Journey to the West: Starting from the Tongtian River Turtle

Have you ever been a turtle? Just write turtle, take it for granted

Speaking of which, if this old turtle hadn't tricked Tang Seng and his disciples, maybe this old turtle would have become a real person.

I feel there is no need to magnify the conflicts in the Yan family. Whoever heads the family always provokes the official body, and there are senior officials directly leading it. Besides, take a step back, what you wrote is that the Yan family is trying to get rid of the main character's official status. Isn't it true that you are trying to get rid of the face of Mr. Shui Dexing? Not long after the person you directly elected took office, he became incapable of resigning. What does your leader think of you? You don't have the ability to recognize people by their own merits? Is your colleague using this to tease you? If you want to write about ignorant monsters stamping out, it's okay, but if you want to write about a big family doing this, it's unreasonable. Can you have a family if you can do this?

The realm is a bit confusing and unclear.

Newbies, please collect and read. If there are any toxic points, please directly explain the reasons and point them out 🙂 It is difficult to modify the existing plot, but I will definitely pay attention to the subsequent plots.

If you really want to write something contradictory, you might as well take the initiative to cooperate with the Yan family to solve the problem after the impact, and provide compensation to ease the relationship. Use the lineage in question as a name for the protagonist. Writing this way can bring things back to life and advance the plot.

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