An Ordinary Man Becomes Invincible, Starting with Discipling Under Lei Wanhe
凡人从拜师雷万鹤开始无敌
- Status
- Completed
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- 909k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Subgenre
- Classical Xianxia
- Updated
- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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386Chapters
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There is no Nangong Wan, and harem readers basically don't read it, so there is no point in writing about harem flow. I have read several books with good writing, but there is no Nangong Wan. Readers don't like to read it, and the data is not good, especially after it was put on the shelves, they all ran away. Are you leaving this to Han Li? Or what to say. The protagonist is either undead or underperformed, has few resources and is slow to upgrade. The protagonist has a hard time practicing and cannot support the harem. It is easy to become a eunuch, and it is easy to become a waste cultivation stream. Looking at the comments and content, you still want to take Han Li to Chaotic Star Sea. If you write it, forget about the results of your book. This thing is already outdated. Befriend Han Li, no Nangong Wan, the protagonist is Wu Gua or Gua Xiao This is basically a dog-licking old slave style of writing. Author, your readership is too small, so it is only suitable for self-pleasure. I plan to watch it for a month to see the situation. Author, if you really write Lao Nu Liu, then everyone will have no choice but to run away.
I'm curious, forget about the Dayan Jue, what will Han Li do without the teleportation array? If Han Li didn't go to Chaos Xinghai, he would still be Han Li, and he would still be a mortal. Regardless of the interference ability of Taoist ancestors or historical revision, the current plot seems to be developed in place of Han Li's plot. In this way, it is highly consistent with the original work. I suggest you reset or patch it so that Han Li can go to the Sea of Chaos Stars normally, or go together with two people, and his own main line should not interfere. The two lines can intersect but not overlap. But if you write it like this, go to the Sea of Chaos Stars, avoid some pitfalls, and repeat Han Li's chance plot. I don't think it is interesting. Isn't he just Han Li in disguise? If you grab some small opportunities, just grab them. I don't think you should change the big events. Han Li will show up when he should. The worst you can do is not write his role. What's more, what you wrote is very out of place and cannot be substituted. It's too fast. Spring and Autumn's writing style is all in one stroke. It feels like just watching a horse and watching the light. It's almost finished before dozens of chapters are published. It's not satisfying to write like this.
You also created some female concubines that I have never heard of before. You are trying to throw yourself into the street. There are so many women in the original book that I can't count them on one hand. Author, you succeeded in shocking me.
I came across your book again, and I remembered that you asked me before. I didn't expect you to be able to write for so long. It's really fate. I'll give you all my monthly tickets at the end of the month. I hope the author will work hard and his writing will get better and better.
It would be a pity for Nangong Wan not to grab it! A daughter from the Chen family and a daughter from the Nie family three times in number are not as good as one Nangong Wan. Emperor Ruyan didn't just say that! Xin Ruyin also released it! Then there are only Yuanyao Ziling and Ling Yuling! Yuan Yao still has to deal with the plot, whether to let his sister Yanli die or to get rid of her in advance. The two sisters are like conjoined twins like Xin Ruyin's maid Xiaomei!
Violating the basic settings of mortals and creating a thunder and fire root, there is no need to continue watching.
Just look at the introduction and you'll know it's a piece of cake.
At first glance, this is a brainless stallion story, and it's an author who has never read the original work.
The point of the mortal fandom is to find a new way to ask about immortality, not to make up for regrets nonsense, nor to love and love between men and women.
The pacing is okay so far, at least it seems to be written seriously. Some settings are not very pleasing, but it doesn't matter. If you can keep writing, don't just follow the original text and you will already surpass 90% of the mortals. I've read too many Chapter 60 of Going to the Sea of Chaos Stars
It feels like it's written in one stroke