrace at the back, I felt a little nervous, so I just asked the protagonist to show off and let his subordinates deliver it. Although the subordinates were there for money, it was very uncomfortable to watch. What I wanted to see was the protagonist killing everyone and pushing all the way, not sitting in a high position and watching the people under him die and become disabled. It is said that if you are disabled, you will be supported for the rest of your life, and if you die, you will get ten times the pension. If I ride a horse, I will be disabled. I still don't understand that this is bullshit? In modern times, our country is rich and powerful, and providing subsistence allowances and disability subsidies to low-income people is definitely a great thing, but in the troubled times of the Republic of China? Whoever believes it is stupid.

The first life: Tuoba Goudan "The Final Priesthood" "Wizard's Bloodline" Stop v5 Twelve Heavenly Kings The second life: Lin Shoujing "The Martial Master of the Troubled World" Stop v5 The third life: Unknown The same routine as the final priesthood, he will run away soon Fortunately, I did not continue to subscribe Father-in-law Goodbye!

Learn to get lost, but don't learn from the bad ones Similarly, the protagonist loves to show off, but at least get lost will not write a plot in which the protagonist deliberately lets his subordinates die in order to show off.

Laughing to death, this is why you should get out of here. The first and second names on the new book list are all about getting out of here.

It's on the shelves It's better to get it soon Kill this guy surnamed Song Don't wait for a few days

It feels like the protagonist's cheats are not reflected at all. On the contrary, these female characters write much faster than the protagonist himself. There are women who write a lot of words in every scene. On the contrary, the protagonist's own personality and the power of the cheats are not reflected. Once the gender changes, it feels like watching a female video.

Can Qidian have a function to punish eunuchs? Once the author eunuchs, half of the Qidian coins will be returned to us readers who have fully subscribed. These eunuch authors can easily punish eunuchs at no cost at all. It is simply ridiculous.

The opening chapter is really well written, and it's quite thoughtful among the bunch of Yakuza and Dian-ryu genres, and I enjoyed reading it with gusto. But after the warlord or something's son came out, it fell apart a bit. From being a noble suit thug to suddenly falling into other high-point streams, there was a precarious feeling. The key is that the author still suppresses the strength of the protagonist, who can't get up to the level of martial arts. The family members who got a lot of water were still written in the early stage, but they disappeared when they arrived in the magic city. The plot was also broken up here and there, and it was fragmented. It killed a water monkey and ran away. . . It's really disappointing. I can only wish the author better and better.

The author took a few days off to recover from his illness. It was written by someone else. Not only are these two pictures devoid of substance. Princess Panxiang has no problem putting it on a female channel

Really, it's really nonsense. What kind of fateful prophecies are forced to conflict with the title of the book? It's nonsense.

I saw Chapter 280. How can I put it? The protagonist has learned martial arts that are awesome. He can level up and fuse multiple alien beasts. He is awesome. However, he is so awesome that he was driven from his hometown to Shanghai like a dog on mourning leave. He failed to save his aunt in Shanghai and was forced to leave Shanghai. It feels like there is no main plot outline. The writing is messy.