Mortal: I, Wen Tianren, Just Want to Live Forever!

No, you really have to grab the bottle. There is no way to ascend to the spiritual world with resources in the mortal world. Even a few transformed gods in the human world, who are not geniuses among geniuses and are the pillars of major sects, enjoy the resources of one world, and they cannot ascend to the spiritual world. It would be even more terrifying to just barely make it to the spiritual world. The group of realms where the spirit world is located is a small group of realms that was isolated after the Great War in the Immortal Realm, making it more difficult to ascend. It becomes even more desperate when you reach the fairy world, and the bottle is the only hope for transcendence. It is unreasonable not to hang up or grab the bottle. It should be because there is no hope. How can you become an immortal? Travelers are not natives and know this kind of despair!

🙂 After reading the introduction, I have already finished reading this book. I understand everything without reading.

What you wrote is unreasonable, because you are all in the direction of anime, but fan fiction must refer to the original work. The original work is the son of Liu Dao, and he is the young master. Liu Dao only has one child, and it is too late to love him. How could he go to Ga? Do you think it's easy to have a child as a cultivator? It's not like your wife can remarry. She's already in the later stages of the Six Paths.

I hope you won't lick the old devil and cut off all his women. Don't talk about the reincarnation hall master. All the things you did to mess with Han Li. If reincarnation dares to pay attention to the past or present, I will help you to kill him.

I have no good skills in picking up girls, and I don't know how to use obscure vocabulary to describe things between men and women. This is a big taboo in writing harem novels. I suggest the author to study the fan novel next door, Zhe Tian Zi Huang.

Zi Ling is a broken shoe, does anyone really think of it as a treasure? Not as good as Yuan Yao's hair, Tianyin's body can help you overcome the disaster in the future, is the purple spirit useless? She would only accidentally reveal her true qualifications when she met Liuji, and then be captured by Liuji.

Station B will pull away at the critical moment, and it will be useless even if it gives you a chance!

I've read six fanfics, and the discussion forum is full of recommended writings. Can we make money together if we have money?

Hey, more like a turtle, eunuchs are too risky

You write one chapter a day and you write Han Li for several days in a row... What did you write? The protagonist?

I really can't understand the beginning! The maximum number of matches between Wen Tianren and Han Li is 55. And Han Li has a greater chance of winning with the Evil-Warding Thunder Bamboo Flying Sword, but the protagonist here is not very energetic. But it's just hard-wearing, so there's nothing to be said about it. Looking at it, I hooked my toes on the ground, danced and fell to the ground.

The latest chapters always feel very weak. The invincible protagonist kills everyone. Shocked, shocked, b shocked, c shocked, d. It feels like there is not much time to develop and he is close to invincible...

The old devil gave birth to a baby, and everyone was shocked.

I just like to see mortal fandoms where girls don't lick, but they are cool and have some brains. 😭😭 If you don't have a woman in your heart, it doesn't mean you don't have a woman around you. I would be happy to take them as a vase, otherwise it would be nothing to look at fanart pictures.

Author: Don't be a virgin. Don't be a licker. You must be decisive. Now that you have a harem, take in all the main women in it

It's so holy. A demonic monk is more holy than a righteous one.

Why are all the bad crotches covered? Fan Jingmei and Zhuo Ruting had already tasted their red lips in the original work, right? Zi Ling, you can still forcefully say that she emerged from the mud without being stained. There is no way that these two are still clean, right? That's ridiculous...

Author, please come back and update. There are many second-generation novels about mortals, but few of them are good ones. I really like yours. Wen Tianren also has many books on time travel, but the others are not as good as yours. Come back and update soon. I really like your novels. The anime has been updated. You should also come back and update. Authors should have a beginning and an end to their work.

Mortal is scheduled to be released on June 13~ The traffic of rising hot spots is not small. Lao Chen, come back and finish writing. What you promised yourself will have a beginning and an end.

The Gold-eating Insect, Xutian Cauldron, Silver Moon, and Yuan Yao are all gone. They are all great help~ The protagonist of the Gold-eating Insect can't afford it, but Yuan Yao is simply tailor-made for Wen Tianren. With that talent, wouldn't it be nice to take away that talent and form the Double Yao Sword Attendant with Yun Yao? Later, Yuan Yao can also help the protagonist overcome the calamity, and is more useful than Zi Ling. In addition to being beautiful and useless, Zi Ling is also a social butterfly.

However, there are too many irrelevant women, let's see how the author handles them. I personally like the style, that is, the protagonist has a woman or not, and is not dragged down by women, but does not shy away from sexual matters between men and women. At the same time, women have various methods, rather than being so fresh and pure in love. After reading a few other fanfics, either the author acts like he has never seen a woman before and doesn't know how to write emotional scenes. The protagonist stutters when he sees a woman. If you don't know how to write, just don't write, even if you are alone.

I've never been shocked before, give me a gold.

I recommend a new book written by a mortal fan. Don't blame me, I wish you a flood of literary thoughts and this book will be a big hit. Mortal: I am the young master of Qianhuan Sect. The setting is wonderful and I guarantee the completion of the book. I beg all fellow Taoists to collect it and read it. Investment in new books is welcome.

A little more dark wind