Tang Dynasty: a Cook's Journey to the Imperial Guard

Why does the author's choice of words and sentences feel weird?

It's quite interesting that the protagonist's background knowledge cannot be solved in his life. Stop being a eunuch and come on✊

The writing is good, but it is a bit bland and has no ups and downs, and the daily writing is very piecemeal and unplanned. Everyone in the village is very busy, but the protagonist can call people around and act as NPCs with just one sentence. The plot advances very slowly, and the protagonist has been hiding his clumsy ideas and not showing his ambition. It is a bit similar to "Village Keeper of the Ming Dynasty" but not as natural. Part of the plot is a bit like "The Royal Physician of the Tang Dynasty" but not as warm as it. The author should try his best. It's a pity that I entered the limited-duty free store. I ordered 20 chapters for a small order. It's a long way to go. See you again when I'm destined.

A hammer here and there, a stick in the west, trivial and miscellaneous plots. Cut it.

I have seen Chapter 382. The characters in it such as Supervisor Sun, Xu Weiwei, Xu Erhu, etc. Are very vividly written, but to be honest, it is quite frustrating. For the Tang Dynasty, you are an anomaly. When you have no power to protect yourself, you have no brains to take out those things that transcend the times. What you did would not last that long in that place.

The character of Magistrate Zhou is written like a piece of shit. It was necessary to forcefully create difficulty, but the current treatment of the protagonist was not considered at all. It's completely a plot to subdue one's wits, and these chapters are a complete rip-off.

Thank you all for your criticism and corrections. I am a new author, I do have problems with my writing, and I am also learning from other excellent authors. This cannot be completed quickly in a day or two. I am also working hard to adjust and correct, and strive to write better and better. I'm sorry for the inconvenience caused to everyone's reading. To those who supported this book, I would like to sincerely thank you for your tolerance.

I'm not trolling, I'm just sharing my views I watch it intermittently, mainly because I get a little angry from time to time. I didn't think about it before, but I suddenly realized the reason Most people in this story are very self-centered and will take the initiative to do things that others may be dissatisfied with but they themselves feel, "Oh, I'm doing this for your own good." The same is true when Li Er imprisoned Xu Zhe in the palace. Maybe some of them did help the other party, but he never explained or explained, and just forced the other party to do something - and the most important thing is that I can't see why most things must be done like this Perhaps it is to describe a closer interpersonal relationship? But it's hard for me to feel any kindness from it. This behavior is too self-satisfying

It's so frustrating. I give you whatever I want and don't take any precautions. It's this kind of honest person who gets screwed.

Has the author finished writing and read it himself? Do you see the context and cohesion? It looks awkward, the plot is incoherent, there are no transitions, and things are wrong. It often appears that only one person appears, and in the next sentence another person appears inexplicably speaking. Did he appear in a flash? The author fell asleep during Chinese class at school? Look at this chapter and tell me how many people have raised these issues in the comment area and they really won't change it.

The first few chapters were well written, and I thought I had encountered a masterpiece. The more I read, the more awkward it becomes. It feels like the article is occasionally missing two sentences, which makes it awkward to read. The transition is too sudden. It can't really be written by AI, right? If not, it can only be said that the author's Chinese compositions may often fail.

What are the things that parents write short of?

The plot is quite interesting, but I don't know why the dialogue seems so tired. . .

My writing style is not good, my writing is messy

Isn't the marriage letter too hasty? I don't believe that Li Mo, as a father, doesn't know who his daughter likes. I don't believe that when writing a marriage letter, Li Mo won't read it carefully.

A Li Shimin is worth a try. I recently read a book about Li Shimin's self-explosion, and I think it's okay. Of course, it has to be Li Erfeng, who was in his prime and high-spirited in the early years. There are also the years in 1949 and some periods after, for example, 1950 and 2008. Even if it is a parallel world, even if it is fake, I don't dare to bet. Traveling to these periods means carrying the expectations of the party and the people.

Personally, I think it would be unsightly to explain technology if it has anything to do with gods.

Author, can you give me the essence? !

Celebrate the New Year well, what's more, don't be like those loser book friends who can't go back to their hometown, so they know that they can't even feel the New Year when they use their mobile phones. It's better to stop directly during the first month of the year

The writing of the work is crisp and the plot is interesting. Like it 👍 and vote for it once a month.

This book is awesome, the writing is good, the style is humorous and concise. But the book reviews are not active enough, so it seems that the recommendations are not enough.

If you were writing a book full-time, you would update more, and don't pretend I didn't say it. . . .