Dou Po: Copy the Entry and Start with the Blood of the Sky-Devouring Python

He must be a novice author. There are too many modern jokes in the dialogue, just like the novice novels from ten years ago. It would be much better if these were removed and replaced with normal dialogues. I can't stand them when reading novels. It's okay to talk like this between classmates who write urban novels, but you are still a snake in this fantasy novel 😂

This book is extremely long-winded, and more than half of the plot is nonsense.

The eighth picture doesn't say gs? In what age are you still writing like this? Let her face Dou Sheng. Do you think she dares to say what she wants?

After reading thirty chapters, I realized that in terms of length, Cauliflower Snake might be the heroine. She has more pages than Queen Medusa, which is a shame.

Whenever he has something to do, he goes to Caihua Snake. How much does the protagonist lack talent? He goes to Caihua Snake whenever he has time. He also said that his goal is Douqi Continent, which even the little snake tribe cannot understand. He went to look for the Cauliflower Snake every three days. He didn't spend as much time practicing fighting skills as he did looking for the Cauliflower Snake. As a result, the protagonist relied heavily on the Cauliflower Snake. Those who didn't know better thought that the Cauliflower Snake was the heroine.

It's a lot of nonsense, sometimes two or three chapters in a row are all nonsense, can you please go through the plot a little bit? Can't we write less about the cauliflower snake? The protagonist doesn't practice well and goes looking for the cauliflower snake every day. Those who don't know better think that the cauliflower snake is the heroine and Medusa is an outsider.

It would be better to kill that black snake. Why do you want to have sex with the heroine and keep him? Diaoyingren

I remember that Fenjue is not an advanced skill. It requires constant absorption of strange fire to evolve, and there is no good person to guide it. The risk is too great.

First of all, I have changed the part about integrating the colorful sky-swallowing python's fighting spirit and fuzzyness. Secondly, everyone has reported that the writing is long-winded, and I am slowly adjusting it. Finally, if there is anything bad about the author in the future, everyone can mention it here. As long as it is right, it will be accepted. I just hope that everyone will not be too angry or make extreme remarks. If there are mistakes, we can correct them. It is not easy for the author to write a book, so I hope you will understand. Thank you.

Nice idea, but a bit verbose

It's a bit disgusting, the main character is too licking a dog.

It can only be said that the protagonist has been showing off his IQ, and he is also a eunuch protagonist.

I remember that snakes have two chirpers. As for which one to use, this is the difference between left-handed and right-handed people. 🙂

Brothers who like Dou Po, do you like martial arts? A new work by a newbie, a martial arts fan, come and review it.

It feels like it was written by AI, but I don't want to read it.

Duo Duo Update This book has a good angle and is very interesting.

You might as well stop writing it and update it every one or two days, and then update it every other day or two. You are wasting your time on this book.