I Can Travel Through Battle Through the Heavens, Then Return to Earth and Show Off

The writing of the Earth story is too awkward. How can a talented fighter pretend to be a god in such a hurry? Moreover, modern people speak too politely, half-colloquial and half-classical Chinese. There are only about thirty chapters. The conflict is too crowded. It's obviously good to just give it a try. Everyone knows how to develop properly. Everyone knows the wretched development. The result is so wasteful. There are more than one stolen gun, there are assault rifles, not to mention the club, the country is probably going to explode, but the fighting spirit stage is very difficult, because it is just the beginning, so the meridians are very fragile, the mirror is strengthened, and it can be understood quickly, but the third stage only took a few hours, but the next seven stages took a week, there are b Ug, but even if you look at seven levels a week, one star from Dou Shi to Dou Master for one month is definitely enough. Take Xiao Yan for example. He is very talented. He practiced Qi at the age of 4 and became a Dou Shi at 11 years old. Then he started to train from the third level at the age of 15, a Dou Shi at 16 years old, a Dou Master at 17 years old, a great Dou Master at the age of 18. There is no need to talk about the road to cheating after reaching 8 stars. What I mean by this is that Xiao Yan also rebuilt, so his meridians must be able to withstand it, so it took him a year to rebuild the seventh level, and it also took him a year to become a Dou Shi. In the same way, it took the protagonist a week to become a Dou Master. How long did it take for him to become a Dou Master? It lasted for a month, but at that time, Xiao Yan was a low-level Huang-level martial artist, the worst, and the protagonist was a Xuan-level one. It seems that one month is too much, unless the author feels that the leveling is too fast (a taboo in fan fiction), and he is unhappy. The protagonist is 25, and Xiao Yan is 25 Dou Zun. Therefore, the protagonist should correct his mentality and focus on cultivation, supplemented by refining medicine, and other things. Secondly, Xuan level skills are enough to fight the emperor. There are no earth level skills in the novice empire. There must be no earth level skills. The earth level fighting skills may be available but the skills are definitely not available. With the current cultivation speed, it is even possible to fight spirits in a year. In the early stage, you should still be stubborn. If you can't hold it in, go to Goulan. Dou Po is feudal, and women with fighting spirit are definitely better looking and better in shape than those on earth.

What should I say? Unless you have the power to subvert everything in the world, it's better not to be exposed. It's not ten years ago now, and Long Aotian flow is not very popular now. If you write cool articles, then just pretend that I didn't tell you. Moreover, people who read novels now are more educated than those ten years ago. No one wants to insult their IQ when reading novels. Whether the protagonist is selfish or a saint, as long as he doesn't flaunt himself as righteous or double-standard, I think it's OK. What I hate the most are those people who talk so much about benevolence, justice and morality, and say one thing clearly and another behind the scenes. Either you have your own bottom line, or you have no bottom line. When embarking on the extraordinary path, you must be mentally prepared and aware of death. Those who kill will always be killed.

With the time traveler Xiao Yan here, the protagonist went to Doupo to bring daily necessities and became poisonous.

Don't always write about the protagonist's scandalous side. What you should know is the human nature of ordinary people who want to write about the path to transcendence. And your golden finger is an infinite storage. It wouldn't be difficult to find an inaccessible place on Earth to store things.

How can I get you to add more updates?

The previous plot is okay, and the real world and the fighting world are well grasped. I let myself go as soon as I put it on the shelves, got the Phoenix inheritance, and then accepted all the women, just like a dog in heat. As a disciple of the Yunlan Sect, don't you know that the guardian of the Soul Palace is in the back mountain and Yunshan.

Author, you should just start writing it as a fighting saint. Even if you treat Xiao Yan as a fellow countryman and take care of him and protect him, that's okay. If you write like this, you will make the protagonist look like a villain.

Author boss, won't Xiao Xun'er accept it?

Two updates a day is not enough, you know 😁

Let me talk about some of my feelings after seeing it. Generally speaking, it is well written. There are indeed a lot of poisonous points at the beginning. I quite like to read novels about my own approach. I hope there will be more plot in the Earth movie, and it would be better for the protagonist to push the Earth into a cultivation civilization.