Heavens: Huashan Should Be Prosperous, and Linghu Should Be Prosperous.

The author's characterization and logic are both good, but it seems to lack a main line. The protagonist has reached the third place in the world in this mixed martial arts world, but there is nothing that the protagonist must do. The whole thing seems to be doing nothing. Judging from the speed of the first level to the second level, the third level is not far away. After that, it will be invincible in the world. The key is only a few thousand words, which involves a question. Change the world map, which is the bad person mentioned in the introduction? But this will add another question. Will the overall combat power of the world of bad people be higher than the current world? How much higher? If the world were to change, would we be defeated or would we continue to be invincible? If it is deflated, it will undoubtedly be a huge poisonous point. If it continues to be invincible, what kind of world will it be? The advantages of this book are obvious. Except for Ren Yingying, the protagonist who acts decisively, survives for a few more chapters, the other villains basically die when they show up, and rarely survive beyond the second chapter. The characters act logically, there is no villain that appears out of nowhere, and there is no clichéd plot like beating a child and becoming an old man. The disadvantage is that the main line is not clear? Or maybe not at all? The protagonist's strength expands too quickly, and the world view setting is relatively messy. Even an old bookworm like me felt confused while watching it. To summarize, there are no poison points so far, but because of the world view setting, I feel that there will be a classic deus ex machina plot of invincibility and enemies coming from the sky later. Let's see how the author solves the problem. I wish you good results!

Everyone is so disgusted with Linghu Chong, if it were a card game draw round. It's no problem to use it as an NPC It's no problem to use it as a disposable human shield I don't even ask if it's a summoned beast You're welcome to Linghu Chong. The title of the book is already on sale I don't know anything about martial arts. You don't understand how to level up and fight monsters It's useless even if you change 10,000 maps.

As long as you kill Tian Boguang's Xiaoao colleagues, at least your three views will be fine.

Linghu Chong, he is not a normal person. Who can call a normal person and a thief a brother?

Yue Buqun's goal is to regain the Huashan Sect. As long as you don't block his goal, he will not mess with you. If you can even help him achieve this goal, he will protect you. This is his core interest. As for Yue Buqun's methods, they are just to achieve his goal. If he has no other choice, he will teach his disciples to take their time (guaranteed plan). If there are other opportunities to achieve it quickly, he will naturally do it. As for calling him a hypocrite? The reputation he spreads for his chivalry and righteousness is for the Huashan Sect. Only with IP and traffic can outstanding talents join.

Defying nature and reborn, he can't beat Dongfang Bubai in one attack

Huashan Linghu I feel that it is more useful for Lao Yue to raise a dog than to raise Linghu Chong.

There is no book in Zongwu that won't collapse. I hope the author will work hard.

The writing is good, and the plot is pretty good as well. Judging from Sha Tian Boguang and the Beggar Gang, the author's views are quite right! But the Dragon Guard Villa suddenly appeared in Swordsman, so don't write about mixed martial arts! ! It's a mess, especially since Jin Yong's world has its heritage! All mixed martial arts are in chaos!

The first world is the Ming Dynasty consisting of Swordsman, The Best in the World, Flying Swords of Dragon Gate, The Laughter of the Medical Hall, Dream of Red Mansions, Sword Rain, Jinyiwei, and Xiuchundao. The second world is composed of bad people.

Time travel and change bodies at a time. It's 2025. Are you still doing this?

No, I can't stand it. It's too logical to write about mixed martial arts.

Using the name of mixed martial arts to strengthen others, I take my time and am not in a hurry. I say that I am the third best in the world "on the surface", but in fact I haven't even killed a small book, I have killed so many people, how can I not write down this person? Just like those brain beach protagonists who have an experience value system, but you can't see whether the experience has increased or not? We all knew beheading before, but this is where we lose our wits.

The writing is quite good, but Linghu Chong seems a bit alienated no matter how you look at it, as if he was Yu Xiaogang and Tang San in Douluo Dalu.

I found out that I like Linghu Chong's cutie. Whenever I see someone saying bad things about Linghu Chong, I will attribute it to him that he is trying to wash Yue Buqun? What kind of brain circuits do they have? Still can't find the words to refute the accusation?

It's still awkward to watch. The plot of "Swordsman" relied on Rama's corpse for a long time! You can definitely come one world at a time! You can travel through time and become different people, even pig's trotters and supporting characters.

Swordsman, Sword Rain, Dragon Gate Inn, Medical Museum Swordsman

Isn't this iron-courage god a bit abstract? How many years ago, the iron gall god Hou was mastered in martial arts and was beaten by Dongfang Bubai. His injuries are still not healed. Dongfang Bubai went one step further. The protagonist and Dongfang Bubai were equally matched. They could at least fight for a whole day, but in the end, he beat the injured monkey and let him run away? This is a bit disgusting to you, right? The protagonist is stronger than when he fought Dongfang Bubai, and he can still run away. Didn't you just slap him to death when you fought Dongfang Bubai? Did all the improvement go to 🐶?

Ren Yingying is so annoying when written by the author, but if you write it like this, why don't you kill her and keep her for the New Year?

The word count of "Malicious Water" has been grinding away since it was released. It is a "Huashan Sword", and it is not ready for dozens of chapters, and it is procrastinating.

Except for the ones by Zhao Zhijing and Song Qingshu, I can't read any other Wu Zongwen.

Why am I so annoyed by Linghu Chong? Why do you have to travel through time with the protagonist? Can't you create an original character? Is it because it's easy to write? Can I directly write the original plot?

It's boring to say that all the gods come up and use all kinds of martial arts.

Zhu Xian is good, but I really can't catch up with Zong Wu.

(¬_¬)Why don't you count the attacks on yourself...

Come on, Ma Liu's update

If the hook is too big, it won't be interesting to look at. It's tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

It's good to keep it this way. Only when you have your own writing style can you stand out! After all, there are thousands of readers, and it is impossible to satisfy them all, so just take a scoop of them and it's good!

Is he the protagonist every time he travels through time? He cannot be an NPC passerby or an ordinary disciple.

The chapter on Zhu Xian will be updated soon, hurry up