American TV's Toughest Cop: Starting by Killing My Way Through Wrong Turn

It's a pity to throw it away if it's tasteless. It's so damn ink-stained. The whole background or scene description of the film.

Heather Tragnetti The movies "Texas Chainsaw Massacre 3D" and "Baywatch" integrate human society. "True Detective" is tentatively scheduled in the outline, and I haven't found a good entry point for the plot yet. If you have suggestions, you can share them here. Nora Bing Jane Banner Mary Sebastian Rachel

Heather, "Texas Chainsaw Massacre 3D" and "Baywatch", character fusion, twin sister Lisa, key American TV series "True Detective" and "Hot Detective".

It's not that you can't write good articles if you rely on AI. The problem is that AI can't grasp the key points and likes to pile on details and descriptions. This aspect requires the author to polish and adjust. It is recommended that after the AI ​​is generated, the author should polish it more, otherwise it will be a mindless hydrology, with a clear soup and little water, and an incoherent plot. The above is only my personal opinion.

If you want justice, you can hunt down the bad guys If you want to deal with that mundane gang leader, just use Barrett I didn't know what the author was going to write at first, but the protagonist in Chapter 49 said that he couldn't stand the wits of the original characters, and he wanted to make things develop for the better. Does that mean he has to follow the plot? You have a basic body of steel, superb marksmanship, storage space, a super high IQ, and the ability to become stronger by killing enemies, but you just want to play house in a small town?

The beginning is stunning, with violent gun battles and eye-catching moments. After entering Banshee Town, the long descriptions of food, cooking, wine, house layout and character emotions were too procrastinating. Those who are impatient will quickly lose interest in reading.

There are too many useless details, like a short composition composed of countless small details piled up with gorgeous words. A few descriptions of expressions, driving, environment, and actions are enough. If you read too much, it will be a bit watery, and it has no effect on promoting the plot, and it also arouses readers' disgust.

I quite like the writing style and it's well written, but it's too flat and the author's pacing needs to be improved. The fatal twist was completed in the first ten chapters, but after more than seventy chapters, I still don't feel that there is any progress in the plot. Apart from recruiting a few female protagonists, there are no real actions. It seems that I am leisurely watching a movie every day. This operation is also very confusing. Is it his pleasure to stand next to a known plot and witness it with his own eyes? But those plots are not special famous scenes. I don't know if the author has read Carp's Banshee Town. You can check it out for reference. His writing style is average, but the pace seems comfortable. He does not talk too much and just does it. The plot is linked one after another. Isn't this why you watch American TV series? If the plot is slow, you can also choose to write the limited plot with passion and increase the participation of the protagonist. At least it should be a little satisfying. Now the plot is not rich enough to keep up with the protagonist's character, which makes the protagonist's character a bit hollow, which makes people feel that the literary youth and middle-class taste are a bit too much. The Godfather image is written in an American variety show, which is actually not pleasing. The unique taste of blood and fire in the American variety show is overshadowed, and the excitement is lost. If this continues, it will easily develop into an American variety show, a bulldozer, and a daily life of literary youths. It is recommended to consider how to balance it early. Come on!

Deborah/Gloria Harper

Jesse Dawson Rebecca Bowman Nora Runcid West Vaughan Kelly Deborah, Harper Integration of characters from the movie "Once Upon a Time in America" and "Point of Passion"