I Can Travel Through Battle Through the Heavens, Then Return to Earth and Show Off
能穿梭斗破的我，回地球显圣
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 460k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- English
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139Chapters
400Recommendations
3.4kFans
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The writing on Earth is so awkward. Why rush into acting like a god when you're only a beginner? Also, the modern characters speak too formally, a mix of vernacular and classical Chinese. And with only about thirty chapters, the conflicts are too rushed.
How should I put it? Unless you possess the power to overturn everything in the world, it's best not to reveal yourself. It's not ten years ago anymore; the "overpowered protagonist" trope isn't as popular now. If you're into wish-fulfillment novels, then disregard what I said.
With the transmigrator Xiao Yan around, the protagonist bringing daily necessities to Doupo is practically poison.
Also, stop focusing solely on the protagonist's shameful side; what I really want to portray is the humanity of an ordinary person on the path to transcendence. And your cheat ability is practically an infinite storage vault; finding a secluded spot on Earth to store things shouldn't be difficult, right?
How can I get you to update more chapters?
The initial plot was alright, and the balance between the real world and the Battle Through the Heavens world was well-handled. However, once it was released, it went completely off the rails. He obtained the Phoenix Inheritance and then started taking in every woman he could find, like a dog in heat. He even became a disciple of the Yunlan Sect—didn't he know that the Soul Hall Protector was having a homosexual relationship with Yunshan in the back mountains?
Author, you should have started by making Xiao Yan a Dou Sheng (Battle Saint). Even if you treated Xiao Yan like a fellow townsman and took care of him, that would have been fine. The way you've written it, neither here nor there, makes the protagonist seem like a villain.
Author, won't Xiao Xun'er accept this?
Two updates a day isn't enough, you know what I mean. 😁
Here are some of my thoughts so far. Overall, it's well-written. There were definitely a few flaws in the beginning, but I quite enjoy reading novels with a protagonist who believes in the power of individuality. I hope there will be more Earth-themed content, ideally with the protagonist driving Earth towards a cultivation civilization.