Zhutian: Start from Shuangqi Town and Penetrate the Rivers and Lakes

Shuangqi Town has been dominated by brothel scholars for eternity

The protagonist is a time traveler and knows Yidaxian and Brother Hao in Shuangqi Town. However, later on when Zhao Wenzhuo heard about the Lianfeng Hao, he seemed completely unaware, as if he had never seen the movie Broken Swordsman. I couldn't figure it out.

The writing is very good, but it looks a bit messy. 1. The protagonist is invincible when he appears, and has been experiencing various things since then without stopping. If it were a story, it would be okay, just like the Swordsman in Double Flag Town at the beginning, but the story behind the author is from at least two movie worlds. The plot of the world is disrupted and added to the original plot. Multiple world views overlap, and there are original and unknown things. It feels very confusing. 2. Another shortcoming is the arrangement of the plot. The protagonist is invincible at the beginning, and the golden finger is basically useless. The people you meet are either leading the way or sending them away. Damn it, the protagonist is in a state of always rushing and killing. This is okay, but the protagonist is invincible. The battle is basically over in one sentence, and it takes seconds to show up. It is very embarrassing. There is so much foreshadowing and the intensity of the rendering seems to be very high, but the result is bullshit. 3. Because there are original There are many things that I can't understand in the plot. The author didn't explain it in advance, so readers have to figure it out on their own. I read fan fiction just to use less brains, but I still have to figure it out🤣. It requires readers to use their brains extra, and the reading experience is not smooth. It means there are problems with the plot, at least there are big problems with the integration of the world.

Something about Rongren and the like, I felt like I didn't know what it was about. I almost watched it at a glance.

It's pretty good, but I don't know why. I feel so tired watching it.

As the title says, half of the book in the brothel becomes the king and the ancestor, which can only be said to be a good review. The Nth day when I miss the scholar, scholar, if you have anything to ask me, I would like to ask you a dream...

Fortunately, the protagonist is not doing this for a woman. He is fighting an organized army of 5,000 people. Otherwise, the name of the first licking dog in the starting point will be on the title of this book.

Don't have plots like war in the early stage. Neither your abilities nor the plot are satisfactory.

Don't write about The Legend of Heaven and the Dragon Slayer, The Legend of the Condor Heroes, etc. It'll make you vomit after reading it.

Why not take in the original heroine? For example, good girl 🤭

So far, the writing is very good, both in terms of plot and protagonist.

It's well written, but there are too many chapter reviews that are off-putting. I am often picky and picky, which greatly reduces my impression.

It's over. I asked for leave, and it was only for two days. I have seen too many eunuchs take leave. . . .

The author is originally an original writer, and this is his first time writing a fanfic. Sometimes in the book, for the sake of plot, the protagonist will not understand some of the original works. If you don't like it, please be careful.

Not bad, these movies and TV series are all very impressive and have a strong sense of immersion 👍

This beginning sounds familiar to you. I saw a book about Astrology that also begins with "Double Flag Town Drinking the Broken Swordsman" before.

The writing is good. I plan to write a novel recently. Can I plagiarize it?😃

I didn't expect that this book would be integrated together.

As the title suggests, readers who keep books can also help me to catch up on the reading. Thank you very much!

I haven't looked yet, is it sewn?

Just like the title, I don't know what your updated pictures are about. With just this few words every day, I can't even finish a small plot. It's so fragmented that I feel like drinking from the northwest after reading it.

No, since the author wrote a martial arts movie fan, why did he add so many scenes? Not to mention the tiredness of the viewers. If according to the author's logic, after the West Factory is defeated, the East Factory is defeated. After the East Factory is defeated, shouldn't the Jin Yiwei be on the scene? There should be border troops and then the ban on the army. After that, the emperor or the dynasty should be changed?

Let's write about a world that everyone is familiar with. In fact, not many people know about the Swordsman of Shuangqi Town.