From a Humble Handyman to an Eternal Emperor

You must remember that what you are writing is a harem novel, and lightning protection is the first priority. Of course, your target customer is Guigui. I didn't say that, but you have to explain it first. I spent money and saw Guigui, and I am going to start complaining. Secondly, in terms of plot processing, I saw that you were avoiding lightning, but in some plots, you wrote that the heroine was arrested many times, and I was really speechless. From the moment the protagonist saw the heroine, he was indeed avoiding lightning, but what about the process of catching him? How was he tied up when he was unconscious, and how was he sent to the prison? Can you explain it clearly? Do you have to let people isolate him? Not less than your Braille money. Also, I don't recommend engaging in courtship. This thing has been criticized for a long time. Even if you write well, you will still be scolded.

Judging from the current situation of the Tamaki chapter, I think the pace is very slow and it's over. The single chapter is actually a bit interesting, but the pace is too slow and makes it uncomfortable to watch. Anyway, even cats and dogs can bully the protagonist. What's the point of teaching the minions in front of you a lesson in a few chapters? Then there is the strength of the protagonist. Your second mirror is going to write hundreds of chapters, 150 or 200 chapters? After rescuing his wife, he was frustrated throughout the whole process. He only relied on his wife to let Li Xian do it, and was manipulated by Li Xian. The Yucheng chapter is destined to be written very slowly. From Yumin to Yinmianlang, his status has been improved three times. I will finish writing about 70 chapters. It feels very separated from the previous Ruyi Jianghu. If Tamaki was shown in the early stages, I wouldn't watch it. Li Xian seems to be a bad guy, and he has good martial arts skills, especially swordsmanship and archery, but from the plot point of view, he is finished. His archery skills can eliminate monsters, and there is no use in being high-spirited. The top-grade skill of the Setting Sun and Fading Blood Sword is so free that the sword breaks before it even comes out. Although I understand that the Heavenly Sword is powerful, don't push this top-grade skill to such a low level. Except for the wife, the Setting Sun and Fading Blood Sword is only for fighting monsters. You can only rely on the wife to set off your strength. I suggest speeding up the Tamaki chapter. It is far worse than before. Now it will be better to cut through the mess with a sharp knife. Just cut off the details. Just cut off the small tasks and so on. Don't get carried away. The setting and characters of this book are actually quite good. I admit that they are excellent, and they are still good enough for now. Also, don't change the title of the book over and over again. The more you change it, the more vulgar it becomes. It's not as good as the previous book Baigan Cheng Di. Why is your book not getting good traffic? It was too bad before it was put on the shelves (if you want traffic, please revise it before it is put on the shelves). What's the point of changing the title of your book? It's better to change it when you have time to change your book's enmity with your roommate because of the elixir.

Many female protagonists chased her 😍😍😍

The story of Tamaki cannot be said to be bad, but the writing is too "tricky". This article is almost completely separated from the previous stories and characters, and it is too long. The author probably wanted to enhance the control of the plot and slow down the pace. But this way of writing is a bit excessive, causing the Yucheng chapter to almost become a unit drama, with only a few strokes describing the better Nangong Shenyin and his wife. The front and back are almost two books. The author can slow down the pace of writing, but many people will not be able to persist when writing like this. It is difficult to write a long article, but directly changing the map to develop is the ancient way of writing online articles.

The writing is so good, not cliché, not bloody, not pretentious and slap in the face, who else! Not yet the eunuch male protagonist

It's good but not unpopular, and it's not stupid. I've been a bookworm for ten years and love reading it. Nowadays, as long as it's not in line with the mainstream of being cold-blooded and ruthless, it's not a good book. I don't agree with it very much.

So it's very beautiful and needs to be popular.

The writing is great, the logic is clear and the links are orderly. There may be some things that are far-fetched, such as details like two hundred arrows. I saw some people saying "please feel better", but I don't quite understand what "please feel" means. Does it mean vanity? The more satisfied the vanity is, the happier it will be. I don't know if I understand it correctly.

The climax part is very dull. You can feel that I wanted to write it well, but I couldn't hold it in, which was very uncomfortable. The daily part is very well written, and overall it is a very good book.

This book is really well-written, with great control over every aspect. It has a golden finger but the progress does not make people feel exaggerated and boring. The interaction with the wife is really amazing.

It's another trouble-making book. As long as the protagonist is there, there will be trouble and everyone else will be fine. The protagonist is everyone's displeasure and everyone wants to target the protagonist.

It was so vicious in the early stage, how did you endure it? There are poison spots everywhere, a book that should have been hung up long ago. Later, there were so many monthly tickets. I really can't figure it out, it's too poisonous, and I usually don't comment on it. I really can't take it anymore, I really can't take it anymore.

The common problem of this kind of story is that the protagonist is given powerful cheats and various adventures, but the level of combat power has never been improved. The problem is that the background is insufficient and the starting point is low. You have already cheated and you have been struggling to break through the first and second realms. I am very curious about how much cheats those passers-by in the third and fourth realms who appear randomly have to use 😁

The front of this FMD is too poisonous. . . There are so many monthly votes. You must vote with your buttocks 😰. Those who can bear to see behind them are all very human beings. They are all true divine farmers.

I feel that the author is not suitable for writing this kind of subject. Take Gou's becoming a saint in the world of martial arts as an example. Most of the bytes are used to improve the realm of martial arts. The dance is very clear, the strength is very clear, and there is no such natural beauty as the protagonist. There is no promotion channel in this novel. The protagonist is controlled by others wherever he goes, and the people he meets are all weird people who plot everything. It is very uncomfortable to watch. The author also wrote many key points, such as calculations. To plan the protagonist, you have to state it very clearly and logically. It usually takes two or three days to finish writing. How do you calculate the protagonist, and then eat the meat? I skipped to read it after chapter 420, but if I remember correctly, the protagonist tried once but failed, and just kept picking up girls there. In fact, it is really not suitable to write this kind of thing. It is suitable to write the kind of normal articles in ancient times. The martial arts is very vague. This novel gave me a feeling I feel that the author doesn't want the protagonist to be comfortable at all, so all kinds of small tricks, ghost doctors, and self-centered skills are all things that do not improve the strength. In fact, if it is an ordinary novel, I think this kind of thing is more meaningful than ordinary martial arts. You have to pretend to be out there, saying that you like freedom, but you don't understand what true freedom is. I guess the author is like this too. In this way, I will slowly describe it. This is something I can't understand. I usually talk about the results of my practice, but in fact the process is the most important. This novel seems to be quite popular, but in fact it is not slow at all. The protagonist is so controlled by others, ordinary people may go crazy. How can I have so much energy and such When dealing with multiple women, you want to make the female characters lifelike. You only need a few in the world, but you have to write all the female characters in a useless way. I saw chapter 420, and I found that really even if I saw chapter 820, I felt that I might not have too many expectations. I quite liked reading it at first. But this kind of thing is not what boys like. Boys prefer the tip of a knife to lick blood and improve. However, the protagonist does not have a good platform, and he is always behind women. He dare not jump out of his comfort zone. In traditional fairy novels, the protagonist is basically very tired, but this novel makes me feel that he has been playing. He didn't seriously try to improve, and more importantly, he really didn't improve at all. The author also suppressed his realm to death, but also loved to cheat. It seems reasonable, but it is extremely unreasonable. Suddenly, a ghost doctor teaches you martial arts, and an old man suddenly appears. It seems that this old man is not simple enough to treat you differently, really? Is this reasonable? But if there is a normal platform for improvement and you work hard, it makes sense. Instead of being like the protagonist who has no idea how to improve the successor, it feels like there is no hope at all. The author is getting more and more confused now as he writes. I feel that I want to write a novel seriously, but now I feel that I don't know how to reasonably improve the protagonist's strength because the background of this novel has been laid out from the beginning. He is a happy young man, which means that he must be a genius and have extraordinary opportunities. Otherwise, how can you improve? I'm not your old mother. You have no money and no power, so why do you depend on you for everything? If you look at other popular novels about God's reward for those who work hard, basically the protagonists are looking for ways to rise. This protagonist is very independent and doesn't want to lose too much face, so he is really a special one. Strangeness? It's very counter-intuitive, otherwise there wouldn't be 500 photos. I haven't touched the third threshold yet. No matter how slow it is, it can't be like this, unless this slow-burning work doesn't focus on the theme of fairy tales from the beginning.

This year's Shen Nong is not very good. When I saw Chapter 19, my scalp was numb due to the poison, but Shen Nong didn't say anything in advance.

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I have read Chapter 390, and it is indeed a work that starts low and moves high. It looks fantasy on the surface, but is actually martial arts. It's easy to put people off at the beginning, but you'll feel it after about 100 chapters. Let's talk about the shortcomings first. The most important shortcoming is that the fighting description is not exciting enough. It is obvious that everything is the strongest and the best, but it cannot be displayed. Then the scene about the struggle in the officialdom and the battle for supremacy on the battlefield showed that the author really didn't know how to write. Fortunately, he didn't continue writing later. Then there are more than 300 chapters and there is no main story line. I don't know if I will keep fighting monsters and leveling up. I hope there will be a main line. The advantage is that the characters are delicately drawn and three-dimensional, which many flowing novels do not have. The emotional description is also good, unconventional, it's not just you love me and I love you, the description of the supporting characters is also very rich. Some people say that the protagonist is the Virgin, but actually I don't think so. If you want to write the supporting characters well, you can't just write si in one or two chapters. It's okay to let some villains live longer, as long as they don't abuse the main character. All in all, it is worth recommending. If you read it, it will at least solve a week's book shortage.

The writing is too exaggerated. To make a pot of soup, a warrior needs a thousand slaves to carry water? Even if it is for the sake of plot, it is too inconsistent with common sense. Moreover, what about the woodcutter?

You have platinum resources🙂No kidding😢

Good book. First of all, this book is about a harem, and there is no cuckold complex. The current three female characters are all very well written, and are currently interacting with the third female character. However, the first and third female characters are both stronger than the male protagonist, and they are stronger than the male. The first female character has been written to perfection. The character is paranoid and extreme, and does not belong to the category of good people. It can be said that it is a very difficult type to describe, but the author has created a complex and plump character that makes people love and hate. This shows the author's skill. The overall plot is biased toward martial arts novels, which is different from traditional fantasy and system upgrades. Martial arts upgrades are not the main line, and becoming an emperor is not the goal, but a tool used by the author. Therefore, the upgrade speed is not fast, and some plots are a bit abusive and unpleasant, so readers who like Shuangwen generally dislike it.

After it was put on the shelf, it was written back and forth around two or three women. The old lady's foot wrap was smelly and long, like an ancient martial arts romance novel from 20 years ago. The protagonist's golden finger was very useless. It was almost 300 chapters before the second level. So many peaks were of no use. It was not enjoyable at all. Hey, it was a waste of money.

. This kind of junk novel can also be a good one. ? I will die of poison before I can read Chapter 20.

I understand why I was unhappy with the Tamaki chapter. The protagonist got too few good things. Compared with before, after leaving the madam, he got the golden light of magic. Zhongcheng martial arts flicks the golden light. Double turbid clothes, hair roots, clear breath from the mouth, complete spear skills, five elements formation, ghost doctor inheritance, miraculous skills. What did Yucheng gain? A half-impaired drinking skill, a medium palm technique, a pile of fragments of Qiankun Clothes, and a pile of fragments of magic materials. Please don't count the painting skills that can only be used for flirting and the machine skills for making sex toys. Author, if you think these two skills are very powerful, then show them quickly. If you dare not use the things made by the dragon corpse, it is the same as nothing. The double pupil and fierce clothes can be used secretly. If you cannot use the things made by the dragon corpse, it is the same as nothing. The Qiankunyi you described is even more difficult to describe. The plot for the protagonist to obtain materials is the same as picking up. Here the princess went to a party and picked up some materials, and there was a walk to the auction house and picked up some materials. There is no sense of achievement at all. As you write this, you were attacked while patrolling the market with Li Xian. After the attack, he found that Qiankun clothing materials were sold at a nearby stall, so he bought the materials and went home to practice martial arts. And the protagonist knows that he needs Qiankun Yi to beat the princess, the author knows it, and the readers know it. Therefore, this long and boring plot cannot be skipped. Therefore, everyone is tired of seeing Qiankun Yi. I want to skip to the next plot quickly. This is why the Yucheng chapter is not good to watch. It is obviously the most prosperous place, but the things the protagonist gets are not as good as those in Hualongmen and Feilong City before.

First of all, let me talk about my evaluation: Above the Grain and Grass, Under the Immortal Grass The highlight is the author's writing style and setting. Realm setting, map conversion, character mentality. These are what the author is good at and are quite outstanding. But the shortcomings are precisely in these places. The descriptions of realms are often extremely subtle, but they have little impact before and after each breakthrough. I read nearly three hundred chapters before entering the second realm. Although there are advantages to being slow, the relationship between realm, martial arts and time is almost confusing in the current reading. The Gan Emperor plug-in artifact is also suddenly informed like a pop-up advertisement, and that's it. In these descriptions, the author repeats many sentences, which makes it a bit tasteless to read. The core of this book is Jingbao, and there is no description at all in the dozens of chapters. There is no hint at all about other people's martial arts realms, and I don't even know which realm they are at. This is a bit confusing to read. If everyone is hiding, but everyone is also gossiping, it is impossible not to have words. In addition, in recent incidents, my personal opinion is that the author has overpowered the protagonist, and the protagonist behaves in a mess. Just talking about half a tael of silver, he talked about having no money and not being able to afford food for a few chapters, and then he downplayed it and said that hunting can be exchanged for money. It made people confused why he didn't do it in the first place. Several actions are often carried out here and there, which makes people feel unhappy while reading. Several events are obviously beneficial to the protagonist, and there is no disturbance in the heart while reading. In short, I hope the author can adjust the rhythm. Keep up the good work and give me a monthly ticket

The protagonist was born in Qiongtian Village, Qiongtian County, Qiongtian Prefecture, and was born a bitch!

I thought she was a kind of cold fairy, but she turned out to be a little fairy, dragging her as if the male protagonist owed her money, thinking that she was a great favor to the male protagonist. Not to mention compared to Madam, Luo Xia and Lin Aoshan are much more charming than her.

I have been reading online articles one after another for twenty years! I have read a lot of online articles but not many have read the full text! If the full score is ten points, based on the current content, I will give it 8 points! This book is worth reading! This book is different from the previous waste stream and ridicule stream! The training system is unique! Gives people a refreshing feeling! Cultivation is not easy in the harsh world! The content at the beginning is closer to reality and has a deep sense of immersion! This book is different from most pretentious and slap-in-the-face cool articles! At the same time, it is also a highlight that distinguishes it from other books! Because there are so many cool articles on the market now that are pretentious and slap in the face, they are overflowing! I saw some people in the comment area saying that the article was not exciting enough and that it was too high! In fact, it is also the highlight of this book! The author fully laid the foundation for the hardships of the world in the early stage! Cultivation is not easy, but the fate of the protagonist's awakening is that God will reward those who work hard, and they will surely gain something! It's the kind of step-by-step destiny! I saw that the protagonist in more than 300 chapters has only been practicing for more than a year! At the beginning of cultivation, it is not too slow to figure out how to reach the second level of cultivation even though resources are not sufficient! Some readers want to coerce the author's wishes! In fact, I would like to say that this book even has shortcomings! But the flaws do not hide the virtues! I hope the author will write according to his own outline of ideas and not be led astray by a small number of readers! A few more comments! First, the division of this realm is a bit blurry! The protagonist is currently in the second realm. I don't know. Maybe there is something wrong in my reading! Second, what is the role of luck, and why people with luck can be on an equal footing with warriors. The article seems to introduce that even if you get luck, you cannot extend your life or live forever! Personally, I have read more than 300 chapters and feel sorry for some of the content in the article! It's the plot where Wen Caishang wants to dig out Li Xian's double pupils and personality split! I think the author just wants to give Li Xian an opportunity to leave! In fact, at that time, the protagonist had already taken over! The two of them can be equal to each other. When the protagonist surpasses her in the future, he can definitely help her in return! The protagonist is not born with a silver spoon in his mouth! Aren't most people in real life just bullshit? There is actually no shame in being able to take advantage of all the resources around you! What's shameful is that you don't want to make progress and just live on a soft diet! Finally, I hope the author will continue to work hard and not be coerced by the niche! There is still a long way to go! He should be a great writer in the future!

Those who say it doesn't look good, please take a closer look. The characters are carved to highlight the description. Writing skills and literary literacy. The plot is progressive, linked to each other, one above the other. If I say it's not good-looking, I'm afraid I've read too many fast-food articles, and I can't eat ten lines at a glance, right? !

I forgot about it because of the long time in the early stage. I remember that it was a very ordinary proficiency level at the beginning. Madam only got better after the Dragon Appreciation Banquet. I didn't take a closer look at Feilongcheng, so I only took a closer look at Madam after she appeared. It can be seen that the author is very careful in setting up the world view. The settings of skills, realm, reincarnation, clothes, and treasures are all very good. I think there is no problem Then I will go to the Yucheng chapter and summarize what foreshadowing or cool points before entering Yucheng. Please correct me if there are any mistakes: The identity of the rescuer in Feilong City is exposed Punishing the princess Three Realms         Ghost Doctor Line       Nangong Liuli Line      Madam Reunion       Taoist Marriage Contract, Jade Girl Line       Gu Nianjun's Slap in the Face         Zhujiao Line   The Complete Story of Demons and Ghosts Brother Line The follow-up world view is unfolded. In other words, from chapter 380 to chapter 610, the Tamaki chapter has been promoted to the third level in almost eight months. The rest of the story has stayed exactly where it was before. The Tamashiro chapter is like the previous chapter, not to mention completely disconnected, but also 80% or 90% severed like an independent copy. That is to say, readers who have been screened in the early stage are more receptive and can tolerate it. Generally, impatient readers have already broken out with the author.    Brother, even if you are a TV series unit, you have not filmed twenty episodes in a row. The entire Yucheng chapter, playing oiran, playing Lao Xu, playing a general, being bullied continuously by the princess and may continue forever, and then inserting a little bit of Madam Yunu and other previous characters to remind everyone that the protagonist still has a lot of things waiting for the protagonist to do. I doubt the author is It's like I'm playing Red Dead Redemption 2 and choosing a chapter to live in retirement. I fish, play cards, hunt, become a bounty hunter, and ride around on horseback every day. But retirement is a matter of the second week of the game. How can there be such a thing in the first game?